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doori barhte barhte , bharti hi gayii..... - 13th February 2009, 11:20 AM
doori barhte barhte , bharti hi gayii
rishto.n par waqt ki dhool jamti hi gayii

ik baar shuru hua jo silsila tootne ka
door saanso.n ki fir toot ti hi gayii

bichhar gaye sabhi de ke pal do pal ka sath
yaaro ki kami zindagi mein khalti hi gayii

huaa tinka tinka yaado.n ka aashia.n bhii
aandhi apni raftaar se chalti hi gayii

'veer' kaise banta tere maathe ka naseeb
taqdeer usay har mor pe chhalti hi gayii.....

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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13th February 2009, 05:13 PM
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doori barhte barhte , bharti hi gayii
rishto.n par waqt ki dhool jamti hi gayii

ik baar shuru hua jo silsila tootne ka
door saanso.n ki fir toot ti hi gayii

bichhar gaye sabhi de ke pal do pal ka sath
yaaro ki kami zindagi mein khalti hi gayii

huaa tinka tinka yaado.n ka aashia.n bhii
aandhi apni raftaar se chalti hi gayii

'veer' kaise banta tere maathe ka naseeb
taqdeer usay har mor pe chhalti hi gayii.....
rajveer ji namaskar

ek zamana huaa aapka likha huaa kuch pade huye
accha laga aaj ise pad kar...
aapki shayri ke to hum hamesha se hi kayal rahe hain to taarif main kya karoon. bahut hi shandar gazal likhi hai aapne
merii daad kabool kigiye
aur haan aate rahiyega..... to doston ka sath nahi *****ega. barna aapki shikayat beza hi kahi jayegii

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Hi - 15th February 2009, 10:47 PM
Hello veer pata nahi kaise kaho kaha se hooro karoo mare paa koi words hi nahi hia kuahce kehne ko tumne itna aacha likha hia dil ko choo gaya. verry nice aise hi lihe rehna. hum padte rahinge . nice work .

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16th February 2009, 12:46 AM
ek kasak bharai rachna...tarrnum sahi hai...
acha laga padna

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19th February 2009, 12:08 PM
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Smile Welcome rajveer ji - 19th February 2009, 12:56 PM
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doori barhte barhte , bharti hi gayii
rishto.n par waqt ki dhool jamti hi gayii

ik baar shuru hua jo silsila tootne ka
door saanso.n ki fir toot ti hi gayii

bichhar gaye sabhi de ke pal do pal ka sath
yaaro ki kami zindagi mein khalti hi gayii

huaa tinka tinka yaado.n ka aashia.n bhii
aandhi apni raftaar se chalti hi gayii

'veer' kaise banta tere maathe ka naseeb
taqdeer usay har mor pe chhalti hi gayii.....


Namaskaar Rajveer ji.............sabse phele to aapko shukriya kahna chahti hoon ki aap bazm mein aaye to sahi....bahut accha laga aapko jaha dekh kar....!

lagta hai aapne yeh gazal bahut udhasii ke palo.n mein likhi hai.....sabhi sher dil ke kareeb rahe.....har sher aansu bahata hua lag raha hai.....!

vaise yeh sirf shayri hi hai ya aapke khud ke ahsaas haiN, kyuNki aap to bahut badiya shayar ho, kisi bhi topic par chutki mein gazal likh detey ho, esi liye pooch liya !

kush rahiye aur bazm mein aatey rahiye.

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19th February 2009, 03:49 PM
bhot khub, khas kar....
bichhar gaye sabhi de ke pal do pal ka sath
yaaro ki kami zindagi mein khalti hi gayii

bhot hi ache ahesas hi appke,
likhte rahe, bye

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19th February 2009, 11:12 PM
Rajveer Ji,

Sach mein aapkaa hath chumne ko dil kar rahaa hai, kyaa khoob likhaa hai, Great, Fantastic, Mind Blowing,

Bahut pasand aaye aapke khyaal

Keep Writing

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doori barhte barhte , bharti hi gayii
rishto.n par waqt ki dhool jamti hi gayii

ik baar shuru hua jo silsila tootne ka
door saanso.n ki fir toot ti hi gayii

bichhar gaye sabhi de ke pal do pal ka sath
yaaro ki kami zindagi mein khalti hi gayii

huaa tinka tinka yaado.n ka aashia.n bhii
aandhi apni raftaar se chalti hi gayii

'veer' kaise banta tere maathe ka naseeb
taqdeer usay har mor pe chhalti hi gayii.....


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doori barhte barhte , bharti hi gayii
rishto.n par waqt ki dhool jamti hi gayii

ik baar shuru hua jo silsila tootne ka
door saanso.n ki fir toot ti hi gayii

bichhar gaye sabhi de ke pal do pal ka sath
yaaro ki kami zindagi mein khalti hi gayii

huaa tinka tinka yaado.n ka aashia.n bhii
aandhi apni raftaar se chalti hi gayii

'veer' kaise banta tere maathe ka naseeb
taqdeer usay har mor pe chhalti hi gayii.....
Ji Bhaut Sunder................


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