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Originally Posted by rajveeer
doori barhte barhte , bharti hi gayii
rishto.n par waqt ki dhool jamti hi gayii
ik baar shuru hua jo silsila tootne ka
door saanso.n ki fir toot ti hi gayii
bichhar gaye sabhi de ke pal do pal ka sath
yaaro ki kami zindagi mein khalti hi gayii
huaa tinka tinka yaado.n ka aashia.n bhii
aandhi apni raftaar se chalti hi gayii
'veer' kaise banta tere maathe ka naseeb
taqdeer usay har mor pe chhalti hi gayii.....
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rajveer ji namaskar
ek zamana huaa aapka likha huaa kuch pade huye
accha laga aaj ise pad kar...
aapki shayri ke to hum hamesha se hi kayal rahe hain to taarif main kya karoon. bahut hi shandar gazal likhi hai aapne
merii daad kabool kigiye
aur haan aate rahiyega..... to doston ka sath nahi *****ega. barna aapki shikayat beza hi kahi jayegii
Dilip