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Exclamation Geet: Ishq Karta Hai Intzaar Aaja...! - 17th August 2010, 09:24 PM

Aadaab...

Aaj bohat dinoN baad ishq pe likhne ki koshish kee hai .. chahta to tha Ishq section mai post karuN.. par yahaaN rishta puraana hai to yahiN chala aaya ... Ek naya geet bazm ki nazar kar raha huN .. iska wazn "Tumko dekha to ye khyaal aaya" jo jagjeet saahab ki mashoor ghazal hai uske hisaab se hai.. gunguna ke dekhiyega..

Beh'r:- Kafiif musaddas maKhbuun mahzuuf maqtuu (2122-1212-22 - In digit)

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इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा...
मुझको भी तुझसे ही है प्यार आजा..


रुकते है चलते है कदम तन्हा ...
जिंदगी का सफ़र हुआ तन्हा ...
रहते पल पल हैं बेकरार आजा ...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा ...


ख्वाबों को राहों मे बिछा दूंगा
पलकों मे तुझको यूँ छुपा लूँगा
तुझको देखूं मैं बेशुमार आजा ...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा..


अब तो पल पल ही मेरी जाँ जाए ..
दूरियां भी न अब सही जाए ..
जी लूँ करके तेरा दीदार आजा


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा ...


इस मोहब्बत की तू कहानी है ...
गर दिवाना मैं तू दिवानी है..
जुल्फ तेरी दूँ मैं संवार आजा..


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा...


जाम खाली है दिल भी खाली है
आज किस्मत भी आजमा ली है ...
बन के महफ़िल मे तू बहार आजा...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा..



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In Roman:-

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Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…
Mujhko bhi tujhse hi hai pyaar aaja…


Rukte hai chalte hai kadam tanhaa…
Zindgi kaa safar hua tanhaa..
Rehte hai pal pal be-karaar aaja…


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja …


KhwaboN ko raahoN maiN bicha duNga..
PalkoN maiN tujhko yuN chupa luNga…
Tujhko dekhuN maiN be-shumaar aaja..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja..


Ab to pal pal hi meri jaaN jaaye..
DooriyaaN bhi na ab sahi jaayeN..
Jee luN karke tera didaar aaja..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


Is mohabbat ki tu kahaani hai …
Gar diwaana maiN, tu diwaani hai …
Julf teri duN maiN sawaar aaja..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


Jaam khaali hai dil bhi khaali hai…
Aaj kismet bhi aazmaa lee hai …
Ban ke mehfil maiN tu bahaar aaja ..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


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Love 17th August 2010, 09:38 PM

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Aadaab...

Aaj bohat dinoN baad ishq pe likhne ki koshish kee hai .. chahta to tha Ishq section mai post karuN.. par yahaaN rishta puraana hai to yahiN chala aaya ... Ek naya geet bazm ki nazar kar raha huN .. iska wazn "Tumko dekha to ye khyaal aaya" jo jagjeet saahab ki mashoor ghazal hai uske hisaab se hai.. gunguna ke dekhiyega..

Beh'r:- Kafiif musaddas maKhbuun mahzuuf maqtuu (2122-1212-22 - In digit)

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इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा...
मुझको भी तुझसे ही है प्यार आजा..


रुकते है चलते है कदम तन्हा ...
जिंदगी का सफ़र हुआ तन्हा ...
रहते पल पल हैं बेकरार आजा ...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा ...


ख्वाबों को राहों मे बिछा दूंगा
पलकों मे तुझको यूँ छुपा लूँगा
तुझको देखूं मैं बेशुमार आजा ...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा..


अब तो पल पल ही मेरी जाँ जाए ..
दूरियां भी न अब सही जाए ..
जी लूँ करके तेरा दीदार आजा


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा ...


इस मोहब्बत की तू कहानी है ...
गर दिवाना मैं तू दिवानी है..
जुल्फ तेरी दूँ मैं संवार आजा..


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा...


जाम खाली है दिल भी खाली है
आज किस्मत भी आजमा ली है ...
बन के महफ़िल मे तू बहार आजा...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा..



========================

In Roman:-

========================

Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…
Mujhko bhi tujhse hi hai pyaar aaja…


Rukte hai chalte hai kadam tanhaa…
Zindgi kaa safar hua tanhaa..
Rehte hai pal pal be-karaar aaja…


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja …


KhwaboN ko raahoN maiN bicha duNga..
PalkoN maiN tujhko yuN chupa luNga…
Tujhko dekhuN maiN be-shumaar aaja..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja..


Ab to pal pal hi meri jaaN jaaye..
DooriyaaN bhi na ab sahi jaayeN..
Jee luN karke tera didaar aaja..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


Is mohabbat ki tu kahaani hai …
Gar diwaana maiN, tu diwaani hai …
Julf teri duN maiN sawaar aaja..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


Jaam khaali hai dil bhi khaali hai…
Aaj kismet bhi aazmaa lee hai …
Ban ke mehfil maiN tu bahaar aaja ..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


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Kunaal (Sifar) :- 17-08-2010
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bahut khoob bada sundar geet likha dil se daad geet ke saare misre khoob hain likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath


Aapka Apna
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'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है


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Kunaal ji, Waaaah!

Bahut achchha mehssos hua aapke geet ko parh kar. Dil khush ho gaya. Mazaa aa gaya janaab!

DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad hmari taraf se... kabool keejiye.

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Kunal Ji... Geet Ki Shabd Rachna Ke Saath ...... Ehsaas Bhi Bahut khoobsurat lage.... Nice Creation ... Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi behtar rachnayeN likhte rahen sadaa .. khush rahen....

duaaon ke saath...




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wow.......................kya baat, kya baat, kyaaaa baat..........bahut majja aaya padkar, gungunaya bhi accha laga......bhai ab aap geetkaar ban jayeN, gazalkaar to pahle se hi haiN....daad kabool farmayeN.

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Bahut khoob Kunaal ji,

Ehasaas dil tak pahunche....Behad hi khubsurat Geet hai....acha hota gar koi ga kar suna deta....!!!!
Dil se daad qubool kijiyega...
Aur agle geet ka intzaar rahega........ Aur wo Shayri-e-dard ki jagah Shayri-e-ishq me post kijiyega....


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इस मोहब्बत की तू कहानी है ...
गर दिवाना मैं तू दिवानी है..
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kunaal bhai
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bahut khoob bada sundar geet likha dil se daad geet ke saare misre khoob hain likhte rahiye
duaon ke saath
Shukriya Raadhey

Aapko accha laga ye jaan ke khushi hui .. likhne ki koshish jaari rahegi....

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Kunaal ji, Waaaah!

Bahut achchha mehssos hua aapke geet ko parh kar. Dil khush ho gaya. Mazaa aa gaya janaab!

DheroN daad aur mubarakbaad hmari taraf se... kabool keejiye.

Likhte rahiye!


Shukriya ...

Aapko accha mehsoos hua humari mehnatkaam aa gayi .. aapki daad teh dil se kabool karte hai ...

aap bhi aate rahiye...

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Kunaal Ji

Bohat Hi Sunder Rachna Hai ...

Kyaa Khoob Likha Hai Intzaar Ko..

Wah

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Aadaab...

Aaj bohat dinoN baad ishq pe likhne ki koshish kee hai .. chahta to tha Ishq section mai post karuN.. par yahaaN rishta puraana hai to yahiN chala aaya ... Ek naya geet bazm ki nazar kar raha huN .. iska wazn "Tumko dekha to ye khyaal aaya" jo jagjeet saahab ki mashoor ghazal hai uske hisaab se hai.. gunguna ke dekhiyega..

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इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा...
मुझको भी तुझसे ही है प्यार आजा..


रुकते है चलते है कदम तन्हा ...
जिंदगी का सफ़र हुआ तन्हा ...
रहते पल पल हैं बेकरार आजा ...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा ...


ख्वाबों को राहों मे बिछा दूंगा
पलकों मे तुझको यूँ छुपा लूँगा
तुझको देखूं मैं बेशुमार आजा ...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा..


अब तो पल पल ही मेरी जाँ जाए ..
दूरियां भी न अब सही जाए ..
जी लूँ करके तेरा दीदार आजा


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा ...


इस मोहब्बत की तू कहानी है ...
गर दिवाना मैं तू दिवानी है..
जुल्फ तेरी दूँ मैं संवार आजा..


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा...


जाम खाली है दिल भी खाली है
आज किस्मत भी आजमा ली है ...
बन के महफ़िल मे तू बहार आजा...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा..



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Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…
Mujhko bhi tujhse hi hai pyaar aaja…


Rukte hai chalte hai kadam tanhaa…
Zindgi kaa safar hua tanhaa..
Rehte hai pal pal be-karaar aaja…


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja …


KhwaboN ko raahoN maiN bicha duNga..
PalkoN maiN tujhko yuN chupa luNga…
Tujhko dekhuN maiN be-shumaar aaja..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja..


Ab to pal pal hi meri jaaN jaaye..
DooriyaaN bhi na ab sahi jaayeN..
Jee luN karke tera didaar aaja..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


Is mohabbat ki tu kahaani hai …
Gar diwaana maiN, tu diwaani hai …
Julf teri duN maiN sawaar aaja..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


Jaam khaali hai dil bhi khaali hai…
Aaj kismet bhi aazmaa lee hai …
Ban ke mehfil maiN tu bahaar aaja ..


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…

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bahut hi acha ahsas hai aur itane ache sabdo me likha

KhwaboN ko raahoN maiN bicha duNga..
PalkoN maiN tujhko yuN chupa luNga…
Tujhko dekhuN maiN be-shumaar aaja..

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Kunal Ji... Geet Ki Shabd Rachna Ke Saath ...... Ehsaas Bhi Bahut khoobsurat lage.... Nice Creation ... Tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... yunhi behtar rachnayeN likhte rahen sadaa .. khush rahen....

duaaon ke saath...
Shukriya naresh jee..

aapko geet pasand aaya ,... likhne ki koshish rahegi... aapke sath ke sath ..


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wow.......................kya baat, kya baat, kyaaaa baat..........bahut majja aaya padkar, gungunaya bhi accha laga......bhai ab aap geetkaar ban jayeN, gazalkaar to pahle se hi haiN....daad kabool farmayeN.

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Shukriya sunita jee..

is khuloosi isteqbaal ne mujhe behad mutasir kiya hai .. aapka behad shukriya .. aage kuch kehte nahi banta


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Bahut khoob Kunaal ji,

Ehasaas dil tak pahunche....Behad hi khubsurat Geet hai....acha hota gar koi ga kar suna deta....!!!!
Dil se daad qubool kijiyega...
Aur agle geet ka intzaar rahega........ Aur wo Shayri-e-dard ki jagah Shayri-e-ishq me post kijiyega....
Jee SHukriya,...

aur aapki shikaayat ab bachi kahaN hai .. aapki daad sir aankhoN pe

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जाम खाली है दिल भी खाली है
आज किस्मत भी आजमा ली है ...
बन के महफ़िल मे तू बहार आजा...

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very sweet romantic , ab to sunne ki iccha baaki hai

saath sath reps b lete jao
Shukriya ... aap aaye aur kya chaiye ...

aur suna bhi denge kabhi ... jab aamne saamne honge ...

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Aadaab...

Aaj bohat dinoN baad ishq pe likhne ki koshish kee hai .. chahta to tha Ishq section mai post karuN.. par yahaaN rishta puraana hai to yahiN chala aaya ... Ek naya geet bazm ki nazar kar raha huN .. iska wazn "Tumko dekha to ye khyaal aaya" jo jagjeet saahab ki mashoor ghazal hai uske hisaab se hai.. gunguna ke dekhiyega..

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इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा...
मुझको भी तुझसे ही है प्यार आजा..


रुकते है चलते है कदम तन्हा ...
जिंदगी का सफ़र हुआ तन्हा ...
रहते पल पल हैं बेकरार आजा ...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा ...


ख्वाबों को राहों मे बिछा दूंगा
पलकों मे तुझको यूँ छुपा लूँगा
तुझको देखूं मैं बेशुमार आजा ...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा..


अब तो पल पल ही मेरी जाँ जाए ..
दूरियां भी न अब सही जाए ..
जी लूँ करके तेरा दीदार आजा


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा ...


इस मोहब्बत की तू कहानी है ...
गर दिवाना मैं तू दिवानी है..
जुल्फ तेरी दूँ मैं संवार आजा..


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा...


जाम खाली है दिल भी खाली है
आज किस्मत भी आजमा ली है ...
बन के महफ़िल मे तू बहार आजा...


इश्क करता है इंतज़ार आजा..



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Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…
Mujhko bhi tujhse hi hai pyaar aaja…
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aadaab kunaal bhai
bhai aap ke kiya kahne laa jawaab oumdah khoobsoorat takhleeq hai seedhe dil par acar kartee hai aap kaa ye roop saawan ki bad mast ghataa ki tarah jhoom lar barsaa
matla bahot hi aalaa darje ka hai pahle micre me ,,ishq,, doosre micre me ,, hi ,, ne samaanbaandh diyaa
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Rukte hai chalte hai kadam tanhaa…
Zindgi kaa safar hua tanhaa..
Rehte hai pal pal be-karaar aaja…


Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja …


KhwaboN ko raahoN maiN bicha duNga..
PalkoN maiN tujhko yuN chupa luNga…
Tujhko dekhuN maiN be-shumaar aaja..

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achhi tarah se dil ki umango ko lafziyaat ka jaamah ataa kiyaa gayaa hai
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Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja..


Ab to pal pal hi meri jaaN jaaye..
DooriyaaN bhi na ab sahi jaayeN..
Jee luN karke tera didaar aaja..
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janaab kuch likhon gaa nahi bas itnaa hi kahungaa ki main kuskuraa rahaa hun
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Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


Is mohabbat ki tu kahaani hai …
Gar diwaana maiN, tu diwaani hai …
Julf teri duN maiN sawaar aaja..
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shaabaas sheroo andaaz geet ka hai pairahan ghazal ka soch kavi ki achhaa hai bahot hi achha
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Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…


Jaam khaali hai dil bhi khaali hai…
Aaj kismet bhi aazmaa lee hai …
Ban ke mehfil maiN tu bahaar aaja ..
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laa jawaab be micaal ishwar tumhen aor se aor zyaadah den
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Ishq karta hai intzaar aaja…

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Kunaal jii kya baat hai bhut hi piyaara geet kaha hai aapne jawaab nahi hai.........ehsaas dil ko choote haiN bhut hi khoob, daad hazir hai is paiskash ke liiyeN qubool keejiye



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