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Kitab ke panne -
19th December 2003, 10:05 AM
Running down the memory lane
Turning the pages of my diary Came across good and bad days Some wonderful, unbelievable but true Times I was sad and all alone Times when I was happy and glad But all along I found one thing That you were there all along |
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19th December 2003, 02:45 PM
OH.. oo.
Hmm.. So she.. (may be) is always with you!! I pray she always remains with u!! Good... |
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19th December 2003, 04:16 PM
Really, how sweet.
 Good one. Likhte rahiyega. Shukriya. Take care. God bless you. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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19th December 2003, 07:14 PM
yaar jisse sacha pyaar karte ho woh kabhi tumse duur nahi hoti
Kahin na kahin woh tumhare khayalon mein rehti hai |
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19th December 2003, 07:54 PM
aapki yeh sundar si poem padhkar mujhe bhi kuch yaad a raha hai
hope aapko bhi yeh aachi lagagi sometimes when i take a look at the hestic world around me, i feel confused, but all of the noise fades away and i forget my worries when i think of you. sometimes i feel overwhelmed by life, and sometimes i dont know what to do, but everything suddenly feels right when i hear your voice and see the light shining in your eyes. even if i gaze into a crystal ball, i will never see and understand it all, but i know that i would be lost if you went away and i would forever seek brighter days. so i thank god for you. |
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19th December 2003, 08:47 PM
Rohin Jee, you are right about that.
Kahi na kahi nehi, dil meh rahte hein. Aur shayad ish liye hi sinemeh itni dard mehsoosh hoti hein. Thanks. Take care. God bless you.Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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19th December 2003, 08:49 PM
Vinay Jee, beautiful thoughts. It is true though.
Aapka poetry bohot achha tha. Likhte rahiyega. Shukriya. Take care. God bless you. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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20th December 2003, 09:32 AM
Wah vinay bhai khub likha hai
likhte rahein Thanks shimul yaar yeh dil hi to hai jiske wazah se hum lachar hain..kambakhat hasino ka deewana hai... pyaar ka bhuka hai aur bhagwan ne bhi isse sheeshe sa banaya hai...tut jaata hai... |
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20th December 2003, 04:03 PM
Waise kitne dil hein aapke paas? As far as I know we only have one.
Kash kahi aisa hota ke do dil hote sinemeh ek toot bhi jaata Ishq meh toh taqleef na hoti jiine meh.......Mohra film. Aise hi hein na? May be you are special. Thanks. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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22nd December 2003, 12:43 AM
yaar dil to hai ek
magar dhadkan hain anek har dhadkan mein tum ho jeene ke wazah tum ho Shimul hosla awzai ka shukriya aap se pehle bhi poocha tha etraaz na ho to kya humari dosti ki shuruat ho sakti hai |
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22nd December 2003, 12:49 AM
Dosti ki shuruwat keise? You first, please.
Aap pehle bataye toh mein aapko batati hu. Shukriya. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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22nd December 2003, 12:52 AM
i have sent a personnel reply read about me
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22nd December 2003, 12:54 AM
Yes I just have. Thanks. Take care. God bless you.
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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22nd December 2003, 03:52 PM
Panne palt raha tha apne kitab ke
to tera diya hua phool mil gaya samay ke saath sukh chuka tha magar woh pal qaid kar chuka tha aaj bhi woh lamha mere zehem mein hai tere mehek aaj bhi us phool mein hai |
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What is love |
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What is love -
22nd December 2003, 05:06 PM
The night is still young
In my heart a bell has rung Feel like singing a song And dancing with it all along The cool wind blowing clear Singing a song in my ears The trees dancing with it Enjoying every moment of it. Oops! My heart skipped a beat ‘Why? What has happened?’ ‘I don’t know’ says my mind ‘Maybe it’s fallen for it’ ‘What is it?’ I ask myself. ‘Its love’ said my mind ‘No it can’t be’ I said to myself. ‘Wouldn’t I know when I am in love?’ ‘Well you tell me?’ said my mind ‘What do you call love?’ ‘It’s…, well I can’t say. ‘Is this love?’ ‘Well yes, this is love, my friend.’ |
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23rd December 2003, 10:32 AM
Khat ke tere inteezar mein
Yeh din nahi kat tey Yuhn tere inteezar mein Asoon nahi rukte |
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24th December 2003, 11:27 AM
asson to sukh jaayenge
Yuhin tere inteezar mein Magar is dil ko kaise samjhaon Jo daard mein tadpe tere |
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30th December 2003, 09:26 AM
Tere sandeshe ke inteezar mein
yeh palkhein jhapkti nahi tere khat ke aane pe yeh assoon rukte nahi |
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5th January 2004, 02:22 PM
Lakeerein khich kar
tasveer bana raha hoon is kalam se aur har lakeer seeche hui hai Mere Khoon ke rang mein Bahut pyaar karta hoon mein tumse Mili nahi tum mujhe To Jeena chod denge kasam se |
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9th February 2004, 10:46 AM
poorze yeh khat ke
Ek dastan bayan karte hain koi dil tuta hoga Aakhon se asson bahe honge aise dard ke izhaar yeh karte hain |
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10th February 2004, 12:56 AM
hi rohin..........
buhat cute likha app ne......... i like.............carry on! bye |
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10th February 2004, 01:47 AM
Running down the moments lane
Turning the pages of my destiny Came across good and bad dayz Some wonderful, unbelievable but true Times I was sad and all alone Times when I was happy and glad But all along I found one thing That you were there all along "i really really appreciate and recognize ur feelings nad i hope this words get curved in the moments of stones.....!!! Sal!m.....!!! |
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10th February 2004, 02:00 AM
so cute..shhhoo sweet...keep writing..it was a good one..
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10th February 2004, 09:45 AM
Thank you everyone for ur appreciation.
It is for people like yu for whom i shall keep making an honest effort to write and to write well Regards Rohin |
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10th February 2004, 02:59 PM
hi rohin!
how r u? n what is going to write now.......................? ur welcome dear........ take care............bye |
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11th February 2004, 03:44 PM
well rohin....
kaise ho bhai... bahot achchha likhte ho.... Keep it up.... God bless you .... ---------------------------------------------- Ye alfaz he dard e dil ke, aur kuch nahi.n Ye ghaav he zindagee ke, aur kuch nahi.n ---------------------------------------------- |
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11th February 2004, 05:37 PM
Kitab ke panne palat raha tha
beete din yaad kar raha tha har panne pe the kuch yaadein aise yaad kar beh rahe the ashk se asson aise apna hi likha mita raha tha un beete hue pal ko bhulane ke koshish kar raha tha Hope everybody likes this one Rohin |
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11th February 2004, 06:02 PM
Wah bohot khub. Bohot achha laga. Mein bhi ek aise hi kuch sher suni thi toh likhne ki kowshish karti hu. Lafz sahi na ho toh mafh kardijiyega. Yeh sher meri dilko choo gayi thi ish liye likhrahi hu.
Bohot deeno se woh shakh woh shakhen mahtab kaat chhuki hein woh shakhen mahtab kaat chhuki hein ke jish pe tumne girift wada ki reshmi shal ki sitaare saja diye the bohot deeno se woh garde ehsaas chhad chhuki hein ke jish ke zarron pe tumne palkon ki jhalodo ke tamam neelam loota diye the aur ab toh yun hein ke jeise labbasta hizrotoka haar ek lamha tabhi sadiyon ko udkar saas le raha hein....... . Thanks. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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11th February 2004, 08:15 PM
bahut khoob bahut aache wah kya khayal hain
subhan alla Likhte rahein Take Care God Bless you Rohin |
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11th February 2004, 08:37 PM
Dear Rohin Jee, hein na great. When I listen to this one I just can't express my feeling was then. I was feeling like namb aur haan, dil pe utarti gaayi aur mein baar baar sunne ki kowshish kee. Bohot achha laga mujhe. Mujhe bohot achha laga jankar.
By the way, it was your turn. Aap shayad bhul gaaye hein. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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12th February 2004, 09:44 AM
Shimulji,
Doston mein yeh formalities kaisin. anyways kyonki aap keh rahein hai meri baari hai to sunne zindagi bhi kagaz par khichi hui lakeer hai meetana chaho isse to bhi nishan chod jaati hai Love Rohin |
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12th February 2004, 02:55 PM
Sahi hein. Yunhi likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.
Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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12th February 2004, 06:12 PM
Kaagaz par likha jo dil ka haal
To sher ban gaya Hoton se teri tarif mein nikli baat to Woh geet ban gaya |
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By the way, Mashahoor Shayar page par mein ek bohot hi khubsurat kalam post kee hein agar chahe toh jakar dekhlijiyega. Bulleh Shah Jee ka Sufiyaana kalam. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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13th February 2004, 04:43 PM
kitab kholi thi kuch dil ka hal bayan karne ke liye
The man mein baatein itni khali panne palat te reh gaye Love Rohin |
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Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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16th February 2004, 06:17 AM
Kora kagaz nahi hai to kya hua
Yeh mera man ek kora kagaz hai Kalam aur shiyahi nahi to kya yeh khun ka rang laal hai Kaho to likhdoon har jagah Ki meine tujhse pyaar kiya Love Rohin |
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Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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19th February 2004, 02:55 PM
Tutta hai jab bhi ek dil
Ek aur jaam piya jaata hai Phir mehfil sajti hai Aur ek galib phir amar ho jata hai Regards Rohin |
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19th February 2004, 03:08 PM
Ajeeb dastan hein yeh kaha shuru kaha khatam yeh manzile hein kaunsi na woh samajh sake na hum*yeh roshni ke sath kyu dhooya utha cheerag se yeh khwab dekhti hu mein.......
 . Waise gana koi aur likhna chahrahi thi lekin yeh likhdee, have no idea why! Likhte rahna. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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