Mere hatth kafan toN bahar hoN
Eh gall maiN hargiz na kah.anga
Tera agle janam Milan da vadda
Meri Umar bhar di daulat
Mehfooz rahegee mere kol
Te mera dil kisse agammi khushi ch
Apna Marsia aap hi padega.
Yakeen hai mainu ke
pehchaan lavanga tainu
kalle karre sooraj vaang maghna
mera karaM vi te naseeb vi
sikhar dupehar vardhi agg ch
mere kareeb aun da honsla
tere toN siva koi hor na karega
har maut jindagi da aant hove
eh jaroori taaN nahi
es sukke phull vall takk
jara gaur naal
ehda chota jeha bee
naina ch jindgaani da pani lai
maut sahveN bedhadak khadega
mumkin hai ke
waqt tainu kandiaN da taaj deve
te kadma ch meelaN takk bhakkhda
par tu muskara ke tureen
ek din ehi waqt
tere matthe te chann
te taliaN te sitare jadd
teri ungli phadega
Mere hatth kafan toN bahar hoN
Eh gall maiN hargiz na kah.anga
Tera agle janam Milan da vadda
Meri Umar bhar di daulat
Mehfooz rahegee mere kol
Te mera dil kisse agammi khushi ch
Apna Marsia aap hi padega.
Yakeen hai mainu ke
pehchaan lavanga tainu
kalle karre sooraj vaang maghna
mera karaM vi te naseeb vi
sikhar dupehar vardhi agg ch
mere kareeb aun da honsla
tere toN siva koi hor na karega
har maut jindagi da aant hove
eh jaroori taaN nahi
es sukke phull vall takk
jara gaur naal
ehda chota jeha bee
naina ch jindgaani da pani lai
maut sahveN bedhadak khadega
mumkin hai ke
waqt tainu kandiaN da taaj deve
te kadma ch meelaN takk bhakkhda
par tu muskara ke tureen
ek din ehi waqt
tere matthe te chann
te taliaN te sitare jadd
teri ungli phadega
bahut khoob preet ji....ultimate......har var di trahan........ ....
mumkin hai ke
waqt tainu kandiaN da taaj deve
te kadma ch meelaN takk bhakkhda
par tu muskara ke tureen
ek din ehi waqt
tere matthe te chann
te taliaN te sitare jadd
teri ungli phadega
khaskar eh akheeree lines....bahut inspirational ne .....
hor ki kavan....tuhadi rachnavan de sahmne....sare shabd chote lagn la jande ne... likhde raho...khush raho.....tkcr
bahut khoob preet ji....ultimate......har var di trahan........ ....
mumkin hai ke
waqt tainu kandiaN da taaj deve
te kadma ch meelaN takk bhakkhda
par tu muskara ke tureen
ek din ehi waqt
tere matthe te chann
te taliaN te sitare jadd
teri ungli phadega
khaskar eh akheeree lines....bahut inspirational ne .....
hor ki kavan....tuhadi rachnavan de sahmne....sare shabd chote lagn la jande ne... likhde raho...khush raho.....tkcr
SSA Loveleen ji....tusiN apna keemti sama es poem nu paraN lai ditta.....bahut bahut dhanwad......tc
Mere hatth kafan toN bahar hoN
Eh gall maiN hargiz na kah.anga
Tera agle janam Milan da vadda
Meri Umar bhar di daulat
Mehfooz rahegee mere kol
Te mera dil kisse agammi khushi ch
Apna Marsia aap hi padega.
Yakeen hai mainu ke
pehchaan lavanga tainu
kalle karre sooraj vaang maghna
mera karaM vi te naseeb vi
sikhar dupehar vardhi agg ch
mere kareeb aun da honsla
tere toN siva koi hor na karega
har maut jindagi da aant hove
eh jaroori taaN nahi
es sukke phull vall takk
jara gaur naal
ehda chota jeha bee
naina ch jindgaani da pani lai
maut sahveN bedhadak khadega
mumkin hai ke
waqt tainu kandiaN da taaj deve
te kadma ch meelaN takk bhakkhda
par tu muskara ke tureen
ek din ehi waqt
tere matthe te chann
te taliaN te sitare jadd
teri ungli phadega
mumkin hai ke
waqt tainu kandiaN da taaj deve
te kadma ch meelaN takk bhakkhda
par tu muskara ke tureen
ek din ehi waqt
tere matthe te chann
te taliaN te sitare jadd
teri ungli phadega
preet ji ji bahut hi badia khyal likhay hai tusi.tuhada andaz hi bakhra hai.
[QUOTE=rajinderseep;402006]originally posted by peert dil di
preet ji ji bahut hi badia khyal likhay hai tusi.tuhada andaz hi bakhra hai.
SSA Rajinder ji....hope u r doing great.....es poem nu read karaN lai atte pasand karaN lai thuhada bahut bahut dhanwad........take care..........................
har maut jindagi da aant hove
eh jaroori taaN nahi
es sukke phull vall takk
jara gaur naal
ehda chota jeha bee
naina ch jindgaani da pani lai
maut sahveN bedhadak khadega
preet ji sat siri akal...
ki haal chaal hai thuada...?
bahut sohna te gehra likhaya hai tusiN....
bohat chaNga laga padh ke...eddaN hi likhde raho te apne khoobsurat khayaalaaN nu sade naal vaNd_de raho...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
har maut jindagi da aant hove
eh jaroori taaN nahi
es sukke phull vall takk
jara gaur naal
ehda chota jeha bee
naina ch jindgaani da pani lai
maut sahveN bedhadak khadega
preet ji sat siri akal...
ki haal chaal hai thuada...?
bahut sohna te gehra likhaya hai tusiN....
bohat chaNga laga padh ke...eddaN hi likhde raho te apne khoobsurat khayaalaaN nu sade naal vaNd_de raho...
Sat shri akaal Vikram ji.....maiN bilkul theek haaN...tusiN dasso kiddaN oN.....tusiN apna keemti sama de ke es poem nu read keeta...pasand keeta mere lai bahut hi khushi di gall hai.......tusiN apna khayal rakhna......preet