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bahot badiya dost.....aap toh mujhe behtar shayar nikle
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Sar ilzaam rahene do
Mujhe badnaam rahene do

Na rakkhon ummid koi
Mujhe nakaam rahene do

Hai sukoon dard mein
Ye araam rahene do

Payimana na bane zaher
Inhe jaam rahene do

Shuru hua na silsila
Ab anjaam rahene do

Na do koi naam
Mujhe benaam rahene do

Main hun aam insaan
Mujhe aam rahene do

Shahorat se hogi taklif
Mujhe gumnaam rahene do
Waaah... Chhote bahar waali bayaani mujhe humesha hi pasand aayi hain... this one is really well expressed... the last sher is my favourite of your creation... Daad kubool kijiye...Likhti rahiye...

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Waaah... Chhote bahar waali bayaani mujhe humesha hi pasand aayi hain... this one is really well expressed... the last sher is my favourite of your creation... Daad kubool kijiye...Likhti rahiye...

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Sar ilzaam rahene do
Mujhe badnaam rahene do

Na rakkhon ummid koi
Mujhe nakaam rahene do

Hai sukoon dard mein
Ye araam rahene do

Payimana na bane zaher
Inhe jaam rahene do

Shuru hua na silsila
Ab anjaam rahene do

Na do koi naam
Mujhe benaam rahene do

Main hun aam insaan
Mujhe aam rahene do

Shahorat se hogi taklif
Mujhe gumnaam rahene do
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Sar ilzaam rahene do
Mujhe badnaam rahene do

Na rakkhon ummid koi
Mujhe nakaam rahene do

Hai sukoon dard mein
Ye araam rahene do

Payimana na bane zaher
Inhe jaam rahene do

Shuru hua na silsila
Ab anjaam rahene do

Na do koi naam
Mujhe benaam rahene do

Main hun aam insaan
Mujhe aam rahene do

Shahorat se hogi taklif
Mujhe gumnaam rahene do
praneeta jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob likha hai aapne har ashar achha hai
meri daad kubul karen
duaon ke saath

Aapka Apna
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praneeta jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob likha hai aapne har ashar achha hai
meri daad kubul karen
duaon ke saath

Ishk sahab
radhe radhe

shukriya aap ke response ke liye
sorry bahot dino baad reply kar rahi hun
koshish hai meri ki jitne bhi pending replies hai jald se jald de sakun
thanks again sir ji
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Nikli mohäbbät ki bäät, to tum yääd ää gäyi
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yuun to dil merä bebäs nä rehtä thä

pär bädle jäb hääläät, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Gärmi ne sukhä diyä thä teri yäädon ko mägär

Hui jäb bärsäät, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Sone chäändi se lädä rehtä thä yeh jism to terä

Dekhe khääli mere hääth, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Tum to rehti thi tääron ki bästi mäi

sochi äpni äuqäät, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Nähi sochoongä tere bääre mäi yeh kähä thä mägär

dekhi teri bääräät, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Bhulä ke tujh ko sääri umr guzäär di

Jäb chhorä zindägi ne sääth, to tum yääd ää gäyi

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Sar ilzaam rahene do
Mujhe badnaam rahene do

Na rakkhon ummid koi
Mujhe nakaam rahene do

Hai sukoon dard mein
Ye araam rahene do

Payimana na bane zaher
Inhe jaam rahene do

Shuru hua na silsila
Ab anjaam rahene do

Na do koi naam
Mujhe benaam rahene do

Main hun aam insaan
Mujhe aam rahene do

Shahorat se hogi taklif
Mujhe gumnaam rahene do

Ji Bhaut Sunder........................


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Sar ilzaam rahene do

Mujhe badnaam rahene do

Na rakkhon ummid koi
Mujhe nakaam rahene do

Hai sukoon dard mein
Ye araam rahene do

Payimana na bane zaher
Inhe jaam rahene do

Shuru hua na silsila
Ab anjaam rahene do

Na do koi naam
Mujhe benaam rahene do

Main hun aam insaan
Mujhe aam rahene do

Shahorat se hogi taklif

Mujhe gumnaam rahene do
Waah, Pari Beti...! Kya khoob likhaa hai aapne...! Dard hi dard aa raha hai aap ki iss behtareen shaayri maiN...! I have appreciated it so much...!

Dher saare daad qabuul karna hamari taraf se bhi...!

Apna khayaal thik se rakhna, ok...?

Aashirvaad ke saath


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yuun to dil merä bebäs nä rehtä thä

pär bädle jäb hääläät, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Gärmi ne sukhä diyä thä teri yäädon ko mägär

Hui jäb bärsäät, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Sone chäändi se lädä rehtä thä yeh jism to terä

Dekhe khääli mere hääth, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Tum to rehti thi tääron ki bästi mäi

sochi äpni äuqäät, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Nähi sochoongä tere bääre mäi yeh kähä thä mägär

dekhi teri bääräät, to tum yääd ää gäyi

Bhulä ke tujh ko sääri umr guzäär di

Jäb chhorä zindägi ne sääth, to tum yääd ää gäyi

galat jagah post ki hai aap ne ye

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Waah, Pari Beti...! Kya khoob likhaa hai aapne...! Dard hi dard aa raha hai aap ki iss behtareen shaayri maiN...! I have appreciated it so much...!

Dher saare daad qabuul karna hamari taraf se bhi...!

Apna khayaal thik se rakhna, ok...?

Aashirvaad ke saath
shukriya chachu aap ke pyaar aashirvad dua aur daad ke liye
aap hamesha hi mere chahere par muskaan lane hai
thanks a lot for understanding and appreciating me always

love n regards

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Sar ilzaam rahene do
Mujhe badnaam rahene do

Na rakkhon ummid koi
Mujhe nakaam rahene do

Hai sukoon dard mein
Ye araam rahene do

Payimana na bane zaher
Inhe jaam rahene do

Shuru hua na silsila
Ab anjaam rahene do

Na do koi naam
Mujhe benaam rahene do

Main hun aam insaan
Mujhe aam rahene do

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waa....haaa.....waaa....haaaa.......jee kya baat hai.bahut khoob. bahut -2 khoobsoorat ghazal banee hai.waa....haaaa......
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aap ka behadh shukriya uff ak sahab is ghazal ko is kadar pasand karne ke liye

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Oho tragedy queen kya baat hai yaar tu dard pe bada achcha likhti thi ab ishq pe achcha likhti hai .....MashaAllah bahot khoobsurat ghazal hai.
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Waahhh !!! Kya khoob ghazal kahi hai Praneeta ji !! Kis aasaanee se gehre aur dil chhoone waale ehsaasaat bayaan kiye !!! Dheron daad !!!

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Wahhh!!! Parii jiii...

Boht boht khoob...

DuaooN k saath,,

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