Bahut achay, Aap kab se poetry ker rahay ho Mujeeb? Mujhay aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aayi. Koshish keron ga in mayoosion main umeed ki kirnain bherne ki
Bahut achay, Aap kab se poetry ker rahay ho Mujeeb? Mujhay aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aayi. Koshish keron ga in mayoosion main umeed ki kirnain bherne ki
Shukriya Janab ,
Sab se pehly mein app ko SDC per Khush Amdeed kehta hon umeed kerta hon app ko hum doston ka ye priwaar acha lagy ga .
or app ne poocha k mein shayri kab se ker rha hon.
Mujhy exact Pata Nhi hai keh kab se shayri ker rha hoon ... lakin jab bhi mann bher jata hai to kuch alfaz chalak padty hain unhien chun ker aik ladi bana leta hon ... or app doston k saamny pesh kerta hon passand ya na passand kerna to app ka kaam hai ...
saath deny ka bahut shukriya ...
apna khayal rakhiye ga
kuch share ker rha hon ...........umeed hai app sabko passand aye gi meri yeh koshish.....
waqt jaisy gya ho thehr lagta hai
aik qatra-e-aab bhi mujhe ab zehr lagta hai
Mujhe merny ki koi chahat nhi hai
mager jeena mujhe ab qehr lagta hai
char so andhera hai chaya is tereh
jaisy Roth Gai ho ab Sehr Lagta hai
Jiski Khushbo hain meri sansien
ajnabi sa ab wohi shehr lagta hai
Bojh ban gya hon mein dherti pe jaisy
khafa khafa mujhse ab her ik pehr lagta hai
Maujon ki aas pe jo choda safeena Mujeeb
sahil pe na jaey gi ab koi lehr lagta hai
Mujeeb
dear mujeeb.........bahut achha likha hai tumne....par yeh batao etni udhaasi kyu jalak rahi hai aapki shayri meiN....vaise to behad khoob likha hai...par aapki udhaasi bhare ahsaas...dil ko udhaas kar gaye....!
kush raho aur udhaas mat raha karo.
duao.n ke saath
aapki diii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
Hi mujeeb
wah janab wah ... bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne ...dil ka dard beyaan karna asaan nahi hota ... likhte raho
take care
hamesha khush raho
aapki dost
mandeep
har ashar bahut hi achee se pesh kiya hain tumne...................
dil se daad...
mausam
Quote:
Sunita Virender
dear mujeeb.........bahut achha likha hai tumne....par yeh batao etni udhaasi kyu jalak rahi hai aapki shayri meiN....vaise to behad khoob likha hai...par aapki udhaasi bhare ahsaas...dil ko udhaas kar gaye....!
kush raho aur udhaas mat raha karo.
duao.n ke saath
aapki diii
walaikumusalam .......Baji
Shukriya ...
Baji App donoko yahan dekh ker to bus yehi keh sakta hon
Ab to udney laga hon hawaon mein "Mujeeb" jaisy mujh nacheez ki koi auqaat ho gai
Behad shukriya apna waqt deny ka
reply late kerny k liye mazrat chahta hon
Mujeeb
Last edited by Mujeeb; 5th June 2008 at 08:34 PM..
mujeeb bhai ek baat to hai aap shayar bahot acche hain is mein koi
shak ki gunjaish nahi lekin shayad aashiqui bhi aap ko khoob aati hai
yeh jazba hua ishq
jise mehfil kahe gazal
main to ise aap ki muhabbat hi kahoonga gazal nahi
warna aaj ki generation main aur sab log
kisi ko dard ki gehraiyon ki khabar kahan
bada accha laga pad kar aapko
ab ek baat ko main kitni baar repeat karoon
aap to samajhte hain na
mere is reply ka matlab hi yehi hai ki aap bahot accha likhte ho
aur accha likho bas silsila chalne do yeh dua hai