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Yun hi mila tha wo rote hue galiyoN pe ..
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aur kya kahun .. haan itna ki dairi ke liye muafi... tumhare sath ka talabgaar rahunga

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Kunaal jii..........aap jab bhi likhtey ho kamaal likhtey ho, aapki es rachna par meri aaj hi nazar padi to pade bina rah na saki, har sher apni baat khul kar kah raha hai.....bemisaal ahsaas hai aapke.

bazm mein aate rahiye, likhtey rahiye aur kush rahiye
duao.n ke saath


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MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar..
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Aadaab Kunal Bhai pata nahi itni pyari gazal par pehle kese nazar nahi padhi meri waah janaab bahut khoob gazal pesh ki hai aapne dil khush ho gaya ese hi likhte raha kijiye aap khush rahiye hamesha .......TC



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Tum bulaogi maiN naa aauNga..
Door jab tumse chala jaauNga…

Reh jayeNge kaaNpte surkh lab…
Laali gaaloN ki jo mita jauNga…

Ehsaan the jo pal, mohabbat ke…
Bewafa, kya unhe bhula pauNga…

MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar..
Maut se badtar, koi saza pauNga…

Honge paimane alag mehfiloN ke….
Gham jaamoN mai, duba jauNga….

Dil door kahiN chain-o-sukoon se..
Phir kahaN gul koi khila pauNga…

Tha ristha kal, aaj dhool kismet..
Maut sa mohbbat ka, sila paunga..

Meri kismet kahaN ‘saccha_pyar’..
Keh ke daastaN tumhe rula jaunga,,,

Jidher dekhoge saaya mera hoga…
Raakh aisi hawa mai, mila jaunga…

sach…!

Aansu ban ankhoN mai aaunga..
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Kunaal jii..........aap jab bhi likhtey ho kamaal likhtey ho, aapki es rachna par meri aaj hi nazar padi to pade bina rah na saki, har sher apni baat khul kar kah raha hai.....bemisaal ahsaas hai aapke.

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koshish rahegi ki rabta bana rahe ...

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Aadaab Kunal Bhai pata nahi itni pyari gazal par pehle kese nazar nahi padhi meri waah janaab bahut khoob gazal pesh ki hai aapne dil khush ho gaya ese hi likhte raha kijiye aap khush rahiye hamesha .......TC
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Tha ristha kal, aaj dhool kismet..
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25th July 2009, 07:15 AM

Mere Bhai Kunal..

aaj tumhara kalaam padte padte...vo tehreer yaad aayi jo humara Delhi ke din pe thi..."Mere Bhai..Tab Tumharai Yaad Bahut Aayi..."

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25th July 2009, 11:05 AM

Kunal bhai,

lajawaab..bahot khoob...dil se daad

Meri kismet kahaN ‘saccha_pyar’..
Keh ke daastaN tumhe rula jaunga,,,


god bless u..aapko padhta hun to maano dil ko sukoon milta hai...

khush rahiye..

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27th July 2009, 02:03 AM

Kunal jii

Kaise hain aap? Ghazal behaat pasand aayii ... kisi ek sher to choose krna bahut muskil hoga ....

Hamesha aapki ghazal dil ko chu jaati .. aap bahut kamal likhte hoo

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27th July 2009, 12:18 PM

kunal jee...

behad khoobsurat ghazal par daad kubool kijiye...

Jidher dekhoge saaya mera hoga…
Raakh aisi hawa mai, mila jaunga…


is line ko padkar kuch yaad aa gaya.....
so likhne ki gustaakhi kar rahi hun....

raakh bhi hawaon mein uda karti thi kabhi....
lekin ab kisi ke paas jalane ko dil nahin hai....


hamesha khush rahiye....
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Kunal Bhai aadaaB......

Aaj aapko first time padha aur is gazal mein kho sa gaya.. ek ishq kii tamam sachchai koi aapne bayan kiya.. jo shayad har dil kii kahani hai.. bahut hi khoobsuraat gazal lagi aapki... and samajh nahi aa raha hai ke kis sher kii tarif karuN koi bhi ek sher aur sheroN se kam nahi sabhi sher zinda dil aur dilfareb lage...

Ek khubsurat si umda Gazal per dil se daad kabool kijiye...
Ummid hai aage bhi aapko padhne ka mauka milta rahenga..

Khush rahiye...
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Mere Bhai Kunal..

aaj tumhara kalaam padte padte...vo tehreer yaad aayi jo humara Delhi ke din pe thi..."Mere Bhai..Tab Tumharai Yaad Bahut Aayi..."

kush raho...

tumhara apna...
Tumhe yaad hai...? mere jehan se gaya hi nahi ab tak...

aap bhi khush raho

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Kunal bhai,

lajawaab..bahot khoob...dil se daad

Meri kismet kahaN ‘saccha_pyar’..
Keh ke daastaN tumhe rula jaunga,,,


god bless u..aapko padhta hun to maano dil ko sukoon milta hai...

khush rahiye..

cheers,
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Kunal jii

Kaise hain aap? Ghazal behaat pasand aayii ... kisi ek sher to choose krna bahut muskil hoga ....

Hamesha aapki ghazal dil ko chu jaati .. aap bahut kamal likhte hoo

Umeed karti hu yu hi likhte rahye mehfil sajate rahye

take care

God Bless u

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maiN ek dum bhadiya huN .. aur ghazal ko pasand karne ke liye aapka teh dil se shukriya ada karta huN .. humesha ka pata nahi par haan maiN bas dil ki baaton ko alfaaz dene ki koshish karta huN ... kaamyaabi aap logon ke hath hai .. accha lagta hai ki aaj itne din baad bhi logoN ka pyar milna kam nahi hua hai ...

aapke sath ki umeed rahegi

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kunal jee...

behad khoobsurat ghazal par daad kubool kijiye...

Jidher dekhoge saaya mera hoga…
Raakh aisi hawa mai, mila jaunga…


is line ko padkar kuch yaad aa gaya.....
so likhne ki gustaakhi kar rahi hun....
raakh bhi hawaon mein uda karti thi kabhi....
lekin ab kisi ke paas jalane ko dil nahin hai....


hamesha khush rahiye....
aapki dost
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Kunal Bhai aadaaB......

Aaj aapko first time padha aur is gazal mein kho sa gaya.. ek ishq kii tamam sachchai koi aapne bayan kiya.. jo shayad har dil kii kahani hai.. bahut hi khoobsuraat gazal lagi aapki... and samajh nahi aa raha hai ke kis sher kii tarif karuN koi bhi ek sher aur sheroN se kam nahi sabhi sher zinda dil aur dilfareb lage...

Ek khubsurat si umda Gazal per dil se daad kabool kijiye...
Ummid hai aage bhi aapko padhne ka mauka milta rahenga..

Khush rahiye...
Khuda Hafez,,
God Bless you...
Bhai jaan

Aapne jis tareeke se ghazal ka isteqbaal kiya hai dil manmoon ho gaya hai aapko paake .. aur yahan koi kisi se aledah nahi hai sab wahi hai bas nazaare alag alag hai .. mujhe khushi hai aapko ye pasand aayi .. aapki umeed pe khara utrooN .. koshish rahegi

aap bhi apna khyal rakhiye

aapka apna

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bunzzaii....!!!!
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hi kunalji bhut dino bad yha aana hua or aate hi aapki itni achi poem padne ko mili aap shayd hume bhul gye hoge but hum aap jase ache kaviyo ko nahi bhul pate realy me bhut achi hai ye poem ase hi likhte rhaye



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Door jab tumse chala jaauNga…


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MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar..
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Dil door kahiN chain-o-sukoon se..
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Tha ristha kal, aaj dhool kismet..
Maut sa mohbbat ka, sila paunga..

Meri kismet kahaN ‘saccha_pyar’..
Keh ke daastaN tumhe rula jaunga,,,

Jidher dekhoge saaya mera hoga…
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Raakh aisi hawa mai, mila jaunga…) mujhe to thik se sayad tarif bh karni nahi ati hai...... bas yahi bool sakta hun.....mujhe pasand aya aap k ye pantiya.... take care bhaiya......
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Kya kahuN ki tumhe dekh ke khushi hi nahi hui .. tumhari yaad bhi aa gayi hai .. bohat acche din the wo jab hum sath maiN ghoomte the... tumhe tareef karne ki zaroorat hai bhi nahi .. kyuNki tumhare dil ko maiN acche se jaanta huN .. mujhe bas khushi hai tumhe paake

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hi kunalji bhut dino bad yha aana hua or aate hi aapki itni achi poem padne ko mili aap shayd hume bhul gye hoge but hum aap jase ache kaviyo ko nahi bhul pate realy me bhut achi hai ye poem ase hi likhte rhaye
Chandni jee

MaiN to aapko kabhi bhoola hi nahi .. yad ho mujhe aap aaj bhi .. bas aapka no. mujhse miss ho gaya hai ... aur hum sirf shayri se hi nahi jude hum acche ost bhi hai ... maiN koshish karunga likhne ki .. aap sath rehna

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Tha ristha kal, aaj dhool kismet..
Maut sa mohbbat ka, sila paunga..

Aansu ban ankhoN mai aaunga..
Door jab tumse chala jaauNga…


Kunaal bhai kasam se apko pada to laga ke padta hi rahu bhot bhot ache lage apke gazal ke ye sher aur sachi apni judai ki pida ko sahi lafo me kaha hai.
Bhai abed sahab

MaiN bas manmoon huN aapke diye gaye alfaazi tohfe se ,,.. mere pas alfazoN ki kami nahi hai .. par aapko khamoshi deke aapki izzatafzayi karna chahunga .. tareef ka teh dil se shukraguzaar huN

Aapka apna

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waha waha ji aaj pehli baar aapko padnay ka mouka mila hai janaab
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Shukriya saahab .. apni nazar-e-karam is aur karne ke liye

aapki daad ko sir aankhoN pe lete hau saahab

aur sacchi shayri wahi hai jo sabko unka aks kahiN na kahin dikha paaye
aapko isme kahin apnapan de paaya khushkismati hai meri

aur mujh khaaksaar ka kya fan baniyega ... maiN to aapke kalam ke noor ke liye ibadat karunga ki aap bohat accha likhe aur duniya ko apna deewana banaye ...

aur likhna bohat din se chahta huN .. par dil pe chot kuch itni lagi hai ki koun sa jhakhm kureduN kuch samjah nahi aata

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Reh jayeNge kaaNpte surkh lab…
Laali gaaloN ki jo mita jauNga…





MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar..
Maut se badtar, koi saza pauNga…

beautiful ......

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Gham jaamoN mai, duba jauNga….

nice one

Maut sa mohbbat ka, sila paunga..

Meri kismet kahaN ‘saccha_pyar’..
Keh ke daastaN tumhe rula jaunga,,,

Jidher dekhoge saaya mera hoga…
Raakh aisi hawa mai, mila jaunga…


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MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar..
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beautiful ......

Honge paimane alag mehfiloN ke….
Gham jaamoN mai, duba jauNga….

nice one

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aisi dhamki dete ho ........
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Reh jayeNge kaaNpte surkh lab…
Laali gaaloN ki jo mita jauNga…

Ehsaan the jo pal, mohabbat ke…
Bewafa, kya unhe bhula pauNga…

MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar..
Maut se badtar, koi saza pauNga…

Honge paimane alag mehfiloN ke….
Gham jaamoN mai, duba jauNga….

Dil door kahiN chain-o-sukoon se..
Phir kahaN gul koi khila pauNga…

Tha ristha kal, aaj dhool kismet..
Maut sa mohbbat ka, sila paunga..

Meri kismet kahaN ‘saccha_pyar’..
Keh ke daastaN tumhe rula jaunga,,,

Jidher dekhoge saaya mera hoga…
Raakh aisi hawa mai, mila jaunga…

sach…!

Aansu ban ankhoN mai aaunga..
Door jab tumse chala jaauNga…

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kunaal saheb aadaaB...

behad khoobsurati se ehsaasoN ko shabdoN meiN byaaN kiya hai aapne is ghazal ke zariye...maine aaj subha se lekar ab tak na jaane kitni baar padha hoga ise...

bahut bahut badhiya....

lekin neeche likhe sher ne mujhe ek dum se chup kara diya...
maiN samjh nahi pa raha hgu ki kaise is sher ki khoobsurati ko daad dooN...aisa lag raha hai jaise aapne mere dil meiN jhaNk kar ise likha hai...bahut apna sa laga ye mujhe...maine kai baar khud bhi in ehsaasoN ke ird gird likha hai...lekin aisi khoobsurati jo is khaas sher meiN hai, kabhi nahi likh paaya...is sher ke liye ye nacheez jhuk kar aapko salaam karta hai...mujhe ummeed hai ki mere ehsaas aapko samjh meiN aaye hoNge....


MaiN mujrim huN, ishq ka yaar..
Maut se badtar, koi saza pauNga…


bahut bahut khoobsurat.....bahut umda....bahut hi pak aur behad masoom...shayad alfaaz nahi keh rahe ki ye masoom hai...lekin mujhe ye aise hi samjh meiN aaya....

vikram "masttt..."


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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