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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Ahmad Bhai ,
Adaab . I think u read the poem in a hurry.. My dear friend this poem was written about someone who felt dejected and frustrated as to whether he will ever succeed in life as the winds are blowing against him ..
He takes inspiration from the rose which though surrounded by thorns blossoms...and this brings positivity in him
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Aadaab Sehgal Saahab,
Beyhad shukriyaa aapke acknowledgement kaa.. janaab aapki baat ka jawaab both No and Yes hayn, no isliyay ki aapki ya kisee aur bhi ham-zouq ki kaavish khaaksaar yaa tou aaraam say parhta haye verna nahee parhta, aapki is poem ko nacheez nay kaee martba parha, aur jab compliment likhna shuru kiya tab focus -khoobsoortee par focus kertay ashaar par rah gaya.. its hard to ignore the way you depicted it and I lost my way going further towards the beginning of the poem. The first two verses, which do depict the situation of a person who has
got all odds against him, which has been put beautifully there, I didn't get the opportunity to focus on them, and I apologise for that, but it is not true that I read your poem in a hurry, as it is against my principles. If I can't give my honest opinion I simply don't comment on those works.
Your inspiring rose-bud verses caught my focus such,I got stuck there....
Thanks once again and sorry if you felt I didn't do justice to your beautiful work of art Sir!!