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6th March 2007, 01:37 AM
Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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6th March 2007, 10:34 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sakhi1909
Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
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ek umda kalam sakhi jii
ase hi likhte rahiyega
shukriya
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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6th March 2007, 10:36 AM
hi sakhi ji
how r u?
maaf karna kuch din ke liye nahi aa saka,
aaj aapki ye rachna padh ke dil ko chain mila hai, dost aapki ye rachna mein aapne apne dilbar ko ek paigam bheja hai ki na to tum wafadar ho na to tum bewafa, ye kaisa dard aapne apni rachna mein jalka diya ki bar baar padhne ko dil karta hai,
dost hum aapka tah-e-dil se sukhriya karte hai
ese hi mehfil sajate rahna
aapka dost
Merul
Quote:
Originally Posted by sakhi1909
Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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Hi -
6th March 2007, 04:35 PM
Hi,
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
kya likhti hay aap dil ko apna sa lagta hay.
apna khayal rakhe.
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6th March 2007, 06:57 PM
sakhi jee namskaar:
bahot hi umda kosisH rahi aapki aur se..lazfoN ko baRe accHe se pesH kiye haiN aapne
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
apna khayal rakheN aur khusH raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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7th March 2007, 11:09 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sakhi1909
Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
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sakhi ji namaskaar aapki tehreer bhut dilfrabe laggi...har ehsaas umda hai or lafzon ko bhi bakhubi istemaal kiya hai aapne.....meri daad hazir hai......yun hii likhti rahain......ye share mujhe acha lagga.....
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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8th March 2007, 07:17 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sakhi1909
Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
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Waah sakhi ji kya bat hai...bahoot khoob...Zehen maiN kya hai..bharpoor awaaz lagatihai aapki tehreer.....
Apni aankhoN main kiska sapna saza rakha hai dost
na dekho tum kabhi idher udher baithha tire sirhaane.
Harash
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20th March 2007, 11:33 PM
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ek umda kalam sakhi jii
ase hi likhte rahiyega
shukriya
dilip
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dilip ji maaf karna kaphi din ho gaye reply na de saki...
shukriya dost pasand karne ke liye..
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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20th March 2007, 11:56 PM
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Originally Posted by Merul
hi sakhi ji
how r u?
maaf karna kuch din ke liye nahi aa saka,
aaj aapki ye rachna padh ke dil ko chain mila hai, dost aapki ye rachna mein aapne apne dilbar ko ek paigam bheja hai ki na to tum wafadar ho na to tum bewafa, ye kaisa dard aapne apni rachna mein jalka diya ki bar baar padhne ko dil karta hai,
dost hum aapka tah-e-dil se sukhriya karte hai
ese hi mehfil sajate rahna
aapka dost
Merul
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ab mujhe maaf karna tum kyun ki mein na aa saki jaldi reply dene
apka shukriya jo pasand kiya aur padke chain mila apko to mujhe khushi hui dost.
ham mahfil sazaynge aap sath dene aa jana dj banke ok
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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21st March 2007, 12:15 AM
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Originally Posted by jayraj143
Hi,
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
kya likhti hay aap dil ko apna sa lagta hay.
apna khayal rakhe.
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sorry jay for late reply
shukriya dost sath dene aur pasand karne ke liye
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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21st March 2007, 12:31 AM
As usual Nicely written Sakhi Ji.
Kaun kiska hota hei
vehem hei, ek dhokha hei
tanha aaye tanha chale jayenge
kisko kisne roka hei
Regards
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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21st March 2007, 12:31 PM
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
bahut bahut dard bhara hai in paktiyon me
aur bahut aches se ukera hai apni bhavnao ko
aise hi likte rahiye ga
reena
aksar yaad karte hain un guzre hue lamho ko
aksar yaad karte hain un tere diye zakmhon ko
kuch na baaki bacha hai jeevan mein hamaare
jo jeene ko saathi tu na raha
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21st March 2007, 12:34 PM
very nice Dard bhi kabhi itna sundar ho sakta he ye kallam se mehsus kiya Dad kubul kijiye
There are many things in your life that will catch your eye but only a few will catch your heart....pursue those
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21st March 2007, 10:04 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sakhi1909
Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
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Sakhi ji humara salam kabol kijiye,
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey,
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane.
bahut hi nice likha hai aapne aapki rachna achee lagi.
mujhe aage bhi aapka intezar rahega.
is umeed ke saath ijazat chahta hun
aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahe.
take care
SHAAN
Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah.
........Shaan......
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23rd March 2007, 10:26 AM
hi sakhi
Bahut khub.......
sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane
Bahut Achha hai....
Unke jaane ke baad jab socha yeh hamne,
Kya yehi hai sila unse dil lagaane ka,
Phir yeh samjha ke apna hi dil bewafa hai,
Jisko ab bhi hai intezaar unke laut aane ka,
Par, na bichayenge ab nazrein unki raahon mein ham,
Ab mil gya hai hamko raasta maikhane ka,
Nahi chahiye ab koi saathi hamein,
Ab to waqt hai mehfilon se utth jaane ka
Uth chukka hai yakeen khud se hi hamara,
Mat rakhna vishwaas ham pe kisi ko apnane ka
Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh
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29th March 2007, 01:11 AM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
sakhi jee namskaar:
bahot hi umda kosisH rahi aapki aur se..lazfoN ko baRe accHe se pesH kiye haiN aapne
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
apna khayal rakheN aur khusH raheN
duaoN ke sath ijaazaT
aapka dost
dhaval
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shukriya dhval ji
apne pada aur saraha ,,,hamesha apka hoshla badana likhne ka hoshla deta hai dost..
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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29th March 2007, 11:43 AM
hi shakhi ji
to aap aaye jarur, ab hum dono saman ho gaye kyuki mein bhi reply dene mien late ho gaya,
aur ha sakhi ji aage se dhayan rahe dj ki bat yaha nahi.
ok
take care
milte rehna
aapka dost
Merul
Quote:
Originally Posted by sakhi1909
ab mujhe maaf karna tum kyun ki mein na aa saki jaldi reply dene
apka shukriya jo pasand kiya aur padke chain mila apko to mujhe khushi hui dost.
ham mahfil sazaynge aap sath dene aa jana dj banke ok
sakhi
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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1st April 2007, 12:48 AM
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Originally Posted by rajveeer
sakhi ji namaskaar aapki tehreer bhut dilfrabe laggi...har ehsaas umda hai or lafzon ko bhi bakhubi istemaal kiya hai aapne.....meri daad hazir hai......yun hii likhti rahain......ye share mujhe acha lagga.....
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
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raj ji namste
bahut bahut shukriya dost sarahne ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye...
yuhi sath dete rahna
ehsaas na ho to likhna mushkil hota hai na...???
ehsaas banaye rakhiye
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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1st April 2007, 10:16 AM
Hmmmmm... Sakhi ji,
Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai... daad kubool kijiyega... apna khayaal rakhiyega...
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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3rd April 2007, 09:20 PM
AADAB SAKHI JI,
KAISI HAIN AAP?
MASHA ALLAH BOHOT KHOOB,
bohot hi pyari nazm likhi hai aapne
wese to aap hamesha hi behtarin si koshishe hum sab ke samne rakhti hain,
per is nazm ke liye,,,dilse nikli daad kabul kijiye,
Ana khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ
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SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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Apki dost
Sweet HASSONI,
( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi )
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SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
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23rd April 2007, 12:36 AM
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Originally Posted by Harash Mahajan
Waah sakhi ji kya bat hai...bahoot khoob...Zehen maiN kya hai..bharpoor awaaz lagatihai aapki tehreer.....
Apni aankhoN main kiska sapna saza rakha hai dost
na dekho tum kabhi idher udher baithha tire sirhaane.
Harash
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harash ji
maafi chahti hun kinhi karno se itna late reply de rahi hun mein,
shukriya meri tahreer ko pasand karne ke liye.
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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23rd April 2007, 12:38 AM
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Originally Posted by Dard-e-sush
As usual Nicely written Sakhi Ji.
Kaun kiska hota hei
vehem hei, ek dhokha hei
tanha aaye tanha chale jayenge
kisko kisne roka hei
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sabse pahle maafi dena ok late reply jo hai
shukriya apko acha laga mera likha...
Kaun kiska hota hei
vehem hei, ek dhokha hei
tanha aaye tanha chale jayenge
kisko kisne roka hei
bahut khub likha hai apne realy true
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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23rd April 2007, 12:42 AM
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Originally Posted by reena
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
bahut bahut dard bhara hai in paktiyon me
aur bahut aches se ukera hai apni bhavnao ko
aise hi likte rahiye ga
reena
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reena ji maafi chahti hun kaphi dino baad rely diya iske liye
shukriya apko pasand aaya
sakhi love
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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23rd April 2007, 12:45 AM
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very nice Dard bhi kabhi itna sundar ho sakta he ye kallam se mehsus kiya Dad kubul kijiye
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ilesh shah ji
maafi chahti hun kinahi karno se itna late reply de rahi hun mein,
shukriya apne dard mein bhi sundarta jo dekh lee hai....apko ye mahsoos hua to kya baat hai...rahi apki daad ki baat to sir ankho pe hai apki daad to.
yuhi dard ko samjhne aate rahna
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
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23rd April 2007, 08:22 PM
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Originally Posted by sakhi1909
Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
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Pyari Sakhi..
Tumhe padhte hue mujhe takreeban 4 saal ho gaye hain.. lekin aaj bhi tumhari
har rachna me vahi dard nazar aata..
Aaj to tumne bas rulla hi diya..
Dua karungi ki khushiyan tumhare naseeb me jald hi aayein.. aur phir ek khushi bhari rachna bhi padhne ko mille..
Apna khayal rakho.. aur humesha khush raho..
Tumhari Dost..
~Priya
"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."
~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~
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24th April 2007, 01:26 PM
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Originally Posted by sakhi1909
Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
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dear sakhi....gazal ke ahsaas bahut acchey lagge...last wala sher dil ko chu gaya...!
teri didi
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd May 2007, 10:06 PM
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Originally Posted by TariqAhmadAzmi
Sakhi ji humara salam kabol kijiye,
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey,
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane.
bahut hi nice likha hai aapne aapki rachna achee lagi.
mujhe aage bhi aapka intezar rahega.
is umeed ke saath ijazat chahta hun
aap hamesha hanste or muskurate rahe.
take care
SHAAN
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apke alfaz dene ke liye shukriya shaan ji
yuhi sath dena
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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4th May 2007, 01:44 AM
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hi sakhi
Bahut khub.......
sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane
Bahut Achha hai....
Unke jaane ke baad jab socha yeh hamne,
Kya yehi hai sila unse dil lagaane ka,
Phir yeh samjha ke apna hi dil bewafa hai,
Jisko ab bhi hai intezaar unke laut aane ka,
Par, na bichayenge ab nazrein unki raahon mein ham,
Ab mil gya hai hamko raasta maikhane ka,
Nahi chahiye ab koi saathi hamein,
Ab to waqt hai mehfilon se utth jaane ka
Uth chukka hai yakeen khud se hi hamara,
Mat rakhna vishwaas ham pe kisi ko apnane ka
Thanx & Regards
Jasdeep Singh
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jasdeep ji shukriya
apko pada acha laga
yuhi sath dena dost sakhi ka
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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7th May 2007, 10:06 AM
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hi shakhi ji
to aap aaye jarur, ab hum dono saman ho gaye kyuki mein bhi reply dene mien late ho gaya,
aur ha sakhi ji aage se dhayan rahe dj ki bat yaha nahi.
ok
take care
milte rehna
aapka dost
Merul
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merul ji
chalo aap jaisa kah rahe ho vaisa hi karungi ok
keeps smile on ur face
and tc
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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7th May 2007, 10:12 AM
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Originally Posted by Pulkit_gupta
Hmmmmm... Sakhi ji,
Bahut hi khoobsurat ghazal hai... daad kubool kijiyega... apna khayaal rakhiyega...
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hi pul dear
shukriya gazal ko pasand kiya ...apki daad ham kubul na kare yaisa to nahi hai dear..sir ankho pe lee daad..
khush rahna
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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7th May 2007, 10:19 AM
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Originally Posted by munfairy
AADAB SAKHI JI,
KAISI HAIN AAP?
MASHA ALLAH BOHOT KHOOB,
bohot hi pyari nazm likhi hai aapne
wese to aap hamesha hi behtarin si koshishe hum sab ke samne rakhti hain,
per is nazm ke liye,,,dilse nikli daad kabul kijiye,
Ana khayal rakhiye
ALLAH HAFIZ
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(,) (,) (,) (,)
SoNY _ HASSAN
forever..
and ever and ever!
**********(¨`·.·´¨) Always *************
`·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep
(¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling!
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aadab munfairy ji
mein achi hun aap kaisi hai...??
shukriya apne mere likhe ko pasand kiya..
aap bhi apna khyaal rakhna aur khush rahna
sakhi with love
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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7th May 2007, 10:26 AM
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Originally Posted by chaahat
Pyari Sakhi..
Tumhe padhte hue mujhe takreeban 4 saal ho gaye hain.. lekin aaj bhi tumhari
har rachna me vahi dard nazar aata..
Aaj to tumne bas rulla hi diya..
Dua karungi ki khushiyan tumhare naseeb me jald hi aayein.. aur phir ek khushi bhari rachna bhi padhne ko mille..
Apna khayal rakho.. aur humesha khush raho..
Tumhari Dost..
~Priya
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priya meri pyari
such hai ahmara rista aaj itna purana ho chala hai chahe woh apse mera ho ya dard se mera rista ho...kuch chezze hamesha sath rahti hai kyun ki unka sath shayd hamein pyara hota hai ya kahe ki dard to koi koi yaisa hota hai jo mar ke bhi anhi jata...aap ro diye janke dukh hua dost...apki khushi ki kamna us samay bhi thi aaj bhi hai hamesha karungi..
khushiya jaldi se aayengi ya nahi pata haan mein apko isq ka kuch padne ka mauka jaldi dungi sakhi ka wada hai.
aap bhi apna khyaal rakhna aur khush rahna dear
with love sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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7th May 2007, 10:34 AM
di kaisi ho aap?
gazal ka ehsaas samjha bahut bahut shukriya
apka sath bana rahe bas
sakhi with love
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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7th May 2007, 01:09 PM
sukhriya sakhi ji
take care
aapka dost
Merul
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Originally Posted by sakhi1909
merul ji
chalo aap jaisa kah rahe ho vaisa hi karungi ok
keeps smile on ur face
and tc
sakhi
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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!
Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe,
Tab dil se me naraz tha,
Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du,
Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~>
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7th May 2007, 04:23 PM
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Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
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sakhi ji aap ne bilkul simple wording main itne achay se apney ahsasat ko bayan kia hai bohat khub
Waqt ke jisam ki kharash hoon main
apne ander se pash pash hoon main
zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin
ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin
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7th May 2007, 04:37 PM
jara disco-visco jaya kijiye...yeh sunapan khatam ho jayega...
aapka
amit
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8th May 2007, 11:18 PM
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Tum to chaley gaye jeevan se bin kuch bole bin jaane
Par ye dil pagal hai meraa naa kuch samjhey naa mane
Mere har soo.n failee ye tanhaai mujhsey kahati hai
Tum bin jeevan hai ye soona aai mujhko samjhaane
Tumko har pal dhundh rahee hai ye sooni aankhey
Aanshoo aate hai inmein teri hi tasveer dikhalaane
‘sahki’ ab kya dhundh rahi hai apne har taraf tu
Tujhme hi basta hai jisey dhundh raha dil diwaane(
sakhi with love
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sakhi sis
bahut hi khubsoorat rachna likhi hai. har ehsaas dil ko choo gaya. dard ko khub darsaya hai.
aapki rachna hamesha dil ke paas lagti hai. yunhi hi likhti rahna.
nira.
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9th May 2007, 05:07 PM
wah wah .. man gaye .. yeh kavita sf kyu nahin hain phle yeh boliye ..
likhte likhte ruk gaya hu... socha to hain ki likh du. magar rehne do .. fir kabhi yeh 2 line udar rahi..kk
keep writing
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7th June 2007, 02:12 PM
shukriya koi to hai ji
apne pasand kiya aur ehsaas ko samjh bahut acha laga
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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7th June 2007, 02:14 PM
acha ji batao kab jaun disko
shukriya aane ke liye aur padne ke liye
sakhi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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