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Jeena Mujhe AB Qehr lagta hai !!! - 15th May 2008, 11:45 AM

Adab Dosto !!!

kuch share ker rha hon ...........umeed hai app sabko passand aye gi meri yeh koshish.....


waqt jaisy gya ho thehr lagta hai
aik qatra-e-aab bhi mujhe ab zehr lagta hai

Mujhe merny ki koi chahat nhi hai
mager jeena mujhe ab qehr lagta hai

char so andhera hai chaya is tereh
jaisy Roth Gai ho ab Sehr Lagta hai

Jiski Khushbo hain meri sansien
ajnabi sa ab wohi shehr lagta hai

Bojh ban gya hon mein dherti pe jaisy
khafa khafa mujhse ab her ik pehr lagta hai

Maujon ki aas pe jo choda safeena Mujeeb
sahil pe na jaey gi ab koi lehr lagta hai



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Lightbulb Nice... - 15th May 2008, 02:49 PM

Bahut achay, Aap kab se poetry ker rahay ho Mujeeb? Mujhay aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aayi. Koshish keron ga in mayoosion main umeed ki kirnain bherne ki
   
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nice one...bahot khoob


Aapko meri koshish passand aye ... yeh jaan ker behad khushi howi .....Youn hi saath dety rahiye ga

Apna Khayal Rakhiye ga
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Bahut achay, Aap kab se poetry ker rahay ho Mujeeb? Mujhay aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aayi. Koshish keron ga in mayoosion main umeed ki kirnain bherne ki


Shukriya Janab ,

Sab se pehly mein app ko SDC per Khush Amdeed kehta hon umeed kerta hon app ko hum doston ka ye priwaar acha lagy ga .

or app ne poocha k mein shayri kab se ker rha hon.

Mujhy exact Pata Nhi hai keh kab se shayri ker rha hoon ... lakin jab bhi mann bher jata hai to kuch alfaz chalak padty hain unhien chun ker aik ladi bana leta hon ... or app doston k saamny pesh kerta hon passand ya na passand kerna to app ka kaam hai ...


saath deny ka bahut shukriya ...
apna khayal rakhiye ga


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good one mujeeb bhai wah !
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Adab Dosto !!!

kuch share ker rha hon ...........umeed hai app sabko passand aye gi meri yeh koshish.....


waqt jaisy gya ho thehr lagta hai
aik qatra-e-aab bhi mujhe ab zehr lagta hai

Mujhe merny ki koi chahat nhi hai
mager jeena mujhe ab qehr lagta hai

char so andhera hai chaya is tereh
jaisy Roth Gai ho ab Sehr Lagta hai

Jiski Khushbo hain meri sansien
ajnabi sa ab wohi shehr lagta hai

Bojh ban gya hon mein dherti pe jaisy
khafa khafa mujhse ab her ik pehr lagta hai

Maujon ki aas pe jo choda safeena Mujeeb
sahil pe na jaey gi ab koi lehr lagta hai



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wahhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhh...bahut khub MUJEEB...dil ko chu liya tumne...dad hazir hai...uhi mehfil ko sajate rahiyega....


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16th May 2008, 12:44 AM

Daad kubool keejiye!!!

Bahut Khoob!!

Take Care..

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good one mujeeb bhai wah !


Aslam u alaikum ,

Ziyaad Bhai Bahut shukriya app ka , lakin kaafi din ho gaey hain app ka koi kalam pedhny ko nhi mila SDC per.

kiya kahien or post ker rahy hain ajkal ???


Umeed kerta hon jald az jald appka kalam pedhny ko mily ga , you are such a best poet


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wahhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhh...bahut khub MUJEEB...dil ko chu liya tumne...dad hazir hai...uhi mehfil ko sajate rahiyega....

Bahut Shukriya Mohterma Lamha Jee ,


Aap ki daad dil se kabool hai .....Koshish rahy ge ke dil se chalky kuch lafzon ko piro ker app doston se share kerta rahoon ....


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Daad kubool keejiye!!!

Bahut Khoob!!

Take Care..

~Priya


Mohterma Priya Jee ,

Aap ki dad teh dil se kabool hai , bahut shukriya meri koshish ko serhany ka


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17th May 2008, 05:23 PM

asaalam--walekum mujeeb.............

bahut khub...............

har ashar bahut hi achee se pesh kiya hain tumne...................

dil se daad...

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wah wah ky abaat hai jee... bht khoob...


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Adab Dosto !!!

kuch share ker rha hon ...........umeed hai app sabko passand aye gi meri yeh koshish.....


waqt jaisy gya ho thehr lagta hai
aik qatra-e-aab bhi mujhe ab zehr lagta hai

Mujhe merny ki koi chahat nhi hai
mager jeena mujhe ab qehr lagta hai

char so andhera hai chaya is tereh
jaisy Roth Gai ho ab Sehr Lagta hai

Jiski Khushbo hain meri sansien
ajnabi sa ab wohi shehr lagta hai

Bojh ban gya hon mein dherti pe jaisy
khafa khafa mujhse ab her ik pehr lagta hai

Maujon ki aas pe jo choda safeena Mujeeb
sahil pe na jaey gi ab koi lehr lagta hai



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kush raho aur udhaas mat raha karo.

duao.n ke saath
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Mujhe merny ki koi chahat nhi hai
mager jeena mujhe ab qehr lagta hai

char so andhera hai chaya is tereh
jaisy Roth Gai ho ab Sehr Lagta hai

lovely mujeeb..bahut zabardast likha hai.,.yeh do ashaar khaasker behad pasand aaye..likhte raho yunhin


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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Best cukection of sufi. - 28th May 2008, 04:58 PM

lutf vo ishq mein paaye hain ke jii jaanta hai
ranj bhi itne uThaaye hain ke jii jaanta hai

jo zamane ke sitam hain vo zamana jaane
tuune dil itne dukhaye hain ke jii jaanta hai

tum nahin jaante ab tak ye tumhare andaaz
vo mere dil mein samaaye hain ke jii jaanta hai

inhin qadmon ne tumhare inhin qadmon ki qasam
Khaak mein itne milaye hain ke jii jaanta hai

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29th May 2008, 07:54 AM

Hi mujeeb
wah janab wah ... bahut hi pyaara likha hai aapne ...dil ka dard beyaan karna asaan nahi hota ... likhte raho
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bahut khub...............

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dil se daad...

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mujeeb bhai ek baat to hai aap shayar bahot acche hain is mein koi
shak ki gunjaish nahi lekin shayad aashiqui bhi aap ko khoob aati hai

yeh jazba hua ishq
jise mehfil kahe gazal

main to ise aap ki muhabbat hi kahoonga gazal nahi
warna aaj ki generation main aur sab log
kisi ko dard ki gehraiyon ki khabar kahan

bada accha laga pad kar aapko

ab ek baat ko main kitni baar repeat karoon
aap to samajhte hain na
mere is reply ka matlab hi yehi hai ki aap bahot accha likhte ho
aur accha likho bas silsila chalne do yeh dua hai


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