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सपने मेरे, मुझे आजकल सोने नहीं देते - 14th August 2014, 08:43 PM

मसले सियासत के, वो हल होने नहीं देते,
मसल देते हैं कलियों को, वो ग़ुल होने नहीं देते !!

बरसती थीं मोहब्बत की घटायें जिन मौहल्लों में,
फकीरों को गली में हाथ भी धोने नहीं देते !!

खेला किया थे खेत में मिल जुल के वो घर-घर,
महलों में, हबीबों को भी अब कोने नहीं देते !!

गुज़र जाती थीं रातें, कहकहों में, गाने बजाने में,
अब ऐसा खौफ, के बच्चों को भी रोने नहीं देते !!

सुन कर ये ख़बरें मुल्क के हालात की मौला,
सपने मेरे, मुझे आजकल सोने नहीं देते !!
   
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14th August 2014, 08:54 PM

sun kar yeh khabreN mulk ke halaat ki Mola!!
khawaab mere, mujhe aaj kal sonay nahi dete..


Wahh NakulG,

Aap ne apni is ghazal meiN aap ne humeN haQeeqat se
ru-ba-ru karwaaya hai... jis ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaye kam hai..

Quoted verse dil chuu giya...

Likhte rahiye,
aate rahiye,,

DuaooN ke saath,


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
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14th August 2014, 09:35 PM

bahot khoob nakul ji................. bahot khoob


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15th August 2014, 08:34 PM

Bahut achchey nukul Jii...kyaa khoob likha hai aapne....aapka takhhayyul bahut achcha hai...aapki ghazal padkar dil ko sukuun mila.....aapka aane wala kal sunhara hai....Thoda as mashq kariye...Bas ....aapki ghazal padkar mujhe apne shuruaati din yaad Aa gaye.....dil se daad....
   
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Bohat khoob Nakul ji. ............




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16th August 2014, 04:00 PM

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गुज़र जाती थीं रातें, कहकहों में, गाने बजाने में,
अब ऐसा खौफ, के बच्चों को भी रोने नहीं देते !!

सुन कर ये ख़बरें मुल्क के हालात की मौला,
सपने मेरे, मुझे आजकल सोने नहीं देते !!

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waaah - 16th August 2014, 04:15 PM

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मसले सियासत के, वो हल होने नहीं देते,
मसल देते हैं कलियों को, वो ग़ुल होने नहीं देते !!

बरसती थीं मोहब्बत की घटायें जिन मौहल्लों में,
फकीरों को गली में हाथ भी धोने नहीं देते !!

खेला किया थे खेत में मिल जुल के वो घर-घर,
महलों में, हबीबों को भी अब कोने नहीं देते !!

गुज़र जाती थीं रातें, कहकहों में, गाने बजाने में,
अब ऐसा खौफ, के बच्चों को भी रोने नहीं देते !!

सुन कर ये ख़बरें मुल्क के हालात की मौला,
सपने मेरे, मुझे आजकल सोने नहीं देते !!
Bahut khoob nakulG.......................



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