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Love ankhon ki ankhon se jab baat hogi... - 3rd February 2015, 12:08 PM

Ankho ki ankho se jab baat hogi..
Bin mausam yoonhi barsaat hogi.

Nahi hosh hoga din ka hame..
na khabar ye ki kab raat hogi.

khushnuma hoga har ek manzar..
Ye Zameen jaise kaaynaat hogi.

Khamoshi hogi gawaah us pal ki
Dil ko dil ki jab saugat hogi..

gila koi hoga na hogi shikayat
Doobne ko bas dariya e jazbaat hogi..

Khilegi kali shaakh par fir "madhu"..
Is ujade shajar par nayi paat hogi.



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4th February 2015, 08:05 AM

Wah, bohot khoob Madhu ji.
Har ek sheyr wasl ki aarzoo se labrez.

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Nahi hosh hoga din ka hame..
na khabar ye ki kab raat hogi.

khushnuma hoga har ek manzar..
Ye Zameen jaise kaaynaat hogi.

Khilegi kali shaakh par fir "madhu"..
Is ujade shajar par nayi paat hogi.


Likhte raheiN, khush raheiN.

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4th February 2015, 10:05 AM

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Ankho ki ankho se jab baat hogi..
Bin mausam yoonhi barsaat hogi.

Nahi hosh hoga din ka hame..
na khabar ye ki kab raat hogi.

khushnuma hoga har ek manzar..
Ye Zameen jaise kaaynaat hogi.

Khamoshi hogi gawaah us pal ki
Dil ko dil ki jab saugat hogi..

gila koi hoga na hogi shikayat
Doobne ko bas dariya e jazbaat hogi..

Khilegi kali shaakh par fir "madhu"..
Is ujade shajar par nayi paat hogi.

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Madhu ji........

kyaa khooob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gyaa kamaal likhaa hai .......

likhte rahiye

Shaad....


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12th February 2015, 11:13 AM

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Wah, bohot khoob Madhu ji.
Har ek sheyr wasl ki aarzoo se labrez.

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Nahi hosh hoga din ka hame..
na khabar ye ki kab raat hogi.

khushnuma hoga har ek manzar..
Ye Zameen jaise kaaynaat hogi.

Khilegi kali shaakh par fir "madhu"..
Is ujade shajar par nayi paat hogi.


Likhte raheiN, khush raheiN.

Regards
Pasand karne ka bahut shukriya sagar ji....
aate rahein..
khush rahein....



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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Madhu ji........

kyaa khooob likhaa hai aapne, mazaa aa gyaa kamaal likhaa hai .......

likhte rahiye

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Shukriyaaaaaa.....shaad jeee....

aate rahein...khush rahein.....



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16th April 2015, 03:14 PM

Ankho ki ankho se jab baat hogi..
Bin mausam yoonhi barsaat hogi.

Nahi hosh hoga din ka hame..
na khabar ye ki kab raat hogi.


arry waaaaah .... Madhu jee..

aap ky makhmoor kalaam ny humain bhi makhmoor kar diya ....

dherooN daad qabool kejiye!


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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Ankho ki ankho se jab baat hogi..
Bin mausam yoonhi barsaat hogi.

Nahi hosh hoga din ka hame..
na khabar ye ki kab raat hogi.

khushnuma hoga har ek manzar..
Ye Zameen jaise kaaynaat hogi.

Khamoshi hogi gawaah us pal ki
Dil ko dil ki jab saugat hogi..

gila koi hoga na hogi shikayat
Doobne ko bas dariya e jazbaat hogi..

Khilegi kali shaakh par fir "madhu"..
Is ujade shajar par nayi paat hogi.
Wah Wah Wah...

Umdaa har sher ek se badhkar ek mohtarmaa reham itna kehar na barpaaye is bazm mein ki log hosh mein na aane paayein...

Khush rahiYe salamaat rahiYe aur haan yunhi humhe qatl karte rahiYe



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Umdaa har sher ek se badhkar ek mohtarmaa reham itna kehar na barpaaye is bazm mein ki log hosh mein na aane paayein...

Khush rahiYe salamaat rahiYe aur haan yunhi humhe qatl karte rahiYe
Ye bhi khoob hai....qatl karte rahiye aapne hee kaha hai fir reham kaise karoon.........
dil ki ghahraiyon se aapka shukriya.....khush rahein...
aate rahein....



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Ankho ki ankho se jab baat hogi..
Bin mausam yoonhi barsaat hogi.

Nahi hosh hoga din ka hame..
na khabar ye ki kab raat hogi.

khushnuma hoga har ek manzar..
Ye Zameen jaise kaaynaat hogi.

Khamoshi hogi gawaah us pal ki
Dil ko dil ki jab saugat hogi..

gila koi hoga na hogi shikayat
Doobne ko bas dariya e jazbaat hogi..

Khilegi kali shaakh par fir "madhu"..
Is ujade shajar par nayi paat hogi.


wahhhhh.............kya baat, bahut pyare ehsaas..........daad hazir hai.


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Ankho ki ankho se jab baat hogi..
Bin mausam yoonhi barsaat hogi.

Nahi hosh hoga din ka hame..
na khabar ye ki kab raat hogi.


arry waaaaah .... Madhu jee..

aap ky makhmoor kalaam ny humain bhi makhmoor kar diya ....

dherooN daad qabool kejiye!
Bahut bahut shukriya hassan ji jo aapko hara kalaam pasand aaya...aage bhi sath ki ummeed rahegi...

Aate rahiyega....
salamat rahein...



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Kya baat hai madhuji ..apko padhkar mazaa aa jata hai .. Upar waale ne Jo hunar diya hai apko kabil-e-tareef hai ..
Shukriya janaab....bas upar wale ka karam aur doston ka sath hai jo kuch likhne ka hausla kar pati hoon....

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Bahut hi pyari n khoobsurat lines.... hal-e-dil bayan karti.....


Mudattein hui… Mulakat hue….
Suno… Aie… Zindagi…..
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Bahut hi pyari n khoobsurat lines.... hal-e-dil bayan karti.....
Shukriya ruchika ji...aapko dekhkar bahut achcha laga...
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