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Thumbs down guhm - 14th January 2005, 10:00 AM

Zuban khamosh dil gumsum mager yeh aankh nam kyoun hai, jo apne hi na ho paaye unhe khone ka gam kyoun hai.
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Thumbs up Keep it up! - 14th January 2005, 11:55 PM

Bahut accha likha hai. so simple & very nice. I like this one...
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15th January 2005, 05:05 PM

Hi Pradeep Ji,

Very subtle n sweet. Bohot khoob. Bas uhi likhte raho.


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