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Tamana hai tere dar par ye dam nikle...gazal - 23rd November 2014, 05:53 AM
Dosto ek koshish ki hai umeed hai aapko pasand aiye gii, ye abhi abhi likhi hai...bilkul fresh isko kush nahi kiya jaise zehan mei.n aiya waisa hi likh diya...takneek galt ho sakti hai magar ehsaas bilkul fresh hai.n...is gazal ki zameen 'Ghalib' sahib ki gazal...bare be aabroo hokar tere kooche se ham nikle...pe mutmayeen hai..
Raj...

Tamana hai tere dar par ye dam nikle,
Isee umeed par apne ghar se ham nikle..

Kiyo.n kar sabaz hota iss dil ka gulshan
idhar se jitne bhi nikle zard mosam nikle..

Gillah karte to aakhir karte kis se ham,
Diye Taaro.n ki manind apno.n ke zakham nikle..

dafnayee dil mei.n ta umr hasrattai.n maine,
dil-e-veeraan se jab nikle bass matam nikle..

Yaado.n kee khushak zameen se aii dost
Sadiyo.n puraane lamhe bhii barham nikle..

In aankho.n se baha jab bhi koii qatra lahoo banke
jaise pankhuri-e-phool pe subha shabnam nikle..

Na aate kaise sabhi gam aakhir mere kooche tak
Puraane har ik gam se mere marasam nikle..

Kabhi to ilzaam aaye tum par bhii bewafaii ka,
'Raj' aisa na ho ya.n bhi wahi kaafir sanam nikle..

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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23rd November 2014, 09:50 AM
waaaahhh bahot khoob Raj saahab.........................


acchi ghazal kahi hai aapne, likhte rahen

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23rd November 2014, 04:44 PM
Rajveer sahab...bahut badiya gazal pesh ki aapne..

Na aate kaise sabhi gam aakhir mere kooche tak
Puraane har ik gam se mere marasam nikle..

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24th November 2014, 01:09 PM
Waah......Bahut khoob gazal raajveer ji...


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26th November 2014, 02:08 AM
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waaaahhh bahot khoob Raj saahab.........................


acchi ghazal kahi hai aapne, likhte rahen

Shaad....
Bhut bhut shukria sameer bhai..jo aapne apni keemti raye se nawaaza...khush rahai.n...Raj...

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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Thumbs up khoobsurat ehsaas - 26th November 2014, 09:43 AM
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Dosto ek koshish ki hai umeed hai aapko pasand aiye gii, ye abhi abhi likhi hai...bilkul fresh isko kush nahi kiya jaise zehan mei.n aiya waisa hi likh diya...takneek galt ho sakti hai magar ehsaas bilkul fresh hai.n...is gazal ki zameen 'Ghalib' sahib ki gazal...bare be aabroo hokar tere kooche se ham nikle...pe mutmayeen hai..
Raj...

Tamana hai tere dar par ye dam nikle,
Isee umeed par apne ghar se ham nikle..

Kiyo.n kar sabaz hota iss dil ka gulshan
idhar se jitne bhi nikle zard mosam nikle..

Gillah karte to aakhir karte kis se ham,
Diye Taaro.n ki manind apno.n ke zakham nikle..

dafnayee dil mei.n ta umr hasrattai.n maine,
dil-e-veeraan se jab nikle bass matam nikle..

Yaado.n kee khushak zameen se aii dost
Sadiyo.n puraane lamhe bhii barham nikle..

In aankho.n se baha jab bhi koii qatra lahoo banke
jaise pankhuri-e-phool pe subha shabnam nikle..

Na aate kaise sabhi gam aakhir mere kooche tak
Puraane har ik gam se mere marasam nikle..

Kabhi to ilzaam aaye tum par bhii bewafaii ka,
'Raj' aisa na ho ya.n bhi wahi kaafir sanam nikle..

wahhh wahhhh kya khoob gazal pesh ki hai aapne, janab aap to bahut acche shayar ho ham jaante hai, aap to yu hi chalte phirte bhi gazal bana detey ho...accha lga aapko padna, yu hi likhte rhiye aur SDC ki shaan meiN chaar chaand lagate rhiye aur Interview thread chal rha hai aapka wahan bhi darshan detey rhiye.


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27th November 2014, 07:38 PM
Wah Rajveer ji ,
bahut achi ghazal kahi aaapne ...Sare ashar ek se ek bar ke the .....

per ye do sher kuch jyada pasand aye mujhe

dafnayee dil mei.n ta umr hasrattai.n maine,
dil-e-veeraan se jab nikle bass matam nikle..

Yaado.n kee khushak zameen se aii dost
Sadiyo.n puraane lamhe bhii barham nikle..

Aap ki ghazalein bahaut hi sada shabdon meiN hoti hain per bari gehree chaap chor jati haiN,
Dher sari Daad kapbool kareinN.

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12th December 2014, 01:13 PM
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Rajveer sahab...bahut badiya gazal pesh ki aapne..

Na aate kaise sabhi gam aakhir mere kooche tak
Puraane har ik gam se mere marasam nikle..

Lajwaab...
Vinay ji aapki rayeshumaari ka dil se shukarguzaar hoo.n saath dete rahiyega..Raj...

un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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