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Na daal hairat bhari nazar
Itne bhi ajeeb hum nahi

Pari dear.... quoted verse mein kia hi baat hai.. kia hi khiyaal hai...
bas boht boht kamaal..... keep writing ... regards...
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An awesome creation, I must say, Pari Beti...! Har sher ne dil pe teer yuN chalaaya ki kya kahuN...!

Keep it up, my dear & take very good care of yourself, ok...?

Aashirvaad ke saath

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aap ki response mujhe har dum hi khushi deti hai
thank you very much Chachu....aap ki care aur love ke liye

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[QUOTE=Praneeta;346316]
Khushiyon ke qarib hum nahi
Apnon mein habeeb hum nahi

Na daal hairat bhari nazar
Itne bhi ajeeb hum nahi

Kar yakin meri ulfat par
Wafaon se garib hum nahi

Shaamil rakh apne doston mein
Kisi ke raqeeb hum nahi

Andheren bhi gum ho jaye
Taaron jaisi saaqib hum nahi

Koi dekhe bhi nazar bhar
Mahefil mein jaazib hum nahi

Shikwen hi hai kismat apni
Sab kahe najeeb hum nahi

Har dili khwahish ho poori
Aise khushnaseeb hum nahi

qarib - near
habeeb - beloved
raqeeb - rival
saaqib - shining brightly
jaazib - alluring/attractive
najeeb - praiseworthy
[/QUOT



Pari, bahut hi khoobsurat ahsaas dil ko chu gye....!

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Khushiyon ke qarib hum nahi
Apnon mein habeeb hum nahi

Na daal hairat bhari nazar
Itne bhi ajeeb hum nahi

Kar yakin meri ulfat par
Wafaon se garib hum nahi

Shaamil rakh apne doston mein
Kisi ke raqeeb hum nahi

Andheren bhi gum ho jaye
Taaron jaisi saaqib hum nahi

Koi dekhe bhi nazar bhar
Mahefil mein jaazib hum nahi

Shikwen hi hai kismat apni
Sab kahe najeeb hum nahi

Har dili khwahish ho poori
Aise khushnaseeb hum nahi

qarib - near
habeeb - beloved
raqeeb - rival
saaqib - shining brightly
jaazib - alluring/attractive
najeeb - praiseworthy
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Pari, bahut hi khoobsurat ahsaas dil ko chu gye....!
thanks di.....................……

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1st June 2014, 09:55 AM
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Khushiyon ke qarib hum nahi
Apnon mein habeeb hum nahi

Na daal hairat bhari nazar
Itne bhi ajeeb hum nahi

Kar yakin meri ulfat par
Wafaon se garib hum nahi

Shaamil rakh apne doston mein
Kisi ke raqeeb hum nahi

Andheren bhi gum ho jaye
Taaron jaisi saaqib hum nahi

Koi dekhe bhi nazar bhar
Mahefil mein jaazib hum nahi

Shikwen hi hai kismat apni
Sab kahe najeeb hum nahi

Har dili khwahish ho poori
Aise khushnaseeb hum nahi

qarib - near
habeeb - beloved
raqeeb - rival
saaqib - shining brightly
jaazib - alluring/attractive
najeeb - praiseworthy


waahhh praneeta ji.. kyaa baat hai kya baat hai ek se ek aalaa sher hue hain... mazaa aa gayaa iis hairat bharii ghazal padh kar...

Na daal hairat bhari nazar
Itne bhi ajeeb hum nahi

yakeen maaniye is sher ne mujhe jhakjhor ke rakh diyaa.... diil se niklii tees nazar aati hai jo har dil se naikaltii hai..... bahot mubaarak ho aapko...

Shaad...

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waahhh praneeta ji.. kyaa baat hai kya baat hai ek se ek aalaa sher hue hain... mazaa aa gayaa iis hairat bharii ghazal padh kar...

Na daal hairat bhari nazar
Itne bhi ajeeb hum nahi

yakeen maaniye is sher ne mujhe jhakjhor ke rakh diyaa.... diil se niklii tees nazar aati hai jo har dil se naikaltii hai..... bahot mubaarak ho aapko...

Shaad...
thanks Shaad .........................

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