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Pari Na Sahi Mujhe Insaan Hi Samjha Hota -
24th June 2011, 05:12 PM
toote dil ke kuch, armaan hi samjha hota
zinda na sahi mujhe, bejaan hi samjha hota
gawara nahi tujhe, tu kahelaye mera humsafar
pyar na sahi mujh par, ehsaan hi samjha hota
ajnabee hi sahi hum, ab teri nazron mein
ik nazar to dekhte mujhe, anjaan hi samjha hota
bebasi ki aag mein, yu sulaghte nahi hum
rakh kar jaate mujhe, shamshaan hi samjha hota
taqleef hoti hai mujhe bhi, dil rota hai mera
pari na sahi mujhe, insaan hi samjha hota
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
Ananthpak
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24th June 2011, 07:47 PM
bebasi ki aag mein, yu sulaghte nahi hum
rakh kar jaate mujhe, shamshaan hi samjha hota
Very Impressive ... Praneeta Ji !
Maqtaa Bhi Bahut Khoob Laga Hume ... !
Good Expressions .... Vry Nice Creation ... !!
Dil se Daad Qubuul KareN ... Aise hi likhti raheN .... !
DuaaoN Ke Saath ... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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24th June 2011, 11:25 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Praneeta
toote dil ke kuch, armaan hi samjha hota
zinda na sahi mujhe, bejaan hi samjha hota
gawara nahi tujhe, tu kahelaye mera humsafar
pyar na sahi mujh par, ehsaan hi samjha hota
ajnabee hi sahi hum, ab teri nazron mein
ik nazar to dekhte mujhe, anjaan hi samjha hota
bebasi ki aag mein, yu sulaghte nahi hum
rakh kar jaate mujhe, shamshaan hi samjha hota
taqleef hoti hai mujhe bhi, dil rota hai mera
pari na sahi mujhe, insaan hi samjha hota
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pareenita ji
agar insaan samjha hota to wo chhodke jata hi kyo....kahir ye to thi alfaz ki baat
baki gazal bhav se paripuran hai..achchi lagi
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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2nd July 2011, 04:45 PM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta
toote dil ke kuch, armaan hi samjha hota
zinda na sahi mujhe, bejaan hi samjha hota
gawara nahi tujhe, tu kahelaye mera humsafar
pyar na sahi mujh par, ehsaan hi samjha hota
ajnabee hi sahi hum, ab teri nazron mein
ik nazar to dekhte mujhe, anjaan hi samjha hota
bebasi ki aag mein, yu sulaghte nahi hum
rakh kar jaate mujhe, shamshaan hi samjha hota
taqleef hoti hai mujhe bhi, dil rota hai mera
pari na sahi mujhe, insaan hi samjha hota
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bahut hi acha likha apane
bahut dard he har sabd me dil ko choo gaya ahsash
likhate rahe
yah lines bahut hi achi lagy
ajnabee hi sahi hum, ab teri nazron mein
ik nazar to dekhte mujhe, anjaan hi samjha hota
bebasi ki aag mein, yu sulaghte nahi hum
rakh kar jaate mujhe, shamshaan hi samjha hota
taqleef hoti hai mujhe bhi, dil rota hai mera
pari na sahi mujhe, insaan hi samjha hota
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27th August 2011, 04:34 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
bebasi ki aag mein, yu sulaghte nahi hum
rakh kar jaate mujhe, shamshaan hi samjha hota
Very Impressive ... Praneeta Ji !
Maqtaa Bhi Bahut Khoob Laga Hume ... !
Good Expressions .... Vry Nice Creation ... !!
Dil se Daad Qubuul KareN ... Aise hi likhti raheN .... !
DuaaoN Ke Saath ... !
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shukriya Naresh ji
ek baar fir aapne appreciate kar ke motivate kiya hai
thanks a lot
Regards
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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27th August 2011, 04:36 PM
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Originally Posted by sakhi1909
pareenita ji
agar insaan samjha hota to wo chhodke jata hi kyo....kahir ye to thi alfaz ki baat
baki gazal bhav se paripuran hai..achchi lagi
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shurkiya sakhi ji
insaan hi ko dukh dard milta hai duniya mein...shayad wo is liye ki hum express kar pate hai aur ek dusre ko samjha pate hai
thanks again
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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27th August 2011, 04:37 PM
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Originally Posted by shakuntala vyas
bahut hi acha likha apane
bahut dard he har sabd me dil ko choo gaya ahsash
likhate rahe
yah lines bahut hi achi lagy
ajnabee hi sahi hum, ab teri nazron mein
ik nazar to dekhte mujhe, anjaan hi samjha hota
bebasi ki aag mein, yu sulaghte nahi hum
rakh kar jaate mujhe, shamshaan hi samjha hota
taqleef hoti hai mujhe bhi, dil rota hai mera
pari na sahi mujhe, insaan hi samjha hota
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shukriya ma'am padhne ke liye
Regards
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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27th August 2011, 05:12 PM
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Originally Posted by Praneeta
toote dil ke kuch, armaan hi samjha hota
zinda na sahi mujhe, bejaan hi samjha hota
gawara nahi tujhe, tu kahelaye mera humsafar
pyar na sahi mujh par, ehsaan hi samjha hota
ajnabee hi sahi hum, ab teri nazron mein
ik nazar to dekhte mujhe, anjaan hi samjha hota
bebasi ki aag mein, yu sulaghte nahi hum
rakh kar jaate mujhe, shamshaan hi samjha hota
taqleef hoti hai mujhe bhi, dil rota hai mera
pari na sahi mujhe, insaan hi samjha hota
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praneetajee
radhe radhe
bahut khoob
Aapka Apna Ishk
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27th August 2011, 05:26 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
praneetajee
radhe radhe
bahut khoob
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Ishk sahab
radhe radhe
shukriya
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