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9th April 2010, 01:18 PM
kya kahun doston ek dost hua karta tha kisi zamane me waqt ke sath sath wo bhi badal gaya bhool gaya apni dosti ja baitha kisi aur ki mehfil me...........ussi dost ke naam ka maine ek kutta pala aur dekhiye us naam ka us kutte par assar ke wo bhi wafadar na raha...........
tere naam ka kutta pala
tere jaisa dhila dhala
sabse hai yaari uski
bagal me rahti pyari* uski
din bhar chhat par mara sa rahta
khana pani bas dhara sa rahta
halat uski dekhi na jaye
karun kya kuch samajh na aaye
vaidh - hakeem sabko dikhlaya
marz uska koi bata na paya
ek din padosi ghar par aaya
sang apne wo pyari laya
tabhi raja babu niche aaye
pyari ne bhi diye nayan milaye
kutta mera kuch badal gaya tha
ishq me wo fisal gaya tha
marz uska kuch kuch samajh me aaya
padosi ko bhi hamne samjhaya
ban kazi unka nikah padwaya
apne kutte ko marne se bachaya
ab uska chhat par jana nahi hota
apna ghar bhi ab thikana nahi hota
kabhi kabhi ghar bhi aata hai
warna to pados se hi aawaz lagata hai
shukKar hai tere naam ka sher nahi pala
warna main hi hota tera pehla niwala
pyari - mere tommy ki timmi
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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9th April 2010, 02:39 PM
Ha ha ha ha h..............
Secret sahab achcha likha hai.... shabdon se khelne ka hunar bahut hai aap mein...
Bahut khoob............ Daad hazir hai...........
janab aajkal koun wafadaar hai duniyaa ka sabs bada neta bhi gaddar hai....
o bechara kuta kahan se wafadaar rahenga..
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9th April 2010, 06:33 PM
wahhhhhhhhhh.... janab.... aap to ghazab dhaane lage hai.... shabdon ki jugalbandi bahut khoob hai... dil se daad...
ek guzarish hai aapse...aap achcha likhte ho... kyu na kabhi koi serious topic pe bhi likha jaye... intezaar rahega aapki sanjeeda shayri ka.... likhte rahiye.... khush rahiye....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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9th April 2010, 07:09 PM
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Ha ha ha ha h..............
Secret sahab achcha likha hai.... shabdon se khelne ka hunar bahut hai aap mein...
Bahut khoob............ Daad hazir hai...........
janab aajkal koun wafadaar hai duniyaa ka sabs bada neta bhi gaddar hai....
o bechara kuta kahan se wafadaar rahenga..
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sameer bhai,
apki tareef ne to seena fula diya........
aisa laga mano suraj khud diye se kah raha ho ke teri roshni kamal hai.............
apki yehi baatein to apka kayal bana deti hain mujhe......
apka.
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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9th April 2010, 07:18 PM
lamha ji tareef ke liye shukriya............maine apni zindagi me khushiyaan bahut kam dekhi hain........jab bhi aayi hain kisi na kisi ki nazar lag hi jati hai.......is liye maine haste hasate gum ko bhulana seekh liya hai........ koshish karunga kuch likhne ki .........
apka.
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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8th May 2010, 07:51 PM
waah waah 'gupt' bhai sahab... Bahut he badhiya aur romanchak poem pesh ki hai... Haste -2 paet phool gaya
aapne 'tommy'* se dosti achhi tarah nibhayi hai...
Uske na hote hue bhi uski shadi jo karayi hai....!!!
Ab 'tommy'# bhi aapse wafa karta rahega...
Aapke padosi k yaha he susu karta rahega...!!!
Fir kuch mahino baad aapki shamat aayegi...
Jab 'timmy' 6 bachho k saath aapke ghar rehne aayegi..!!
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khair.... rachna ne aapki dil khus kar diya tfs
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26th May 2010, 09:44 PM
buland shayar bhai, rachna ko pasand karne ke liye apka shukriya.............waise jab bhi timmi 6 baccho ke sath ghar aayegi main uske 3 bacche apke ghar pahuncha dunga...........
waise kisi ne kya khub kaha hai
"shuk'R hai ke main wafadar nahi hoon
wafadar to kutte hotein hain"
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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30th May 2010, 04:42 PM
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kya kahun doston ek dost hua karta tha kisi zamane me waqt ke sath sath wo bhi badal gaya bhool gaya apni dosti ja baitha kisi aur ki mehfil me...........ussi dost ke naam ka maine ek kutta pala aur dekhiye us naam ka us kutte par assar ke wo bhi wafadar na raha...........
tere naam ka kutta pala
tere jaisa dhila dhala
sabse hai yaari uski
bagal me rahti pyari* uski
din bhar chhat par mara sa rahta
khana pani bas dhara sa rahta
halat uski dekhi na jaye
karun kya kuch samajh na aaye
vaidh - hakeem sabko dikhlaya
marz uska koi bata na paya
ek din padosi ghar par aaya
sang apne wo pyari laya
tabhi raja babu niche aaye
pyari ne bhi diye nayan milaye
kutta mera kuch badal gaya tha
ishq me wo fisal gaya tha
marz uska kuch kuch samajh me aaya
padosi ko bhi hamne samjhaya
ban kazi unka nikah padwaya
apne kutte ko marne se bachaya
ab uska chhat par jana nahi hota
apna ghar bhi ab thikana nahi hota
kabhi kabhi ghar bhi aata hai
warna to pados se hi aawaz lagata hai
shukKar hai tere naam ka sher nahi pala
warna main hi hota tera pehla niwala
pyari - mere tommy ki timmi
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BAHUT KHUB
SADA LIKHATE RAHE
BAHUT HI ACHI TARAH LIKHA HE APANE
SADA KHUSH Rahe
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30th May 2010, 06:25 PM
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BAHUT KHUB
SADA LIKHATE RAHE
BAHUT HI ACHI TARAH LIKHA HE APANE
SADA KHUSH Rahe
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shakuntala ji,
namaste, aapko meri haasya kavita pasand aayi, aapne isse saraha apka bahut bahut dhanyawad, aasha karta hoon aage bhi issi tarah mera sath deti rahengi............
aapka.
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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31st May 2010, 11:12 AM
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31st May 2010, 11:34 AM
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kya kahun doston ek dost hua karta tha kisi zamane me waqt ke sath sath wo bhi badal gaya bhool gaya apni dosti ja baitha kisi aur ki mehfil me...........ussi dost ke naam ka maine ek kutta pala aur dekhiye us naam ka us kutte par assar ke wo bhi wafadar na raha...........
tere naam ka kutta pala
tere jaisa dhila dhala
sabse hai yaari uski
bagal me rahti pyari* uski
din bhar chhat par mara sa rahta
khana pani bas dhara sa rahta
halat uski dekhi na jaye
karun kya kuch samajh na aaye
vaidh - hakeem sabko dikhlaya
marz uska koi bata na paya
ek din padosi ghar par aaya
sang apne wo pyari laya
tabhi raja babu niche aaye
pyari ne bhi diye nayan milaye
kutta mera kuch badal gaya tha
ishq me wo fisal gaya tha
marz uska kuch kuch samajh me aaya
padosi ko bhi hamne samjhaya
ban kazi unka nikah padwaya
apne kutte ko marne se bachaya
ab uska chhat par jana nahi hota
apna ghar bhi ab thikana nahi hota
kabhi kabhi ghar bhi aata hai
warna to pados se hi aawaz lagata hai
shukKar hai tere naam ka sher nahi pala
warna main hi hota tera pehla niwala
pyari - mere tommy ki timmi
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Bahut hi achi kavita likhi hai aapne......!!!!! ha ha ha.....!!! Waise sher paalne ka khayaal b acha lga mujhe.....
Regards,
Kavita
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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31st May 2010, 01:39 PM
Buland bhai........................
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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31st May 2010, 02:15 PM
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Bahut hi achi kavita likhi hai aapne......!!!!! ha ha ha.....!!! Waise sher paalne ka khayaal b acha lga mujhe.....
Regards,
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kavita ji shukriya, kavita ko pasand karne ke liye......
rahi baat sher paalne ki to aaj kal desh me sher bache hi kahan hain aur jo hain bhi wo sab kutte hi hai jo sher ka mukhota pahan ke ghum rahe hain.........
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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3rd June 2010, 02:41 PM
aapne to kutton ki bhi wafadari ko insano ki wafadari ke barabar bata diya
waise hanste hanste pait me dard ho gaya mere yaar humourous shayari me plz. likhte rahiye........
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3rd June 2010, 08:01 PM
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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11th June 2010, 10:04 AM
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kya kahun doston ek dost hua karta tha kisi zamane me waqt ke sath sath wo bhi badal gaya bhool gaya apni dosti ja baitha kisi aur ki mehfil me...........ussi dost ke naam ka maine ek kutta pala aur dekhiye us naam ka us kutte par assar ke wo bhi wafadar na raha...........
tere naam ka kutta pala
tere jaisa dhila dhala
sabse hai yaari uski
bagal me rahti pyari* uski
din bhar chhat par mara sa rahta
khana pani bas dhara sa rahta
halat uski dekhi na jaye
karun kya kuch samajh na aaye
vaidh - hakeem sabko dikhlaya
marz uska koi bata na paya
ek din padosi ghar par aaya
sang apne wo pyari laya
tabhi raja babu niche aaye
pyari ne bhi diye nayan milaye
kutta mera kuch badal gaya tha
ishq me wo fisal gaya tha
marz uska kuch kuch samajh me aaya
padosi ko bhi hamne samjhaya
ban kazi unka nikah padwaya
apne kutte ko marne se bachaya
ab uska chhat par jana nahi hota
apna ghar bhi ab thikana nahi hota
kabhi kabhi ghar bhi aata hai
warna to pados se hi aawaz lagata hai
shukKar hai tere naam ka sher nahi pala
warna main hi hota tera pehla niwala
pyari - mere tommy ki timmi
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11th June 2010, 06:02 PM
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kya baat bahut khoob ha ha ha ha ..............
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dhanyawad ajay ji,
ek choti si koshish thi meri sabko haNsane ki lagta hai kamyab rahi.......
yuhin sath dete rahiyega
aapka.
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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12th June 2010, 11:04 PM
Secret admirer saaheb, Kunaal bhaa'ii aur sabhee doston:
aap sab se yahee darKhaast haii ki kahiin bhee ees tarah ki gandi bhaasa kaa istemaal ko'ii bhee member Gar kar rahaa hoN tou aap moderators ko inform zaruur kare.n!
waise tou hum threads check karte hi haiN par saath hi saath aap sab ki bhee utni hi zimmedaari banti hai!
derii ke liye mai.n aap se M'waafii maangataa huuN..!kyuuNki merii nazar haal hi meN ees Thread par paDii!
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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13th June 2010, 05:34 PM
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Secret admirer saaheb, Kunaal bhaa'ii aur sabhee doston:
aap sab se yahee darKhaast haii ki kahiin bhee ees tarah ki gandi bhaasa kaa istemaal ko'ii bhee member Gar kar rahaa hoN tou aap moderators ko inform zaruur kare.n!
waise tou hum threads check karte hi haiN par saath hi saath aap sab ki bhee utni hi zimmedaari banti hai!
derii ke liye mai.n aap se M'waafii maangataa huuN..!kyuuNki merii nazar haal hi meN ees Thread par paDii!
duaao.n ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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Dhaval bhai, shukriya meri thread par se us reply ko delete karne ke liye.....
deri ki koi baat nahi hai "der aaye par durusst aaye"
aapka.
Na tha main to khuda tha, kuch na hota to khuda hota?
mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM)
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