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Love Tere Ho Kar Bhi Hum Tujh Se Dur Hai - 3rd October 2010, 08:30 AM
ishq mein hum is kadar majbur hai
tere ho kar bhi hum tujh se dur hai

toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
bewafayi teri bhi sanam mashhur hai

mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai

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3rd October 2010, 08:48 AM
mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai

Bahut Khoob ... Bahut Umdaa .... Praneeta Ji !

Bahut Khoobsurti se pesh kiye hai aapne Judaai aur dard ke ehsaas ... dil par gehraai se apna asar chhoDte nazar aaye ... sabhi ashaar ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe ... ek umdaa peshkash ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... Qubuul FarmaayeN ... aise hi aati rahen aur umdaa khayaloN se hume ru-ba-ru karaati rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

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Love 4th October 2010, 01:55 PM
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ishq mein hum is kadar majbur hai
tere ho kar bhi hum tujh se dur hai

toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
bewafayi teri bhi sanam mashhur hai

mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai
praneeta jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob khyaal aur bayaani dono achhi hai dil se daad
ye share dil ke kareeb raha

toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

duaon ke saath

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6th October 2010, 08:57 AM
Praneeta jee:

namaste!

aik achchhi koShiSh ke liye dil se daad-o-mubaaraqbaad..!

liKhate rahiye.. KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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6th October 2010, 11:22 AM
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ishq mein hum is kadar majbur hai
tere ho kar bhi hum tujh se dur hai

toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
bewafayi teri bhi sanam mashhur hai

mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai
ji bhaut khoob....................


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mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai

Bahut Khoob ... Bahut Umdaa .... Praneeta Ji !

Bahut Khoobsurti se pesh kiye hai aapne Judaai aur dard ke ehsaas ... dil par gehraai se apna asar chhoDte nazar aaye ... sabhi ashaar ke ehsaas bahut khoob lage mujhe ... ek umdaa peshkash ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... Qubuul FarmaayeN ... aise hi aati rahen aur umdaa khayaloN se hume ru-ba-ru karaati rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaoN ke saath ....
Naresh ji
shukriya aap ka saath nibhane ke liye
aap ki daad dil se qabul hai ji
yuhi saath banaye rakhe
khushi hui jaan kar ki aap ko ye ghazal pasand aayi
aage bhi padhte rahe

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praneeta jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob khyaal aur bayaani dono achhi hai dil se daad
ye share dil ke kareeb raha

toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

duaon ke saath

Ishk sahab
shukriya aap ke daad aur duaon ke liye
nice to read your responses always

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ishq mein hum is kadar majbur hai
tere ho kar bhi hum tujh se dur hai

toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
bewafayi teri bhi sanam mashhur hai

mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai

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ishq mein hum is kadar majbur hai
tere ho kar bhi hum tujh se dur hai

toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
bewafayi teri bhi sanam mashhur hai

mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai


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[QUOTE]ishq mein hum is kadar majbur hai
tere ho kar bhi hum tujh se dur hai

pareenitaa ji..... aapki gahzal mai singular plural ki problem hai ......

ishq mein hum is kadar majbur haiN
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second line mai bhi hum tujhse door haiN....

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toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
bewafayi teri bhi sanam mashhur hai

deewangi ka charcha.............

mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
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ishq mein hum is kadar majbur hai
tere ho kar bhi hum tujh se dur hai

toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
bewafayi teri bhi sanam mashhur hai

mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai

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ishq mein hum is kadar majbur hai
tere ho kar bhi hum tujh se dur hai

toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
bewafayi teri bhi sanam mashhur hai

mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai

Waahh praneetaa jee bahot khoob likhaa hai aapne is baar bhi.. hame matlaa behad pasand aaya kyonki usme se sacchaai nazar aaati hai... teesre sher me deewaangi ki charcha ke bajaay kaa charchaa kar lijiye... shukriyaa.

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namaste!

aik achchhi koShiSh ke liye dil se daad-o-mubaaraqbaad..!

liKhate rahiye.. KhuSh rahe.n.. apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

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mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai..

nice lines parineete ji... liked this creation very much

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toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
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ki nahi KA hona chahiye tha.......

Nice work.

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"hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai | bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai"

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pareenitaa ji..... aapki gahzal mai singular plural ki problem hai ......

ishq mein hum is kadar majbur haiN
---
second line mai bhi hum tujhse door haiN....

is hisaab se aapki radeef.. haiN hogi.. na ki hai ................
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agar aap in baton pe dhayn na dengi to aap bahut galat kar rahi hai apne thought apni feeling ke sath .......... baaki apki marzi


toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
bewafayi teri bhi sanam mashhur hai

deewangi ka charcha.............

mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai
Vikas ji
shukriya aap ke comments ke liye
mere is ghazal mein "hum" main ki jagha par use kiya singular ki tarah not for plural...we use 'hum' meaning 'I' just like royals

i have even heard it on tv...kings use it
but i will definitely keep your suggestions in mind
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nice lines parineete ji... liked this creation very much

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bahut khoob.ye sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya. dili daad o mubaraqbad.
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toh kya jo hasil hui na chahat teri
apni mohabbat par hume gurur hai

hai har taraf meri deewangi ki charcha
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mehsus hoti hai har lamha teri zarurat
kuch baki tere mere darmiyan zarur hai

hai ab kismat mein humari sirf judaai
bebas ‘pari’ ko bhi ye faisla manzur hai
Wah bohat khoob praneeta ..ek baar phir isay padhker bohat achcha laga. .

Nayi peshkash ka intezaar hai... ☺



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