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15th September 2009, 01:37 PM
Aap sabhi ki farmaish par maine es kavita ko ek hi sutra main diya hai
aasha karta hoon ki aapko yeh pasand aayegi..... Ek student ka jivan .....kaisa hota hai kya aapnay mehsoos kiya hai..............? Kitni mehnat kay baad wo fal ki kaamna karta hai ............ Kabhi socha hai aapnay ...............??????????? Aap bhi kabhi student thay kaisa tha aapka jivan Bas aise hi kuch lamhoo ko kagaz per utara hai maine........ Un khatti methi yaadon ko sanjo kar rakha tha ...........jab main bhi student tha...... Bas aap sabhi say ek vinti hai ki ager meri kavita aapko pasand aaye to hoslaaffzai ZAROOR kiyega........ MAIN NAHIN DARTA PARLYA SAY MOUT YAA TOOFAAN SAY.. KANPTI HAI ROUH MERI PER SADA IMMTIHAAN SAY.. IS BHAYANAK BHOOT KO KISNAY KIYA IJJAAD THA.. WO AADMI THA YAA KISE SHAITAAN KI AULAAD THA..... PATH PADNA YAAD KARNA YAAD KARKAY SOUCNA SOUCHNA LIKHNA LIKH KER USAY FIR SOUCHNA TYE-TATA TYE-TATA, RAAT BHAR RAT TA PRABHU... PUSTAKON KAY RAAT DIN PANNAY PALT TA HOON PRABHU.... BHAGYA MAIN lekin NA JANAY KOUN SA ABHISHAAP HAI RAAT KO RAT TA HOON SUBHA MAINDAAN MILTA SAF HAI....... Ab har sabject ko hi dakhiye wo kitni jehmat kata hai um main safal honye kay liye............... Subject: MATH: -aank kay atirikat mujhko aur kuch bhata nahi, kya karron lekin guna karna mujhay aata nahin .. aakal alzabra humari jayegi jad say pacha, teen main say chai gaye aur kya baaki bacha....ITIHAAS :- hai naash ho itihaas ka san kay samnder beh gaye , mar gaye wo log ronay kay liye hum raha gaye ... sharjahan ,babar,humayoun aur akhbar aap tha, koun tha beta na janye koun kiska baap yha....BHUGOLE: -bhugool mein gat varsh aaya gol hai kaise dhara, aur maine ek pal main likh diya uttar khara.. gol hai puri kachori,poop papad gol hai gol, hai ladoo,jalaybi,rashgulla bhi gol hai.. golgappa gol hai muha bhi humara gol hai is liye hay master ji yeh dhara bhi gol hai.. Hindi :- kya karo hindi maza ismaie mujhay aata nahin .. lakha sar jhangjhorta hoon kuch samjh pata nahin.... gadhya ho yaa padhya dono kaal hai mere liye.. yeh vyakraan sabsay bada janjaal hai mere liye.... hai hindi ki jagha main aaj hinda likha gaya .. bhains ko pashu ki jagha main aaj parinda likh gaya .... Sankrit :-ram ramo ram ramo hai pyari sanskritaum.. mar gaya mai tum na aaye racha gacha kacu maram.. andmandam randkhandam randmam cata chatam.. chat roti pat dalam chat pat safa chatam..... ju- ju pariksha ka samayai tyo tyo nikat aanay laga pustakon mai ek vastu hi nazar aanay lagi **** kar sare saharay aa gaya hoon dwaar par mar ghunsa laat thapad kintoo beda paar kar thay sudama bhi humaray ,humaray puravajo kay pita mere pitama kay pitama kay pitama kay pita hay dayamai har terha say mai daya ka patra hoon naam hai vichitra mera barvin ka chatra hoon......... Aapko meri yeh kavita pasand aaye..... To plzzzzzzz kanjoosi na karay daad dainay ka kasht karay Aap sabhi ka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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12 ka chhaatr hu -
15th September 2009, 02:15 PM
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Ham kadar karte he aapki soch ki, jo purane din jo paak saaf the wo yad kara die. Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,, Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda, Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M |
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Ham kadar karte he aapki soch ki, jo purane din jo paak saaf the wo yad kara die. |
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15th September 2009, 02:19 PM
bahut khoob he aapke alfaaj sarkar, or anmol bii jo purane din yad aa gae jinme koi tension nahi hua karti thi.
Thanx Aapka habib Ye kya kam tha k ik mulakat ho bus, tumhari dosti me kambakht hmara dil gya, hm drd ko khuda maan bethe he ab,mere maran k bahane me sath tumhara bn gya,, Kya malum hqiqat me sath dega khuda, Khwab aya k hmara ek jakham sil gya...M |
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16th September 2009, 06:16 PM
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bhai habib aadaab aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya......... bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega .... main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............ aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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16th September 2009, 06:52 PM
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hi vichitra ji kahaan say sochtay hai aap .................lagta hai sabi ki soch khatum hone kay baad bas.............aisay hi sochkar likhtay raho bindass hum ko aap ki yeh sanskrit wali thinking achchi lagi ............ matwala chatak |
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17th September 2009, 09:24 PM
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aadaab aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya......... bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega .... main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............ aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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19th September 2009, 07:21 AM
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aadaab aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya......... bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega .... main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............ aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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21st September 2009, 03:16 PM
[quote=vichiter;366607]bhai MATWALA JI
aadaab aur aapnay jo meri rachna ko saraha hai uskay liye aapka bhout bhout shukriya......... bas aap aisay hi apna pyaar banaye rakhiyega .... main aap ki seva main aur kuch bhi likhta rahounga............ AAP AISE HI MUJHKO PROTSAHIT KARATAY RAHIYE GA AAPKA VICHITRA Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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22nd September 2009, 10:05 PM
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28th September 2009, 12:58 PM
bhai jaan is sawaal ko maine aapki har gazal aur kavita par laga diya hai jaldi say jawaab dena .................
bhaiya ji ko namshkaar bhaiya aapki shayri main bada dard hai kehtay hai ki yeh dard jab hota hai shayri main jab khood koi dil par dard kha chuka hota hai to kya aapnay bhi koi dard apnay dil main chipaya hua hai jaldi say jawaab dena matwala chatak |
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29th September 2009, 08:57 PM
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aap kaisay hain aur kahaan hai reply soon aapko vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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8th October 2009, 09:19 PM
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dard kya hota hai aur kahaan say aata hai wo aap hi samjh do aapka vichitra Tu nahin hai mere sath to mushkilo ka hai safer...... Tham lay tu mera daman meri khushiyan nahi hai koi..... Na meri manjil na mera karwaan na humsafer hai koi............ |
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