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Exclamation maiN tujhe PAATA raha, KHOTA raha...!! - 18th June 2010, 03:12 AM

Bazm ko ek bar fir is GHAYAL MEHFIL ka salaam, Ye jaanta hooN ab aadat nahiN rahi meri itni jali jaldi aane ki par aaj kal khaali baitha hun aur logoN ko sunta, padhta rehta huN, to kuch khayal aa hi jaate haiN dil me...bas bahut arse baad ek nazm likhne ki kosish si ki hai,umeed karta huN aap sabko jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga...!!



JazbaatoN me bikhra hua sa, main ek mohabbat ka pyasa,, Vo mujhse, main unse khafaa sa, Fir bhi aaye kyun ek mazaa sa,, Darr lagta hai khone ka mujhe, Jo vo paas aate haiN zara sa,, Na poocho mera thikaanaa koi, dil me kabhi sadak pe banajara sa,, Vo phool ki komal pankhudhi, main oos ki tarah lipta hua sa,, Beech bhanvar tha vo “ghayal”, Jo laga tha mujhe kinaaraa sa..........




GhamoN ka bojh main dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Na kabhi aayi khushi ki bahar,
Na mila mujhe mera vo pyar.
Apne daaman ko sukha-sukha ke,
AshqoN se use bhigota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Dard bhi ab mera deewana hai,
Apna to bas gham ka khajana hai.
MaiN to hoon bas wo “ghayal”,
Jo khud ko kaanteN chubhota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha..


Chalta raha yuNhi zindagi ka safar
Bhatakta raha maiN dar-ba-dar
Lakh marham kiye maseeha* ne,
Par dard beshumaar yunhi hota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

*Chikitsak, doctor...!!

Mujhe dekh,aaj khuda ne ashq baha diye,
Kaha aur kya dooN,sare gham to saha diye.
Jitni kosish ki tujhe bhulane ki,
Utna hi tujhme maiN khota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Jeest* me faila shab** ka andhera raha,
Na main tera raha,na tu mera raha.
Raat bhar,ek-duje ko yaad kar,
Tu bhi roti rahi,maiN bhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

*zindagi, life **raat, night

Ghamon ka bojh maiN dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.
Jise dhunda kiya zindagi ke safar me,
Usi maut ki godd me maiN ab tak sota raha...
sota raha, bas sota hi reh gaya....



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18th June 2010, 08:07 AM

Ghamon ka bojh maiN dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.
Jise dhunda kiya zindagi ke safar me,
Usi maut ki godd me maiN ab tak sota raha...

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Very Nice Creation...

dil se daad hazir hai......yunhi behtar qalaam ke saath humesha aate rahen...bazm ki raunk badhaate rahen....khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....




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Bazm ko ek bar fir is GHAYAL MEHFIL ka salaam, Ye jaanta hooN ab aadat nahiN rahi meri itni jali jaldi aane ki par aaj kal khaali baitha hun aur logoN ko sunta, padhta rehta huN, to kuch khayal aa hi jaate haiN dil me...bas bahut arse baad ek nazm likhne ki kosish si ki hai,umeed karta huN aap sabko jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga...!!



JazbaatoN me bikhra hua sa, main ek mohabbat ka pyasa,, Vo mujhse, main unse khafaa sa, Fir bhi aaye kyun ek mazaa sa,, Darr lagta hai khone ka mujhe, Jo vo paas aate haiN zara sa,, Na poocho mera thikaanaa koi, dil me kabhi sadak pe banajara sa,, Vo phool ki komal pankhudhi, main oos ki tarah lipta hua sa,, Beech bhanvar tha vo “ghayal”, Jo laga tha mujhe kinaaraa sa..........




GhamoN ka bojh main dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Na kabhi aayi khushi ki bahar,
Na mila mujhe mera vo pyar.
Apne daaman ko sukha-sukha ke,
AshqoN se use bhigota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Dard bhi ab mera deewana hai,
Apna to bas gham ka khajana hai.
MaiN to hoon bas wo “ghayal”,
Jo khud ko kaanteN chubhota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha..


Chalta raha yuNhi zindagi ka safar
Bhatakta raha maiN dar-ba-dar
Lakh marham kiye maseeha* ne,
Par dard beshumaar yunhi hota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

*Chikitsak, doctor...!!

Mujhe dekh,aaj khuda ne ashq baha diye,
Kaha aur kya dooN,sare gham to saha diye.
Jitni kosish ki tujhe bhulane ki,
Utna hi tujhme maiN khota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Jeest* me faila shab** ka andhera raha,
Na main tera raha,na tu mera raha.
Raat bhar,ek-duje ko yaad kar,
Tu bhi roti rahi,maiN bhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

*zindagi, life **raat, night

Ghamon ka bojh maiN dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.
Jise dhunda kiya zindagi ke safar me,
Usi maut ki godd me maiN ab tak sota raha...
sota raha, bas sota hi reh gaya....

ghayal bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob nazam ka ek ek shabd dil ko choo gaya aur khaastaur se ye line to bahut dil me ghus gayeen

Dard bhi ab mera deewana hai,
Apna to bas gham ka khajana hai.
MaiN to hoon bas wo “ghayal”,
Jo khud ko kaanteN chubhota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha..


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GhamoN ka bojh main dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Na kabhi aayi khushi ki bahar,
Na mila mujhe mera vo pyar.
Apne daaman ko sukha-sukha ke,
AshqoN se use bhigota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


BOHAT KHOOB LUCKY JI..........




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Jeest* me faila shab** ka andhera raha,
Na main tera raha,na tu mera raha.
Raat bhar,ek-duje ko yaad kar,
Tu bhi roti rahi,maiN bhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Bohat khoob Ghayal saheb.....


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Ghamon ka bojh maiN dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.
Jise dhunda kiya zindagi ke safar me,
Usi maut ki godd me maiN ab tak sota raha...

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dil se daad hazir hai......yunhi behtar qalaam ke saath humesha aate rahen...bazm ki raunk badhaate rahen....khush rahen...

apna khayal rakhen...
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ghayal bhai
radhe radhe

bahut khoob nazam ka ek ek shabd dil ko choo gaya aur khaastaur se ye line to bahut dil me ghus gayeen

Dard bhi ab mera deewana hai,
Apna to bas gham ka khajana hai.
MaiN to hoon bas wo “ghayal”,
Jo khud ko kaanteN chubhota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha..


aise hi likhte rahen
duaon ke saath

Ishq ji pranaam,

jan kar behad khushi hui ki apne hume padha saraha aur pasand kiya, bas yahi dua rahegi ki aapka saath aage bhi yuNhi ban rahe....!!



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Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Na kabhi aayi khushi ki bahar,
Na mila mujhe mera vo pyar.
Apne daaman ko sukha-sukha ke,
AshqoN se use bhigota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


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Raat bhar,ek-duje ko yaad kar,
Tu bhi roti rahi,maiN bhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Bohat khoob Ghayal saheb.....

sajid sahab aapki daad humare sar aaNkhoN pe,bas aage v aap yuNhi saath nibhaate rahiye....!!



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Bazm ko ek bar fir is GHAYAL MEHFIL ka salaam, Ye jaanta hooN ab aadat nahiN rahi meri itni jali jaldi aane ki par aaj kal khaali baitha hun aur logoN ko sunta, padhta rehta huN, to kuch khayal aa hi jaate haiN dil me...bas bahut arse baad ek nazm likhne ki kosish si ki hai,umeed karta huN aap sabko jyada niraash nahiN kiya hoga...!!



JazbaatoN me bikhra hua sa, main ek mohabbat ka pyasa,, Vo mujhse, main unse khafaa sa, Fir bhi aaye kyun ek mazaa sa,, Darr lagta hai khone ka mujhe, Jo vo paas aate haiN zara sa,, Na poocho mera thikaanaa koi, dil me kabhi sadak pe banajara sa,, Vo phool ki komal pankhudhi, main oos ki tarah lipta hua sa,, Beech bhanvar tha vo “ghayal”, Jo laga tha mujhe kinaaraa sa..........




GhamoN ka bojh main dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Na kabhi aayi khushi ki bahar,
Na mila mujhe mera vo pyar.
Apne daaman ko sukha-sukha ke,
AshqoN se use bhigota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Dard bhi ab mera deewana hai,
Apna to bas gham ka khajana hai.
MaiN to hoon bas wo “ghayal”,
Jo khud ko kaanteN chubhota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha..


Chalta raha yuNhi zindagi ka safar
Bhatakta raha maiN dar-ba-dar
Lakh marham kiye maseeha* ne,
Par dard beshumaar yunhi hota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

*Chikitsak, doctor...!!

Mujhe dekh,aaj khuda ne ashq baha diye,
Kaha aur kya dooN,sare gham to saha diye.
Jitni kosish ki tujhe bhulane ki,
Utna hi tujhme maiN khota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


Jeest* me faila shab** ka andhera raha,
Na main tera raha,na tu mera raha.
Raat bhar,ek-duje ko yaad kar,
Tu bhi roti rahi,maiN bhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

*zindagi, life **raat, night

Ghamon ka bojh maiN dhota raha,
Raat bhar bas yunhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.
Jise dhunda kiya zindagi ke safar me,
Usi maut ki godd me maiN ab tak sota raha...
sota raha, bas sota hi reh gaya....
bhayee nazm bahut achi khoobsrat .....

Jeest* me faila shab** ka andhera raha,
Na main tera raha,na tu mera raha.
Raat bhar,ek-duje ko yaad kar,
Tu bhi roti rahi,maiN bhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.


ye wala ek dam sateek hai,

par aapne jo punchline use ki hai
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.

woh har stanze se mail nahi khaati dikhi . rabt kam nazar aya
isliye mera ye wala favt raha
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bhala ho vikas bhai aapka ki aapne kahi ye baat, ye takreebn 3 sal purani rachna hai, to vo galtiyaaN mujhe v dikhiN par kya kareN dekhna chahta tha ki koi kuch kehta hai ya nahiN, waise aap v jante haiN ki, mujhe likhne ke maamle me bandisheN kabhi ras na aayiN, aur haaN waise yaar ye rabt jaise heavy words ka to istemaal na karo bhai, samajh me badi mushkil se aate haiN...!! waise bas yahi dua rhegi k aap jaise sukhanwar hume padhte rahen aur sikhaate raheN.....!!



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[QUOTE=ghayal_shayar;398205]bhala ho vikas bhai aapka ki aapne kahi ye baat,

Ab humari baat to hum hi kahenge na bhayee

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ye takreebn 3 sal purani rachna hai, to vo galtiyaaN mujhe v dikhiN par kya kareN dekhna chahta tha ki koi kuch kehta hai ya nahiN, waise aap v jante haiN ki, mujhe likhne ke maamle me bandisheN kabhi ras na aayiN, aur haaN waise yaar ye rabt jaise heavy words ka to istemaal na karo bhai, samajh me badi mushkil se aate haiN...!! waise bas yahi dua rhegi k aap jaise sukhanwar hume padhte rahen aur sikhaate raheN.....!!

haha , ab bhayeee jaise laga kah diya ......... aur bandish ki to abat hi nahi
maiN inme aapse bhi kaccha huN

aur hum jaise sukhnwaar ... ha ha
hum jaise bhayee hi hote hai

sukhnwaar lafz to ghalib saab ne aisa apne makte maiN joda hai ki mere jaiseoN ki himmat nahi hai, is lafz ko pakdne ki

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hehehehehe, theek hai bhai chand log dhang se padnhe wale v chahiye nahiN to beda garq hai samjho...!!



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Jeest* me faila shab** ka andhera raha,
Na main tera raha,na tu mera raha.
Raat bhar,ek-duje ko yaad kar,
Tu bhi roti rahi,maiN bhi rota raha.
Zindagi ke is safar me,
Maut ka intzaar hota raha
MaiN tujhe paata raha, khota raha.
Gazal ke ek ek bandd se jhalkte darad ne ankh nam kar di , Hui ankh nam aur ye dil muskuraya , To sathi koi bhoola yaad aya. Umda shayri ki behtreen misaal, lekin apke takhalus "Ghayal" vala bandd agar akhir mei ata to jyada achha rahta.
RAATON KO UTH UTH KE JINKE LIE ROTE HAIN'
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praveen sahab humari khushnaseebi ki aapko humare ye chand alfaaz pasand aaye, maiN to nayi ghazal daalne ke mood me tha aapka reply aaya, to socha pehle javaab de dooN, umeed karta huN aage v aapka saath yuNhi bana rahega....!!



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