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Zindagi Youn Thii - 8th July 2009, 08:27 PM
zindagi youn thi, ke jeene ka bahana tu tha
waqt ki baazi youn thi, ke chal^ne ka sahara tu tha

Hum ne jis jis ko bhi cha^ha tasawwur mein sanam
woh log aate jaate mausum the, aur zamaana tu tha

Ab dil ke kuch pal palat ke aate hein KHwaabon mein
par bey^fikr humdard walon ka tiikhana tu tha

aar^ke kharede the woh haathon mein tiiron ke gul^dasteh
aur sab dekh rahen the, ke neeshana tu tha

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Kahaan doondei unhei hum, ke khood khogaye
Kise kahein hum, ke badnaam hogaye
rakhte hein dil mei apni jaan ko 'raj'
ke unke aanese, dil se yei jaan kabhi na jaaye
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8th July 2009, 10:17 PM
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zindagi youn thi, ke jeene ka bahana tu tha
waqt ki baazi youn thi, ke chal^ne ka sahara tu tha

Hum ne jis jis ko bhi cha^ha tasawwur mein sanam
woh log aate jaate mausum the, aur zamaana tu tha

Ab dil ke kuch pal palat ke aate hein KHwaabon mein
par bey^fikr humdard walon ka tiikhana tu tha

aar^ke kharede the woh haathon mein tiiron ke gul^dasteh
aur sab dekh rahen the, ke neeshana tu tha
Sharma ji.....aapki nazm padhi.....bahut acha likha hai aapne.....nazm ka har sher zindgi ke bahut kareeb laga....aapke har sher ko dil se daad detaa hu.....kabul farmaye.....



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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9th July 2009, 02:36 AM
Shukriya Naresh ji...aap ki daad sar aakhon par. Kafi log es nazam ko pad^ke apne dilbar ko yaad karte hein. Humne tu us uparwale ko yaad karke ye nazam likhi hei.

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Kahaan doondei unhei hum, ke khood khogaye
Kise kahein hum, ke badnaam hogaye
rakhte hein dil mei apni jaan ko 'raj'
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9th July 2009, 02:40 PM
R Sharma ji aapne bahut acchi poetry share ki hai...........yeh nazm/gazal SALMA AAGA (abhinetri/gaayka) jii ki gaaye hue hai.....aapka bahut bahut shukriya yahan share karne ke liye.

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