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Ahl-e-Junoon Pyar Beshumaar Karte Hain....!! -
1st August 2014, 11:46 PM
Adaab... Hazreen-e-mehfil-e-ishQ,
Meri yeh koshish 'kamsin' aashiQooN ke naam!
ahl-e-junooN pyar beshumaar karte haiN..
aalam-e-hasti bhula, mehboob pe martay haiN...
chup chup kar hur shaam ko miltay haiN
kamsin aashiq khud se bhi dartay haiN
bas ik doojay meiN magan rehte haiN
sachay jhootay khwaab buntay haiN
afsaana manzar hota hai roz bichartay waqt
ghar ki raah, saara rasta sisaktay haiN
ik pal ki judai bhi sadiyon jesi lagti hai
vasl ke haseeN lamhoN ko tarastay haiN
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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1st August 2014, 11:58 PM
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Originally Posted by Hassan
Adaab... Hazreen-e-mehfil-e-ishQ,
Meri yeh koshish 'kamsin' aashiQooN ke naam!
ahl-e-junooN pyar beshumaar karte haiN..
aalam-e-hasti bhula, apne yaar per martay haiN...
chup chup kar hur shaam ko miltay haiN
kamsin aashiq khud se bhi dartay haiN
bas ik doojay meiN magan rehte haiN
sachay jhootay khwaab buntay haiN
afsaana manzar hota hai roz bichartay waqt
ghar ki raah, saara rasta sisaktay haiN
ik pal ki judai bhi sadiyon jesi lagti hai
vasl ke haseeN lamhoN ko tarastay haiN
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kya khub baya kiya hai aashiqon ka haal-e-dil. well done
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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3rd August 2014, 01:45 AM
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kya khub baya kiya hai aashiqon ka haal-e-dil. well done
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Pari,,
Lamha ba lamha milta hua tumhara saath!
samajh nahi aati kese Qarz chuka paaooN ga!
Aise hii saath nibhaati rehna,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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3rd August 2014, 01:59 AM
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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3rd August 2014, 02:30 AM
Waah waah !! Kamsin mohabbat ka kya khoob rangeen bayaan kiya hai !! Bahaut khoob !!
kamsin mohabbat ka zikr chhirha to Ahmad Faraz ka ye sher yaad aa gaya ...
awwal awwal ki mohabbat ke nashe yaad to kar
be-piye bhi tera chehra tha gulistaaN jaanaaN .........
-faraz
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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3rd August 2014, 02:19 PM
WaaH Waah Waah Waah Waah..............Jayada To Kuch Kahuga Nahi Qki Allready Nazneen Ji Ne Bol Diya Hai Waise......Ek Baat Hai Jiski Dhunai Ho Jaati Hai Uska Bhoot Hi Nahi Puri Body Bhi Dard Me Utar Jaaati Hai.............. :P :v
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3rd August 2014, 02:39 PM
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3rd August 2014, 03:07 PM
Yaa I Knw Marsal Art....................:P Aur Hasa Bhai Ko Train Hone Ki Kya Jarurat Hai Wo To Waise Hi Apni Ghazlon Se Logon Ko Ghayal Kar Denge.......
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3rd August 2014, 11:06 PM
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Waah waah !! Kamsin mohabbat ka kya khoob rangeen bayaan kiya hai !! Bahaut khoob !!
kamsin mohabbat ka zikr chhirha to Ahmad Faraz ka ye sher yaad aa gaya ...
awwal awwal ki mohabbat ke nashe yaad to kar
be-piye bhi tera chehra tha gulistaaN jaanaaN .........
-faraz
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Wahh! Zarraa saheb... kia hi behtareen shair pesh kiya hai..
dil khush kar diya!
aur aap ko khaak alfaaz pasand aaye,, khushnaseeb hai!
Milte rahiye ga,,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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3rd August 2014, 11:20 PM
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WaaH Waah Waah Waah Waah..............Jayada To Kuch Kahuga Nahi Qki Allready Nazneen Ji Ne Bol Diya Hai Waise......Ek Baat Hai Jiski Dhunai Ho Jaati Hai Uska Bhoot Hi Nahi Puri Body Bhi Dard Me Utar Jaaati Hai..............
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Sudhir Jii,,
Likhe to pazeraayi dene k liye behad mashkoor hooN!
Hahahaha.... Aur jiii,, 'kamsin' aashiQon ka ishQ ka bhoot jitni
bhi koshish kar loH nahi utarta...
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Originally Posted by N@zneen
lol sudhir kahin tum apna experience to nhi bata rahe ho
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probably
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Originally Posted by Masoom Pyar
Hlo Missssssss Mai Logo Ko Tranning Deta Hu Marsal Art Ki Aur Uske Bhaiyon Me Itna Dam Kaha Ki Mere Pe Attack Kar Sake.................
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Martial Arts! cool, cool!
haan! phir maiN tumhi per practice karna start karoN ga!
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Originally Posted by Masoom Pyar
Yaa I Knw Marsal Art.................... Aur Hasan Bhai Ko Train Hone Ki Kya Jarurat Hai Wo To Waise Hi Apni Ghazlon Se Logon Ko Ghayal Kar Denge.......
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hahaha!... itni tareef karieN ge Sudhir bhai,,
to waqai chane ke jhaad pe ja ke miloN ga Naaz ko!
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Gaya hassan chane k jhad par hassan wahin apna ghar bana lo
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right Naaz! aaye roZ koi na koi aisa qissa ho jata hai!
ke maiN jhaad pe chala jata hooN tum se milne ke liye...
dekho to meri khush naseebi!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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4th August 2014, 12:13 AM
kahiN woh oper se giri hui meri saathi tum hi to nahi?
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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4th August 2014, 03:32 PM
Okkkkkk Okkkkkkk Hasan Bhai Dont Worry Tum Mujh Per Hi Practice Karna Tumhe Bhi Pata Chal Jayega Aakhir Practice Kehte Kise Hai....... :P.........................................
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5th August 2014, 01:53 PM
Sudhir jii, Practice aap per nahii.. Naaz per karne ko kaha tha..
aap to buraa hi maan gaye
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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5th August 2014, 01:54 PM
Areeeeeeeeee Bro Mai Kaha Bura Maan Gaya.......
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5th August 2014, 01:56 PM
jawaab jo baday aggressive mood meiN diya
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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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5th August 2014, 01:59 PM
Bro Wo Mera Style Hai...........Ab Collage Ka Impact To AayeGa Hi...................!!!
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jawaab jo baday aggressive mood meiN diya
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5th August 2014, 03:46 PM
Wah hasan bhai ..mohabaat ki rah guzar pe kuch door aap humein
le gaye , apni is ghazal mein ...
Rahi sahi kasar N@zneen aur Sudhir ne poori kar di ,
aapko chane ke jhar pe charva kar...Aise doston ko khuda salamat
rakhe ?????!!
Do lines meri taraf se aap ke is khayal pe....
Tum ko tujh se churane ko jee chahta hai,
Tere pass aa ke door na jaane ko jee chahta hai.
Apni is chahat ko bhala maiN kya naam doon ,
Bus tere agle milan ki intezaar karooN.
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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5th August 2014, 10:29 PM
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Bro Wo Mera Style Hai...........Ab Collage Ka Impact To AayeGa Hi...................!!!
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carry on...............................
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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5th August 2014, 10:30 PM
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Wah hasan bhai ..mohabaat ki rah guzar pe kuch door aap humein
le gaye , apni is ghazal mein ...
Rahi sahi kasar N@zneen aur Sudhir ne poori kar di ,
aapko chane ke jhar pe charva kar...Aise doston ko khuda salamat
rakhe ?????!!
Do lines meri taraf se aap ke is khayal pe....
Tum ko tujh se churane ko jee chahta hai,
Tere pass aa ke door na jaane ko jee chahta hai.
Apni is chahat ko bhala maiN kya naam doon ,
Bus tere agle milan ki intezaar karooN.
Sanjay Sehgal
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Sanjay jii,
Wahh! wahh! Zaberdast qit'a pesh kiya hai aap ne... boht khoob!
Aur khaak alfaaz aap ko ache lage,
teh-e-dil se mashkoor hooN,,
Milte rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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8th August 2014, 12:54 PM
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Adaab... Hazreen-e-mehfil-e-ishQ,
Meri yeh koshish 'kamsin' aashiQooN ke naam!
ahl-e-junooN pyar beshumaar karte haiN..
aalam-e-hasti bhula, mehboob pe martay haiN...
chup chup kar hur shaam ko miltay haiN
kamsin aashiq khud se bhi dartay haiN
bas ik doojay meiN magan rehte haiN
sachay jhootay khwaab buntay haiN
afsaana manzar hota hai roz bichartay waqt
ghar ki raah, saara rasta sisaktay haiN
ik pal ki judai bhi sadiyon jesi lagti hai
vasl ke haseeN lamhoN ko tarastay haiN
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Bohat khoob hassan ji........
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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Boht Umda! -
9th August 2014, 04:09 PM
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Adaab... Hazreen-e-mehfil-e-ishQ,
Meri yeh koshish 'kamsin' aashiQooN ke naam!
ahl-e-junooN pyar beshumaar karte haiN..
aalam-e-hasti bhula, mehboob pe martay haiN...
chup chup kar hur shaam ko miltay haiN
kamsin aashiq khud se bhi dartay haiN
bas ik doojay meiN magan rehte haiN
sachay jhootay khwaab buntay haiN
afsaana manzar hota hai roz bichartay waqt
ghar ki raah, saara rasta sisaktay haiN
ik pal ki judai bhi sadiyon jesi lagti hai
vasl ke haseeN lamhoN ko tarastay haiN
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Jazbon ki tasveer kashi boht umda ki aapne
Allah kre zor e qalam aur zyada!
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10th August 2014, 01:15 PM
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Bohat khoob hassan ji........
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Ananth sir!
Aap ki tareef mil gayi hamari koshish mukammal ho gayi!
Milte rahiye ga,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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13th August 2014, 02:10 AM
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Jazbon ki tasveer kashi boht umda ki aapne
Allah kre zor e qalam aur zyada!
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Yasmine saheba!
Hausla afzaai aur duaooN ke liye be-had manooN hooN!
Aate rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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