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~.. SaaNseN - 13th July 2012, 03:18 PM

akhri dam pe thi padi sanse
aap jo aaye fir chalee sanse

aao hum ik gunaah karte hai
hum badal lete haiN abhi sanse

aapko dekh kar yuN lagta hai
ab ruki, bas ruki.. ruki sanse

ek hichki main jhagda khatm kiya
koun leta ghaRhi ghaRhi sanse

koe mera jo haal poochy to
lijiyega badi badi saanse

haath seene pe chahiye inko
jab adi zidd pe bas adi sanse

ek yuN hi khyaal aayaa hai
na agar jaake fir mudi saanse

aap kyuN itni fikr karte ho
aapse kab meri judi saanse
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14th July 2012, 08:59 AM

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akhri dam pe thi padi sanse


aap jo aaye fir chalee sanse

aao hum ik gunaah karte hai
hum badal lete haiN abhi sanse

aapko dekh kar yuN lagta hai
ab ruki, bas ruki.. ruki sanse

ek hichki main jhagda khatm kiya
koun leta ghaRhi ghaRhi sanse

koe mera jo haal poochy to
lijiyega badi badi saanse

haath seene pe chahiye inko
jab adi zidd pe bas adi sanse

ek yuN hi khyaal aayaa hai
na agar jaake fir mudi saanse

aap kyuN itni fikr karte ho
aapse kab meri judi saanse
WaaH ! Vikas Bhaii !! BehTareeN !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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14th July 2012, 02:20 PM

Bahut khoob Vikas bhai,
waise main Shayri-e-dard section mein kam hi aata hoon, shayad dard se darne laga hoon ab, par kuch shayar hain jinko padhne main kisi bhi section mein chala jata hoon aap bhi unme se ek hain.........!

ek acchi koshish par meri taraf se Daad kabool karein ...

aapka.


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mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !!
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14th July 2012, 03:49 PM

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akhri dam pe thi padi sanse
aap jo aaye fir chalee sanse

aao hum ik gunaah karte hai
hum badal lete haiN abhi sanse

aapko dekh kar yuN lagta hai
ab ruki, bas ruki.. ruki sanse

ek hichki main jhagda khatm kiya
koun leta ghaRhi ghaRhi sanse

koe mera jo haal poochy to
lijiyega badi badi saanse

haath seene pe chahiye inko
jab adi zidd pe bas adi sanse

ek yuN hi khyaal aayaa hai
na agar jaake fir mudi saanse

aap kyuN itni fikr karte ho
aapse kab meri judi saanse
bhut khoobsir g daad kabool kare.........................
kaafir


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mai dobne lagta hoon samnder uchal deta hai

Us Mukaaaa pe mera junon aajaye
tujhe pukaroon mere muh se khoon ajaaye


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14th July 2012, 06:16 PM

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akhri dam pe thi padi sanse
aap jo aaye fir chalee sanse

aao hum ik gunaah karte hai
hum badal lete haiN abhi sanse

aapko dekh kar yuN lagta hai
ab ruki, bas ruki.. ruki sanse

ek hichki main jhagda khatm kiya
koun leta ghaRhi ghaRhi sanse

koe mera jo haal poochy to
lijiyega badi badi saanse

haath seene pe chahiye inko
jab adi zidd pe bas adi sanse

ek yuN hi khyaal aayaa hai
na agar jaake fir mudi saanse

aap kyuN itni fikr karte ho
aapse kab meri judi saanse
awesome !

very well writen ............................


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15th July 2012, 03:52 AM

bahut khoob janumanu ji, ye lines bahut hi khaas lagi


aapko dekh kar yuN lagta hai
ab ruki, bas ruki.. ruki sanse

ek hichki main jhagda khatm kiya
koun leta ghaRhi ghaRhi sanse


dhero daad kabool farmaye


Zid uski mera wazood hi mita dene ki,
aur aarzoo meri sirf usko paa lene ki.
   
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