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kyoN ramz kise na jaani yaar...? - 12th July 2010, 01:13 AM

kyoN ramz kise na jaani yaar...?


kyoN ramz* kise na jaani yaar...?
reha bhatakda tu vich bazaar...!
bolaaN de tere, mu'l na kau’di...
kis mani yaara teri takraar...?

e' jiNd ki, bas saahaaN di maala...
tid'ki dor taN samjho tuteya haar...
baaziyaaN jit-jit fateh karaayee...
mann wali baazi, pher gaya kyoN haar...?

tera-mera kar umar gaNvaayee...
ban'yaa khazaanii pehredaar...
naal kise kuj la'jaa na saknaa...
kar_le bhaaMve koi jatan hazaar...!

aapne sukhaaN, kyoN raazi ai'na...?
sun pith pichhe huNdi hahakaar...!
ka’le sukhaaN da e' naaM koi na,
ai'the dukhaaN de bha're bhaNdaar...!

e' duniya, keh'Nde maNch hai ik...!
tu, maiN, aithe saare kirdaar...
jis rachi e' rachna, o' dikh'da kyoN na...?
sunyaa, sabtoN vada o' rachnakaar...!

gha’sa na matha, kar-kar sajde...
sun, zara tu kar lae soch-vichaar...!
la'bh raah tu aNdar_da apne…
khol akhaaN, zara ban hushiyaar...!

jug phirde, phirdiyaaN umraaN...
e'na phereyaaN vich kai dukh shumaar...!
e's jaan da hove pher maan kyoN ai'na...?
aa'j jaana, kal aan_nu pher taeyaar...!

hai tan mit'ti, kar apna mann mit'ti...
mit'ti racheyaa e' sakal saNsaar...!
baqi sab ne e' maaya de baNdhan...
mo'di chuk'na o'hi baNde chaar...!

kyoN ramz* kise na jaani yaar...?
reha bhatakda tu vich bazaar...
aakh'da kise nu kuj bi naahi...
kyoN japdi pher bi e' jeeb talwaar...?

*ramz: mystery



ਕਯੋਂ ਰਮਜ਼ ਕਿਸੇ ਨਾ ਜਾਨੀ ਯਾਰ...?


ਕਯੋਂ ਰਮਜ਼ ਕਿਸੇ ਨਾ ਜਾਨੀ ਯਾਰ...?
ਰੇਹਾ ਭਟਕਦਾ ਤੂੰ ਵਿਚ ਬਜ਼ਾਰ...
ਬੋਲਾਂ ਦੇ ਤੇਰੇ, ਮੁਲ ਨਾ ਕੌਡੀ...
ਕਿਸ ਮਨਿ ਯਾਰਾ ਤੇਰੀ ਤਕਰਾਰ...?

ਏ ਜਿੰਦ ਕੀ, ਬਸ ਸਾਹਾਂ ਦੀ ਮਾਲਾ...
ਤਿੜਕੀ ਡੋਰ ਤਾਂ ਸਮਝੋ ਟੂਟੇਯਾ ਹਾਰ...!
ਬਾਜ਼ੀਯਾਂ ਜਿਤ-ਜਿਤ ਫ਼ਤੇਹ ਕਰਵਾਯੀ...
ਮਨ ਵਾਲੀ ਬਾਜ਼ੀ ਫੇਰ, ਗਯਾ ਕਯੋਂ ਹਾਰ...?

ਤੇਰਾ-ਮੇਰਾ ਕਰ ਉਮਰ ਗੰਵਾਯੀ...
ਬਨੇਯਾ ਖਾਜ਼ਾਨੀ ਪਹਰੇਦਾਰ...!
ਨਾਲ ਕਿਸੇ ਕੁਜ ਲਜਾ ਨਾ ਸਕਣਾ...
ਕਰਲੇ ਭਾਮ੍ਵੇ ਕੋਈ ਜਤਨ ਹਜ਼ਾਰ...!

ਆਪਨੇ ਸੁਖਾਂ, ਕਯੋਂ ਰਾਜ਼ੀ ਐਨਾ...?
ਸੁਨ ਪਿਠ ਪਿਛੇ ਹੁੰਦੀ ਹਾਹਾਕਾਰ...!
ਕਾਲੇ ਸੁਖਾਂ ਦੇ ਏ ਨਾਮ ਕੋਈ ਨਾ...
ਐਥੇ ਦੁਖਾਂ ਦੇ ਭਰੇ ਭੰਡਾਰ...!

ਏ ਦੁਨਿਯਾ ਕਹੰਦੇ ਮੰਚ ਹੈ ਇਕ...!
ਤੂ, ਮੈਂ ਐਥੇ ਸਾਰੇ ਕਿਰਦਾਰ...
ਜਿਸ ਰਚੀ ਏ ਰਚਨਾ ਓ ਦਿਖਦਾ ਕਯੋਂ ਨਾ...?
ਸੂਨੇਯਾ ਸਬਤੋਂ ਵਡਾ ਓਹੋ ਰਚਨਾਕਾਰ...!

ਘਸਾ ਨਾ ਮਥਾ, ਕਰ-ਕਰ ਸਜਦੇ...
ਸੁਨ, ਜ਼ਰਾ ਤੂ ਕਰ ਲੈ ਸੋਚ ਵਿਚਾਰ...!
ਲਭ ਰਾਹ ਤੂ ਅੰਦਰ ਦਾ ਆਪਨੇ...
ਖੋਲ ਆਖਾਂ, ਜ਼ਰਾ ਬਣ ਹੁਸ਼ਿਯਾਰ...!

ਜੁਗ ਫਿਰਦੇ, ਫਿਰਦੀਯਾਂ ਉਮਰਾਂ...
ਏਨਾ ਫੇਰੇਯਾਂ ਵਿਚ ਕਈ ਦੁਖ ਸ਼ੁਮਾਰ...!
ਏਸ ਜਾਨ ਦਾ ਹੋਵੇ ਫੇਰ, ਮਾਨ ਕਯੋਂ ਏਨਾ...?
ਅਜ ਜਾਣਾ, ਕਲ ਆਉਣ ਨੂ ਫੇਰ ਤਯਾਰ...!

ਹੈ ਤਨ ਮਿੱਟੀ, ਕਰ ਆਪਣਾ ਮਨ ਮਿੱਟੀ...
ਮਿੱਟੀ ਰਚੇਯਾ ਏ ਸਕਲ ਸੰਸਾਰ...!
ਬਾਕ਼ੀ ਸਬ ਨੇ ਏ ਮਾਯਾ ਦੇ ਬੰਧਨ...
ਮੋਡੀ ਚੂਕਨਾ ਓਹੀ ਬੰਦੇ ਚਾਰ ...!

ਕਯੋਂ ਰਮਜ਼* ਕਿਸੇ ਨਾ ਜਾਨੀ ਯਾਰ...?
ਰੇਹਾ ਭਟਕਦਾ ਤੂ ਵਿਚ ਬਜ਼ਾਰ...
ਆਖਦਾ ਕਿਸੇ ਨੂ ਕੁਜ ਬੀ ਨਾਹੀ...
ਕਯੋਂ ਜਾਪਦੀ ਫੇਰ ਬੀ ਏ ਜੀਬ ਤਲਵਾਰ...?


*ਰਮਜ਼: Mystery


'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....



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SSA Vikram ji.......sachmuch mere kol shabad nahiN hun thuhadi kalam di tareef karaN lai....har ek line hi bahut khoobsurat hai......badi der baad tusiN Punjabi vich kujh likhia hai.....bahut hi changa laggeya thuhanu padd ke.....eddaN hi likhde rehna....
apna khayal rakhna
duavaN de naal
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ਰੁਕਦਾ ਨ ਖੂਨ ਇਹ ਨੇ ਦਿਲ ਚਾਕ ਦੇ ਤਕਾਜ਼ੇ
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kyoN ramz kise na jaani yaar...?


kyoN ramz* kise na jaani yaar...?
reha bhatakda tu vich bazaar...!
bolaaN de tere, mu'l na kau’di...
kis mani yaara teri takraar...?

e' jiNd ki, bas saahaaN di maala...
tid'ki dor taN samjho tuteya haar...
baaziyaaN jit-jit fateh karaayee...
mann wali baazi, pher gaya kyoN haar...?

tera-mera kar umar gaNvaayee...
ban'yaa khazaanii pehredaar...
naal kise kuj la'jaa na saknaa...
kar_le bhaaMve koi jatan hazaar...!

aapne sukhaaN, kyoN raazi ai'na...?
sun pith pichhe huNdi hahakaar...!
ka’le sukhaaN da e' naaM koi na,
ai'the dukhaaN de bha're bhaNdaar...!

e' duniya, keh'Nde maNch hai ik...!
tu, maiN, aithe saare kirdaar...
jis rachi e' rachna, o' dikh'da kyoN na...?
sunyaa, sabtoN vada o' rachnakaar...!

gha’sa na matha, kar-kar sajde...
sun, zara tu kar lae soch-vichaar...!
la'bh raah tu aNdar_da apne…
khol akhaaN, zara ban hushiyaar...!

jug phirde, phirdiyaaN umraaN...
e'na phereyaaN vich kai dukh shumaar...!
e's jaan da hove pher maan kyoN ai'na...?
aa'j jaana, kal aan_nu pher taeyaar...!

hai tan mit'ti, kar apna mann mit'ti...
mit'ti racheyaa e' sakal saNsaar...!
baqi sab ne e' maaya de baNdhan...
mo'di chuk'na o'hi baNde chaar...!

kyoN ramz* kise na jaani yaar...?
reha bhatakda tu vich bazaar...
aakh'da kise nu kuj bi naahi...
kyoN japdi pher bi e' jeeb talwaar...?

*ramz: mystery



ਕਯੋਂ ਰਮਜ਼ ਕਿਸੇ ਨਾ ਜਾਨੀ ਯਾਰ...?


ਕਯੋਂ ਰਮਜ਼ ਕਿਸੇ ਨਾ ਜਾਨੀ ਯਾਰ...?
ਰੇਹਾ ਭਟਕਦਾ ਤੂੰ ਵਿਚ ਬਜ਼ਾਰ...
ਬੋਲਾਂ ਦੇ ਤੇਰੇ, ਮੁਲ ਨਾ ਕੌਡੀ...
ਕਿਸ ਮਨਿ ਯਾਰਾ ਤੇਰੀ ਤਕਰਾਰ...?

ਏ ਜਿੰਦ ਕੀ, ਬਸ ਸਾਹਾਂ ਦੀ ਮਾਲਾ...
ਤਿੜਕੀ ਡੋਰ ਤਾਂ ਸਮਝੋ ਟੂਟੇਯਾ ਹਾਰ...!
ਬਾਜ਼ੀਯਾਂ ਜਿਤ-ਜਿਤ ਫ਼ਤੇਹ ਕਰਵਾਯੀ...
ਮਨ ਵਾਲੀ ਬਾਜ਼ੀ ਫੇਰ, ਗਯਾ ਕਯੋਂ ਹਾਰ...?

ਤੇਰਾ-ਮੇਰਾ ਕਰ ਉਮਰ ਗੰਵਾਯੀ...
ਬਨੇਯਾ ਖਾਜ਼ਾਨੀ ਪਹਰੇਦਾਰ...!
ਨਾਲ ਕਿਸੇ ਕੁਜ ਲਜਾ ਨਾ ਸਕਣਾ...
ਕਰਲੇ ਭਾਮ੍ਵੇ ਕੋਈ ਜਤਨ ਹਜ਼ਾਰ...!

ਆਪਨੇ ਸੁਖਾਂ, ਕਯੋਂ ਰਾਜ਼ੀ ਐਨਾ...?
ਸੁਨ ਪਿਠ ਪਿਛੇ ਹੁੰਦੀ ਹਾਹਾਕਾਰ...!
ਕਾਲੇ ਸੁਖਾਂ ਦੇ ਏ ਨਾਮ ਕੋਈ ਨਾ...
ਐਥੇ ਦੁਖਾਂ ਦੇ ਭਰੇ ਭੰਡਾਰ...!

ਏ ਦੁਨਿਯਾ ਕਹੰਦੇ ਮੰਚ ਹੈ ਇਕ...!
ਤੂ, ਮੈਂ ਐਥੇ ਸਾਰੇ ਕਿਰਦਾਰ...
ਜਿਸ ਰਚੀ ਏ ਰਚਨਾ ਓ ਦਿਖਦਾ ਕਯੋਂ ਨਾ...?
ਸੂਨੇਯਾ ਸਬਤੋਂ ਵਡਾ ਓਹੋ ਰਚਨਾਕਾਰ...!

ਘਸਾ ਨਾ ਮਥਾ, ਕਰ-ਕਰ ਸਜਦੇ...
ਸੁਨ, ਜ਼ਰਾ ਤੂ ਕਰ ਲੈ ਸੋਚ ਵਿਚਾਰ...!
ਲਭ ਰਾਹ ਤੂ ਅੰਦਰ ਦਾ ਆਪਨੇ...
ਖੋਲ ਆਖਾਂ, ਜ਼ਰਾ ਬਣ ਹੁਸ਼ਿਯਾਰ...!

ਜੁਗ ਫਿਰਦੇ, ਫਿਰਦੀਯਾਂ ਉਮਰਾਂ...
ਏਨਾ ਫੇਰੇਯਾਂ ਵਿਚ ਕਈ ਦੁਖ ਸ਼ੁਮਾਰ...!
ਏਸ ਜਾਨ ਦਾ ਹੋਵੇ ਫੇਰ, ਮਾਨ ਕਯੋਂ ਏਨਾ...?
ਅਜ ਜਾਣਾ, ਕਲ ਆਉਣ ਨੂ ਫੇਰ ਤਯਾਰ...!

ਹੈ ਤਨ ਮਿੱਟੀ, ਕਰ ਆਪਣਾ ਮਨ ਮਿੱਟੀ...
ਮਿੱਟੀ ਰਚੇਯਾ ਏ ਸਕਲ ਸੰਸਾਰ...!
ਬਾਕ਼ੀ ਸਬ ਨੇ ਏ ਮਾਯਾ ਦੇ ਬੰਧਨ...
ਮੋਡੀ ਚੂਕਨਾ ਓਹੀ ਬੰਦੇ ਚਾਰ ...!

ਕਯੋਂ ਰਮਜ਼* ਕਿਸੇ ਨਾ ਜਾਨੀ ਯਾਰ...?
ਰੇਹਾ ਭਟਕਦਾ ਤੂ ਵਿਚ ਬਜ਼ਾਰ...
ਆਖਦਾ ਕਿਸੇ ਨੂ ਕੁਜ ਬੀ ਨਾਹੀ...
ਕਯੋਂ ਜਾਪਦੀ ਫੇਰ ਬੀ ਏ ਜੀਬ ਤਲਵਾਰ...?


*ਰਮਜ਼: Mystery

e' duniya, keh'Nde maNch hai ik...!
tu, maiN, aithe saare kirdaar...
jis rachi e' rachna, o' dikh'da kyoN na...?
sunyaa, sabtoN vada o' rachnakaar...!

Very nice deep, well written ..............

vaaki stanza bhi achy haiN but this one is very new fresh thought and written very uniquely

baba bulle shah yaad aa gaye

Waah waah ramz sajan di hor
ashiq bina na samjhye kaur

je o aan mile diljaani
us to jaan karaaN kurbaani
surat de bich yusuf' saani
alam de vich jisda shor

ashiq firde chup-chuopate
mast sada madmaate
dam zulf de andar paate
othey challe bass na zor

wah waah ramz sajan di hor

jitna yaad tha likh diya
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12th July 2010, 10:00 AM

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Originally Posted by vikramjethi View Post
kyoN ramz kise na jaani yaar...?


kyoN ramz* kise na jaani yaar...?
reha bhatakda tu vich bazaar...!
bolaaN de tere, mu'l na kau’di...
kis mani yaara teri takraar...?

e' jiNd ki, bas saahaaN di maala...
tid'ki dor taN samjho tuteya haar...
baaziyaaN jit-jit fateh karaayee...
mann wali baazi, pher gaya kyoN haar...?

tera-mera kar umar gaNvaayee...
ban'yaa khazaanii pehredaar...
naal kise kuj la'jaa na saknaa...
kar_le bhaaMve koi jatan hazaar...!

aapne sukhaaN, kyoN raazi ai'na...?
sun pith pichhe huNdi hahakaar...!
ka’le sukhaaN da e' naaM koi na,
ai'the dukhaaN de bha're bhaNdaar...!

e' duniya, keh'Nde maNch hai ik...!
tu, maiN, aithe saare kirdaar...
jis rachi e' rachna, o' dikh'da kyoN na...?
sunyaa, sabtoN vada o' rachnakaar...!

gha’sa na matha, kar-kar sajde...
sun, zara tu kar lae soch-vichaar...!
la'bh raah tu aNdar_da apne…
khol akhaaN, zara ban hushiyaar...!

jug phirde, phirdiyaaN umraaN...
e'na phereyaaN vich kai dukh shumaar...!
e's jaan da hove pher maan kyoN ai'na...?
aa'j jaana, kal aan_nu pher taeyaar...!

hai tan mit'ti, kar apna mann mit'ti...
mit'ti racheyaa e' sakal saNsaar...!
baqi sab ne e' maaya de baNdhan...
mo'di chuk'na o'hi baNde chaar...!

kyoN ramz* kise na jaani yaar...?
reha bhatakda tu vich bazaar...
aakh'da kise nu kuj bi naahi...
kyoN japdi pher bi e' jeeb talwaar...?

*ramz: mystery



ਕਯੋਂ ਰਮਜ਼ ਕਿਸੇ ਨਾ ਜਾਨੀ ਯਾਰ...?


ਕਯੋਂ ਰਮਜ਼ ਕਿਸੇ ਨਾ ਜਾਨੀ ਯਾਰ...?
ਰੇਹਾ ਭਟਕਦਾ ਤੂੰ ਵਿਚ ਬਜ਼ਾਰ...
ਬੋਲਾਂ ਦੇ ਤੇਰੇ, ਮੁਲ ਨਾ ਕੌਡੀ...
ਕਿਸ ਮਨਿ ਯਾਰਾ ਤੇਰੀ ਤਕਰਾਰ...?

ਏ ਜਿੰਦ ਕੀ, ਬਸ ਸਾਹਾਂ ਦੀ ਮਾਲਾ...
ਤਿੜਕੀ ਡੋਰ ਤਾਂ ਸਮਝੋ ਟੂਟੇਯਾ ਹਾਰ...!
ਬਾਜ਼ੀਯਾਂ ਜਿਤ-ਜਿਤ ਫ਼ਤੇਹ ਕਰਵਾਯੀ...
ਮਨ ਵਾਲੀ ਬਾਜ਼ੀ ਫੇਰ, ਗਯਾ ਕਯੋਂ ਹਾਰ...?

ਤੇਰਾ-ਮੇਰਾ ਕਰ ਉਮਰ ਗੰਵਾਯੀ...
ਬਨੇਯਾ ਖਾਜ਼ਾਨੀ ਪਹਰੇਦਾਰ...!
ਨਾਲ ਕਿਸੇ ਕੁਜ ਲਜਾ ਨਾ ਸਕਣਾ...
ਕਰਲੇ ਭਾਮ੍ਵੇ ਕੋਈ ਜਤਨ ਹਜ਼ਾਰ...!

ਆਪਨੇ ਸੁਖਾਂ, ਕਯੋਂ ਰਾਜ਼ੀ ਐਨਾ...?
ਸੁਨ ਪਿਠ ਪਿਛੇ ਹੁੰਦੀ ਹਾਹਾਕਾਰ...!
ਕਾਲੇ ਸੁਖਾਂ ਦੇ ਏ ਨਾਮ ਕੋਈ ਨਾ...
ਐਥੇ ਦੁਖਾਂ ਦੇ ਭਰੇ ਭੰਡਾਰ...!

ਏ ਦੁਨਿਯਾ ਕਹੰਦੇ ਮੰਚ ਹੈ ਇਕ...!
ਤੂ, ਮੈਂ ਐਥੇ ਸਾਰੇ ਕਿਰਦਾਰ...
ਜਿਸ ਰਚੀ ਏ ਰਚਨਾ ਓ ਦਿਖਦਾ ਕਯੋਂ ਨਾ...?
ਸੂਨੇਯਾ ਸਬਤੋਂ ਵਡਾ ਓਹੋ ਰਚਨਾਕਾਰ...!

ਘਸਾ ਨਾ ਮਥਾ, ਕਰ-ਕਰ ਸਜਦੇ...
ਸੁਨ, ਜ਼ਰਾ ਤੂ ਕਰ ਲੈ ਸੋਚ ਵਿਚਾਰ...!
ਲਭ ਰਾਹ ਤੂ ਅੰਦਰ ਦਾ ਆਪਨੇ...
ਖੋਲ ਆਖਾਂ, ਜ਼ਰਾ ਬਣ ਹੁਸ਼ਿਯਾਰ...!

ਜੁਗ ਫਿਰਦੇ, ਫਿਰਦੀਯਾਂ ਉਮਰਾਂ...
ਏਨਾ ਫੇਰੇਯਾਂ ਵਿਚ ਕਈ ਦੁਖ ਸ਼ੁਮਾਰ...!
ਏਸ ਜਾਨ ਦਾ ਹੋਵੇ ਫੇਰ, ਮਾਨ ਕਯੋਂ ਏਨਾ...?
ਅਜ ਜਾਣਾ, ਕਲ ਆਉਣ ਨੂ ਫੇਰ ਤਯਾਰ...!

ਹੈ ਤਨ ਮਿੱਟੀ, ਕਰ ਆਪਣਾ ਮਨ ਮਿੱਟੀ...
ਮਿੱਟੀ ਰਚੇਯਾ ਏ ਸਕਲ ਸੰਸਾਰ...!
ਬਾਕ਼ੀ ਸਬ ਨੇ ਏ ਮਾਯਾ ਦੇ ਬੰਧਨ...
ਮੋਡੀ ਚੂਕਨਾ ਓਹੀ ਬੰਦੇ ਚਾਰ ...!

ਕਯੋਂ ਰਮਜ਼* ਕਿਸੇ ਨਾ ਜਾਨੀ ਯਾਰ...?
ਰੇਹਾ ਭਟਕਦਾ ਤੂ ਵਿਚ ਬਜ਼ਾਰ...
ਆਖਦਾ ਕਿਸੇ ਨੂ ਕੁਜ ਬੀ ਨਾਹੀ...
ਕਯੋਂ ਜਾਪਦੀ ਫੇਰ ਬੀ ਏ ਜੀਬ ਤਲਵਾਰ...?


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SSA Vikram ji.......sachmuch mere kol shabad nahiN hun thuhadi kalam di tareef karaN lai....har ek line hi bahut khoobsurat hai......badi der baad tusiN Punjabi vich kujh likhia hai.....bahut hi changa laggeya thuhanu padd ke.....eddaN hi likhde rehna....
apna khayal rakhna
duavaN de naal
preet
Sat Siri Akaal preet ji,
ki haal hai thoda...?

mere es qalaam nu padhan te pasaNd karan layee thoda bohat bohat shukriya...
tusiN theek keha, punjabi vich bohat der baad likheya hai....darasal likhya hi bohat der baad hai....kehnde ne ki jadoN koi neend choN jaagda hai ya kise museebat ch huNda hai, taN pehla lafz bande de muNh choN apni maa boli vich hi nikal da hai...mere naal vi kuj eNj hi hai...kuj likhan di sochan laga taN punjabi vich hi alfaaz samne aun lag paye....es layee punjabi vich likhya....

apna khayal rakhna...
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gha’sa na matha, kar-kar sajde...
sun, zara tu kar lae soch-vichaar...!
la'bh raah tu aNdar_da apne…
khol akhaaN, zara ban hushiyaar...!

vikram ji bahut hi khoobsurat vichar pesh kitay ne tusi.

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e' duniya, keh'Nde maNch hai ik...!
tu, maiN, aithe saare kirdaar...
jis rachi e' rachna, o' dikh'da kyoN na...?
sunyaa, sabtoN vada o' rachnakaar...!

Very nice deep, well written ..............

vaaki stanza bhi achy haiN but this one is very new fresh thought and written very uniquely

baba bulle shah yaad aa gaye

Waah waah ramz sajan di hor
ashiq bina na samjhye kaur

je o aan mile diljaani
us to jaan karaaN kurbaani
surat de bich yusuf' saani
alam de vich jisda shor

ashiq firde chup-chuopate
mast sada madmaate
dam zulf de andar paate
othey challe bass na zor

wah waah ramz sajan di hor

jitna yaad tha likh diya
janumanu bhai meri kavita padh kar agar aapko baba bulle shah yaad aa gaye to is se badi baat mere liye koi ho hi nahi sakti....
aapka dil se shukriya....
aur bahut bahut shukriya bulle shah ka likha share karne ke liye....


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god bless u
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gha’sa na matha, kar-kar sajde...
sun, zara tu kar lae soch-vichaar...!
la'bh raah tu aNdar_da apne…
khol akhaaN, zara ban hushiyaar...!

vikram ji bahut hi khoobsurat vichar pesh kitay ne tusi.

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padan te pasaNd karan layee thoda bohat bohat dhanwaadi haiN seep saheb...


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Thodi zyaadaa lambi si... but i enjoyed every bit of it.... maturity saaf chalakadi hai tuhaadi kalam wich.... zaroor likhiaa karo


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Thodi zyaadaa lambi si... but i enjoyed every bit of it.... maturity saaf chalakadi hai tuhaadi kalam wich.... zaroor likhiaa karo
Tilak ji, thanks a lot...tusi padh ke reply karan di sochi mere vaste eho badi vad'di gal hai...thoda bohat bohat shukriya...


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SSA Vikram ji.......sachmuch mere kol shabad nahiN hun thuhadi kalam di tareef karaN lai....har ek line hi bahut khoobsurat hai......badi der baad tusiN Punjabi vich kujh likhia hai.....bahut hi changa laggeya thuhanu padd ke.....eddaN hi likhde rehna....
apna khayal rakhna
duavaN de naal
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preet ji SSA,

ki haal hai thoda, bade chir toN thonu eithe vekhya ni....shayad aaj kal masroof hoN...lekin mere veer...punjabi section thode qalaamoN to bina adhura jeha lagda hai...meri benti hai ki tusi zaroor toN zaroor kuchh nava likh ke sade naal saNjha karo te kade kade aaNde reha karo...

thoda dost,
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Vikram Ji............ ! Ajj Pehli Vaari Tuhadi Punjabi Nazm Parhi Ay...... Te Parh Ke Sawaad Aa Gaya Ay........ Wah Yaar Tusi Te Punjabi Barri Changi Likhday O..... Ais Nazm Wich Tuhaadi Dungi Soch Nazar Aandi Ay......... Likhday Rawo.... Sada Hasday Wasday Rao........ Mere Wallon Daad Qabool Karo............




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Vikram Ji............ ! Ajj Pehli Vaari Tuhadi Punjabi Nazm Parhi Ay...... Te Parh Ke Sawaad Aa Gaya Ay........ Wah Yaar Tusi Te Punjabi Barri Changi Likhday O..... Ais Nazm Wich Tuhaadi Dungi Soch Nazar Aandi Ay......... Likhday Rawo.... Sada Hasday Wasday Rao........ Mere Wallon Daad Qabool Karo............
allahazrat ahmad shakil sahab ki haal hai thauda...
mainu bohat changa laga thauda meri post te comment karna, bohat bohat shukriya...
punjabi meri ma-boli hai janaab, maiN punjab da rehan wala haN es karke thodi bohat punjabi likh lena haN..thaunu meri eh nazm pasaNd aayee te thauda reply karan da mann baneya..eh gal hi bohat vadi hai mere vaaste...

thaudi daad sir mathe janaab...ik baar pher bohat bohat thanvaad...

rab thaunu khushiyaaN deve, te tusi vi hasde vasde raho...


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