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Hakeekat ke jahaan se door gar khwabon ki dłniya me.... - 23rd November 2015, 11:06 PM

Adaab doston..
Kuch khayaal jinhe yun hee likhti gayi aur ek nazm ubhar kar aayi....unhe aapke sath share kar rahi hoon....

Hakeekat ke jahaan se door gar khwabon ki dłniya me..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum,tumhe sab kuch bataungi...
Vo batein aur vo kisse jo khud se bhi chipati hoon..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum to main sab kuch bataungi..

Bataungi ki kaise kab mere dil me samaye tum.
Dikhaungi ki kis had tak mere nazdeek aaye tum..
Jo aaye ho to ab mujhse kahiin tum door mat jana..
Sataun gar tumhe jo main to mujhse rooth mat jana.

Na jana chhod ke tanha sukoon dil ko na aayega
Tumhare sath hee dil ka suno ye chain jayega..
kasam meri suno tumko na kuch mujhse chhupaoge..
Batati hoon tumhe lo sab...ki ab tum bhi bataoge..

Madhu..



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Adaab doston..
Kuch khayaal jinhe yun hee likhti gayi aur ek nazm ubhar kar aayi....unhe aapke sath share kar rahi hoon....

Hakeekat ke jahaan se door gar khwabon ki dłniya me..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum,tumhe sab kuch bataungi...
Vo batein aur vo kisse jo khud se bhi chipati hoon..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum to main sab kuch bataungi..

Bataungi ki kaise kab mere dil me samaye tum.
Dikhaungi ki kis had tak mere nazdeek aaye tum..
Jo aaye ho to ab mujhse kahiin tum door mat jana..
Sataun gar tumhe jo main to mujhse rooth mat jana.

Na jana chhod ke tanha sukoon dil ko na aayega
Tumhare sath hee dil ka suno ye chain jayega..
kasam meri suno tumko na kuch mujhse chhupaoge..
Batati hoon tumhe lo sab...ki ab tum bhi bataoge..

Madhu..
Khooobsoorat ehsaas........................dil ko choo gaye

Kuch taazgi thi ismein.


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Adaab doston..
Kuch khayaal jinhe yun hee likhti gayi aur ek nazm ubhar kar aayi....unhe aapke sath share kar rahi hoon....

Hakeekat ke jahaan se door gar khwabon ki dłniya me..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum,tumhe sab kuch bataungi...
Vo batein aur vo kisse jo khud se bhi chipati hoon..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum to main sab kuch bataungi..

Bataungi ki kaise kab mere dil me samaye tum.
Dikhaungi ki kis had tak mere nazdeek aaye tum..
Jo aaye ho to ab mujhse kahiin tum door mat jana..
Sataun gar tumhe jo main to mujhse rooth mat jana.

Na jana chhod ke tanha sukoon dil ko na aayega
Tumhare sath hee dil ka suno ye chain jayega..
kasam meri suno tumko na kuch mujhse chhupaoge..
Batati hoon tumhe lo sab...ki ab tum bhi bataoge..

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bahut khoob madhu jee shandaar rahe aapke yeh ehsaas..........................


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Adaab doston..
Kuch khayaal jinhe yun hee likhti gayi aur ek nazm ubhar kar aayi....unhe aapke sath share kar rahi hoon....

Hakeekat ke jahaan se door gar khwabon ki dłniya me..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum,tumhe sab kuch bataungi...
Vo batein aur vo kisse jo khud se bhi chipati hoon..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum to main sab kuch bataungi..

Bataungi ki kaise kab mere dil me samaye tum.
Dikhaungi ki kis had tak mere nazdeek aaye tum..
Jo aaye ho to ab mujhse kahiin tum door mat jana..
Sataun gar tumhe jo main to mujhse rooth mat jana.

Na jana chhod ke tanha sukoon dil ko na aayega
Tumhare sath hee dil ka suno ye chain jayega..
kasam meri suno tumko na kuch mujhse chhupaoge..
Batati hoon tumhe lo sab...ki ab tum bhi bataoge..

Madhu..


waahhhh madhu sahiba.. kamaal ki nazm likh daalii hai aapne is baar ke bas...... mazaa aa gayaa....

khoobsurtee se bayaan kiye hain aapne apne ek ek ehsaas... dil ko andar tak jhakjhorte hue aur kuch sochne ko majboor karte hue......

Dil se yahi duaa hai ke aapki kalam yunhi chalti rahe aur hame aise dilkash nagme sunne milte rahen......

khush rahiye.... saad o aabad rahiye................

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Khooobsoorat ehsaas........................dil ko choo gaye

Kuch taazgi thi ismein.
Shukriya sarika....
Aapka dil chhoo paye ehsaas....sukoon aa gaya is dil ko...

Koshish karoongi aage bhi aap sabko pasand aaye aisa likh sakoon.....

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Ki aapne meri koshish ko padha aur sath diya...

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waahhhh madhu sahiba.. kamaal ki nazm likh daalii hai aapne is baar ke bas...... mazaa aa gayaa....

khoobsurtee se bayaan kiye hain aapne apne ek ek ehsaas... dil ko andar tak jhakjhorte hue aur kuch sochne ko majboor karte hue......

Dil se yahi duaa hai ke aapki kalam yunhi chalti rahe aur hame aise dilkash nagme sunne milte rahen......

khush rahiye.... saad o aabad rahiye................

Shaad.........
waah shaad sahab....kya kahne aapki tareef ke andaaz ke ki bas...sach kahiye to yahi soch rahi thi ki ab tak aapki nazar nahi padi is nazm par ya aapko pasand nahi aayi...........par aapka reply dekhkar is baat ki khushi huyi ki chaliye tawajjo mili ..shukraguzar hun aapki..aate rahiyega........

salamat rahein.......



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Ji saba ji.....khwabon ki duniya ko yun to alfaz me kah pana mushkil hai....

Haan par koshish ki hai.....

Shukriya aapne pasand kiya....

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Adaab doston..
Kuch khayaal jinhe yun hee likhti gayi aur ek nazm ubhar kar aayi....unhe aapke sath share kar rahi hoon....

Hakeekat ke jahaan se door gar khwabon ki dłniya me..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum,tumhe sab kuch bataungi...
Vo batein aur vo kisse jo khud se bhi chipati hoon..
Kabhi mil jaoge jo tum to main sab kuch bataungi..

Bataungi ki kaise kab mere dil me samaye tum.
Dikhaungi ki kis had tak mere nazdeek aaye tum..
Jo aaye ho to ab mujhse kahiin tum door mat jana..
Sataun gar tumhe jo main to mujhse rooth mat jana.

Na jana chhod ke tanha sukoon dil ko na aayega
Tumhare sath hee dil ka suno ye chain jayega..
kasam meri suno tumko na kuch mujhse chhupaoge..
Batati hoon tumhe lo sab...ki ab tum bhi bataoge..

Madhu..
Madhu ji behad khoobsurat ehsaas...aur aap ke andaz e bayan k kayal to hum pahle se hain...
Ek baat muzhe pasand aai wo hai alfazo ki saadgi....har lafz day to day life se hota hai aapka...

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Madhu ji behad khoobsurat ehsaas...aur aap ke andaz e bayan k kayal to hum pahle se hain...
Ek baat muzhe pasand aai wo hai alfazo ki saadgi....har lafz day to day life se hota hai aapka...

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Bhushan ji aap jaise kadra karne wale aur padhne walon ka sath hee hai jo likhne ka hausla deta hai...

Khush huyi aapko dekhkar...dil se shukriya...

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