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22nd August 2015, 12:27 AM
Har kadam imtihaan rakhti hai
zindagi kaisi shaan rakhti hai.
Ek taraf do jahaaN ki daulat hai.
Ek taraf khud ki aan rakhti hai.
Rab ka hee dar dikhayi deta hai
Jab ye mushkil me jaan rakhti hai
jab lage ab kareeb hai manzil
Fasle darmiyaan rakhti hai..
Laakh saugat de khushi ki par
Gam mile ye bhi dhyaan rakhti hai
Chot bhoole na aur na dard ho kam
dil pe gahra nishan rakhti hai..
Kaise samjhoge zindgi ko tum
Khud me kitne jahaan rakhti hai.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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22nd August 2015, 04:02 AM
Ek acchi koshish ek acche khyaal ke sath.. Doosre sher ka kafiya wazn se bahar hai.. aur sher thode kacche se lagte hai halki bayaani ki wajah se.. baaki likhte rahiye nikharte rahiye.. kuch ghalat lage to mazrat khwah hun..
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Ek acchi koshish ek acche khyaal ke sath.. Doosre sher ka kafiya wazn se bahar hai.. aur sher thode kacche se lagte hai halki bayaani ki wajah se.. baaki likhte rahiye nikharte rahiye.. kuch ghalat lage to mazrat khwah hun..
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Bahut Shukriya sifar ji jo aapne mere kalam ko tawajjo di....kafiye ka aib theek karne ki koshish ki hai umeed hai ab sahi hoga....
Aapne kuch ghalat nahi kaha.....
Bayani to sabki alag alag hoti hai... main to bas abhi koshish hee kar rahi hoon ki kuch likh sakoon.
Aage bhi apka sath milta rahe yahi dua hai...
Khush rahein....
Aate rahiye......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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22nd August 2015, 09:06 AM
Madhu iss bar bhi bohut khubsoorat kalaam. dil ki halat bayaa karta hua.
Dusre sher mein jo baat aapne kahi woh dil ko Chu gayi. Sach mein do jahan ki daulat bhi swabhimaan ki keemat nahi laga sakti.
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22nd August 2015, 09:14 AM
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Ek acchi koshish ek acche khyaal ke sath.. Doosre sher ka kafiya wazn se bahar hai.. aur sher thode kacche se lagte hai halki bayaani ki wajah se.. baaki likhte rahiye nikharte rahiye.. kuch ghalat lage to mazrat khwah hun..
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Kunal. Kaise Ho?
Acha laga apko yaha dekhkar aur ye dekh kar Ki aap dusron ko improve karne Mein madad kar rahe hain. Jo Ki tareef se bhi zyada important hai.
Meri request hai Ki iss Ghazal Ki bayangi ko kaise aur mazboot kiya ja sakta hai wo samjhaein jisse hum aur much nayaa seekhein.
Agar Madhu ko bura na lage to...
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22nd August 2015, 11:32 AM
Bhabhi ji main theek hun aap kaise ho.. badi yaad aati hai aapki aur bhaiya ki .. kitna waqt beet gaya .. par ab bhi kal ki baat lagti hai.. khair koi nahi .. main jaanta hun hun tab bhi kareeb the ab bhi kareeb hain..
Jahaan tak ghazal ki baat hai .. madhu ki ghazal padh ke ehsaas hota hai .. abhi sirf behr pe kaam naya naya shuru hua hai.. is liye khyaal ghise nahi jaa rahe .. darasal ye ek musalsal ghazal hai.. jo ek hi baat ki nishaan dehi karti hai.. mere hisaab se ye koi bura nahi hai .. par har sher aap main ek kahaani liye hota hai.. khyaal jitne sapaat honge shayri utni kamzor hogi.. aise main bayaani khyaal ko bacha leti hai.. par yahan aisa bhi nahi hua.. seedhe bhaasha main kaho to sher wo nahi jo ek matlab leke aaye .. sher wo hai jiske paas jaye uska ho jaye .. thodi pecheedgi thoda ghumaav hi shayri hai.. aisa mera maanna hai...
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22nd August 2015, 01:24 PM
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Bhabhi ji main theek hun aap kaise ho.. badi yaad aati hai aapki aur bhaiya ki .. kitna waqt beet gaya .. par ab bhi kal ki baat lagti hai.. khair koi nahi .. main jaanta hun hun tab bhi kareeb the ab bhi kareeb hain..
Jahaan tak ghazal ki baat hai .. madhu ki ghazal padh ke ehsaas hota hai .. abhi sirf behr pe kaam naya naya shuru hua hai.. is liye khyaal ghise nahi jaa rahe .. darasal ye ek musalsal ghazal hai.. jo ek hi baat ki nishaan dehi karti hai.. mere hisaab se ye koi bura nahi hai .. par har sher aap main ek kahaani liye hota hai.. khyaal jitne sapaat honge shayri utni kamzor hogi.. aise main bayaani khyaal ko bacha leti hai.. par yahan aisa bhi nahi hua.. seedhe bhaasha main kaho to sher wo nahi jo ek matlab leke aaye .. sher wo hai jiske paas jaye uska ho jaye .. thodi pecheedgi thoda ghumaav hi shayri hai.. aisa mera maanna hai...
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Sifar sahab...apki parkhi nazaron ne sahi samajha ki behr par kaam naya naya shuru hua hai....aur ye bhi ki ye ek musalsal ghazal hai jo ek hee baat kahti hai........to is par koi..baat nahi kahni mujhe.
main to khud hee janti hoon ki shayri ki duniya me abhi bahut kachchi hoon main...jo thoda bahut seekha hai sdc par hee seekha aur jana...kitni pecheeda aur ghumavdaar hai ye to nahi janti...haan ye zaroor janti hoon ki ek art hai ye jo lagatar koshish karne se hee nikharti hai.....isiliye aap jaise achche shayron ki rai ka hamesha intzaar rahta hai mujhe....
Aap sdc par yun hee ate rahein aur logon ko padhe apne mashware dein yahi kahna chahoongi...taki hamare ilm me izafa ho...
Khush rahein...
Aage bhi aapke sath ki umeed rakhti hoon.......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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25th August 2015, 09:17 AM
waahhh madhu saahiba kyaa kahun kis haseen kareegaree se aapne apnii is gahzal ko sajaaya hai aur bazm ko nawaazaa hai.....
bbahut khoob lagi hame aapki ye peshkash..... ahar sher bahut khoob hai.... daad bator len dher saaree......
likhti rahen khush rahen.....
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25th August 2015, 12:11 PM
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Har kadam imtihaan rakhti hai
zindagi kaisi shaan rakhti hai.
Ek taraf do jahaaN ki daulat hai.
Ek taraf khud ki aan rakhti hai.
Rab ka hee dar dikhayi deta hai
Jab ye mushkil me jaan rakhti hai
jab lage ab kareeb hai manzil
Fasle darmiyaan rakhti hai..
Laakh saugat de khushi ki par
Gam mile ye bhi dhyaan rakhti hai
Chot bhoole na aur na dard ho kam
dil pe gahra nishan rakhti hai..
Kaise samjhoge zindgi ko tum
Khud me kitne jahaan rakhti hai.
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!
Madhuji,
behad khubsurat Gazal huii hai.... har ashaar ba-kamaal hai.....
dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad......
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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25th August 2015, 10:18 PM
wah madhu jee behtreen khyaal pesh kiye hain aapne
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27th August 2015, 02:38 PM
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Bhabhi ji main theek hun aap kaise ho.. badi yaad aati hai aapki aur bhaiya ki .. kitna waqt beet gaya .. par ab bhi kal ki baat lagti hai.. khair koi nahi .. main jaanta hun hun tab bhi kareeb the ab bhi kareeb hain..
Jahaan tak ghazal ki baat hai .. madhu ki ghazal padh ke ehsaas hota hai .. abhi sirf behr pe kaam naya naya shuru hua hai.. is liye khyaal ghise nahi jaa rahe .. darasal ye ek musalsal ghazal hai.. jo ek hi baat ki nishaan dehi karti hai.. mere hisaab se ye koi bura nahi hai .. par har sher aap main ek kahaani liye hota hai.. khyaal jitne sapaat honge shayri utni kamzor hogi.. aise main bayaani khyaal ko bacha leti hai.. par yahan aisa bhi nahi hua.. seedhe bhaasha main kaho to sher wo nahi jo ek matlab leke aaye .. sher wo hai jiske paas jaye uska ho jaye .. thodi pecheedgi thoda ghumaav hi shayri hai.. aisa mera maanna hai...
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27th August 2015, 08:00 PM
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Har kadam imtihaan rakhti hai
zindagi kaisi shaan rakhti hai.
Ek taraf do jahaaN ki daulat hai.
Ek taraf khud ki aan rakhti hai.
Rab ka hee dar dikhayi deta hai
Jab ye mushkil me jaan rakhti hai
jab lage ab kareeb hai manzil
Fasle darmiyaan rakhti hai..
Laakh saugat de khushi ki par
Gam mile ye bhi dhyaan rakhti hai
Chot bhoole na aur na dard ho kam
dil pe gahra nishan rakhti hai..
Kaise samjhoge zindgi ko tum
Khud me kitne jahaan rakhti hai.
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Madhu ji Namaskaar.....aapka peshkarda kalaam padaa...bahut hi sunder ban paaya hai....
SheroN adaaygi our unmeiN ahsaas saada our khoob haiN .... GunijanoN ki baatoN par dhyaan doge to hunar ko tarashne meiN samay nahiN lagega....Merii jaanib se is behtareen peshkash par dhairoN daad !!! sabhaar..
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Madhu iss bar bhi bohut khubsoorat kalaam. dil ki halat bayaa karta hua.
Dusre sher mein jo baat aapne kahi woh dil ko Chu gayi. Sach mein do jahan ki daulat bhi swabhimaan ki keemat nahi laga sakti.
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Sarika..Khushi huyi ki sher aapke dil ko chhoo saka...
Ghazal ko pasand karne ka shukriya.....
Aati rahiyega....
Khush rahein..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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Har kadam imtihaan rakhti hai
zindagi kaisi shaan rakhti hai.
Ek taraf do jahaaN ki daulat hai.
Ek taraf khud ki aan rakhti hai.
Rab ka hee dar dikhayi deta hai
Jab ye mushkil me jaan rakhti hai
jab lage ab kareeb hai manzil
Fasle darmiyaan rakhti hai..
Laakh saugat de khushi ki par
Gam mile ye bhi dhyaan rakhti hai
Chot bhoole na aur na dard ho kam
dil pe gahra nishan rakhti hai..
Kaise samjhoge zindgi ko tum
Khud me kitne jahaan rakhti hai.
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Madhu, bahut khoobsurat khayal pesh kiye hai tumne, tumhare khayaloN se ru-b-ru hona accha lga, sabhi sher acche bane haiN, muje yeh aik sher bahut hi khaas lga.
Rab ka hee dar dikhayi deta hai
Jab ye mushkil me jaan rakhti hai
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Accha likha hai madhu jee....yun jee likhti rahiye.....
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waahhh madhu saahiba kyaa kahun kis haseen kareegaree se aapne apnii is gahzal ko sajaaya hai aur bazm ko nawaazaa hai.....
bbahut khoob lagi hame aapki ye peshkash..... ahar sher bahut khoob hai.... daad bator len dher saaree......
likhti rahen khush rahen.....
shaad...
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Shaad ji..mere alfaaz aapko pasand aaye bahut achcha laga....daad ka dil se shukriya
Bas sath ki guzarish hai....koshish zari rahegi...
Aate rahiye....
Khush rahiye...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!!
Madhuji,
behad khubsurat Gazal huii hai.... har ashaar ba-kamaal hai.....
dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad......
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Shukriya adeil sahab.......yun hee sath dete rahiye taki likhne ka hausla milta rahe.......
Takecare..
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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wah madhu jee behtreen khyaal pesh kiye hain aapne
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duaon ke saath
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Bas meri har rachna ko aapka sath milta rahe ...
Yahi dua hai...
Bahut dhanywaad apka...
Regards..
Madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Madhu ji Namaskaar.....aapka peshkarda kalaam padaa...bahut hi sunder ban paaya hai....
SheroN adaaygi our unmeiN ahsaas saada our khoob haiN .... GunijanoN ki baatoN par dhyaan doge to hunar ko tarashne meiN samay nahiN lagega....Merii jaanib se is behtareen peshkash par dhairoN daad !!! sabhaar..
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namaskaar harash ji...
aap jaise umda shayar se tareef mil jaye to bahut khushi milti hai dil ko...
aage bhi aap yun hee hausla afzai karte rahenge aisi ummeed karti hun....bahut shukriya aapka.
regards
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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Madhu, bahut khoobsurat khayal pesh kiye hai tumne, tumhare khayaloN se ru-b-ru hona accha lga, sabhi sher acche bane haiN, muje yeh aik sher bahut hi khaas lga.
Rab ka hee dar dikhayi deta hai
Jab ye mushkil me jaan rakhti hai
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Shukriya di...achcha laga aapko mere khayaal pasand aaye...
Sher ko khaas tawajjo dene ka bhi shukriya..
Aise hee sath banaye rakhiyega...
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अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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3rd January 2016, 01:02 PM
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Har kadam imtihaan rakhti hai
zindagi kaisi shaan rakhti hai.
Ek taraf do jahaaN ki daulat hai.
Ek taraf khud ki aan rakhti hai.
Rab ka hee dar dikhayi deta hai
Jab ye mushkil me jaan rakhti hai
jab lage ab kareeb hai manzil
Fasle darmiyaan rakhti hai..
Laakh saugat de khushi ki par
Gam mile ye bhi dhyaan rakhti hai
Chot bhoole na aur na dard ho kam
dil pe gahra nishan rakhti hai..
Kaise samjhoge zindgi ko tum
Khud me kitne jahaan rakhti hai.
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Madhu ji
Aapki ghazal padhi. Achche khayal aur unehein achche se pesh karne ki koshish. Aapke iss kalam par Kunaal ne kaafi kuchh keh hi diya hai. Haan main bas yahi add karna chahuuNga ke Ghazal ko aap iss nazariye se dkheN to aap samjheNgi ki Ghazal ki kya zaruurat hai.
Khayal to sabse aham hai hi, ussko pesh karne ka andaaz aur bhi uss se zyada aham hai. Yaani seedhe alfaaz maiN aapki adaaygi meiN nayapan ho. Kuchh bhi expected ya predictable na ho. Har sher ko agar aap iss yardstick pe parkheNgi to aapko kaafi madad milegi.
Bahr aur wazn ki aapko achchi samajh hai mere Khayal se. Aur waqt ke saath aur ravaaN ho jayeNgi aap.
Khush raheiN
khaksaar
Praveen
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
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Accha likha hai madhu jee....yun jee likhti rahiye.....
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shukriya arvind ji....
sath dete rahiyega.....
apna khayaal rakhein..
madhu.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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22nd January 2016, 01:26 AM
Kaafi umda likhti hain aap madhu ji
Mein kab se reply karne ki koshish me id banaye baitha tha. Magar activation me bohot der lagi. Bohot dino se main aap ki shayri padh raha hun...ek se badh kar ek hain....lajawab....
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Meri aur se pesh hai
Humne apne aap ko jalaya hai
kisi ke ghar ko roshan rakhne ke liye
Ae zindegi tu aur imtehan naa le
Tu bewafa nikla to kya,
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Originally Posted by prasaxena
Madhu ji
Aapki ghazal padhi. Achche khayal aur unehein achche se pesh karne ki koshish. Aapke iss kalam par Kunaal ne kaafi kuchh keh hi diya hai. Haan main bas yahi add karna chahuuNga ke Ghazal ko aap iss nazariye se dkheN to aap samjheNgi ki Ghazal ki kya zaruurat hai.
Khayal to sabse aham hai hi, ussko pesh karne ka andaaz aur bhi uss se zyada aham hai. Yaani seedhe alfaaz maiN aapki adaaygi meiN nayapan ho. Kuchh bhi expected ya predictable na ho. Har sher ko agar aap iss yardstick pe parkheNgi to aapko kaafi madad milegi.
Bahr aur wazn ki aapko achchi samajh hai mere Khayal se. Aur waqt ke saath aur ravaaN ho jayeNgi aap.
Khush raheiN
khaksaar
Praveen
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Namaskaar praveen ji...
Mujhe khushi huyi ki aapne na kewal ghazal ko padha balki...apna vaqt nikal kar aur behtar likhne ka tareeka bhi samjhaya vo bhi bahut seedhe shabdon me...koshish jari rahegi... aap aage bhi mujhe raah dikhate rahenge yahi ummmeed karti hun.....
Dil se shukriya aapka....
Regards
Madhu...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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17th February 2016, 12:29 PM
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Originally Posted by Phoenix
Kaafi umda likhti hain aap madhu ji
Mein kab se reply karne ki koshish me id banaye baitha tha. Magar activation me bohot der lagi. Bohot dino se main aap ki shayri padh raha hun...ek se badh kar ek hain....lajawab....
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Phoenix
Meri aur se pesh hai
Humne apne aap ko jalaya hai
kisi ke ghar ko roshan rakhne ke liye
Ae zindegi tu aur imtehan naa le
Tu bewafa nikla to kya,
hum zinda rehne ki himmat rakte hain
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Bahut khushi huyi ye jaankar ki..aapko mera likha pasand aaya.....
Bas aise hee padhte rahiyega...
Hausla afzai ka behad shukriya.....
Aate rahiyega. ..
Tkcr
Madhu
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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