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kya baat hai -
12th April 2006, 07:08 PM
is thar pila ki dil khe ki `kya baat hai`
jam khli ho na paye jab tak raat hai hum nahi mhotaz a badal teri barshat ke aakh se aanshu jo tapke vo bhi to barshat hai char jaodo tin me ya tin jode char me fark unme kya hua jab jod unka saat hai aadmi to jit par magrur na hoyaad rhak mot ke haato honi sabki ik din mat hai is jha me kuch nahi jo na badla ho char din ki chandni fir aderi raat hai |
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Re: kya baat hai -
12th April 2006, 07:22 PM
Dear,
aap ke likhe shabdo ko phir se likh raha hoon.. unmein typing ki vajah se shabd ajeeb lag rahe the...punah yahi likh raha hoon.. is tarah pila ki dil kahe ki "kya baat hai` jaam khali na hone paaye jab tak raat hai hum nahi mohtaz ai badal teri barsat ke aakh se aanshu jo tapke vo bhi to barsat hai chaar jodo tin me yaa tin jodo chaar me fark unme kya hua jab jod unka saat hai aadmi to jit par magrur na ho yaad rakh maut ke haatho honi sabki ik din maat hai is jahaa me kuch nahi jo na badla ho chaar din ki chandni fir aderi raat hai ab ese padhana kaafi sahaj ho gaya hai.. jisne bhi likha hai.. bahut khub likha hai... shubhkamnao sahit, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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12th April 2006, 08:14 PM
Chandni ji
aapki lines padi to acha laga aur Akant ji ne jis tarah pesh kiya wo bi acha laga. kaanch |
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hi -
13th April 2006, 02:14 PM
hi akantji h r u tnx jo aapne humari kalam ko itne ache se pesh kiya muje acha laga or sorry jo meri whaj se aapko padne me taklif hui tnx again
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Re: kya baat hai -
30th August 2006, 03:37 PM
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tumne to kaha tha ki tumhe shayri nahi ati to ye kya hai. tum bahut acchi shayri kar leti ho.. keep writing. dilip  " Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya |
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Re: kya baat hai -
1st September 2006, 12:21 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by chandni_jain
[B]is thar pila ki dil khe ki `kya baat hai` jam khli ho na paye jab tak raat hai hum nahi mhotaz a badal teri barshat ke aakh se aanshu jo tapke vo bhi to barshat hai aadmi to jit par magrur na hoyaad rhak mot ke haato honi sabki ik din mat hai wah chandni ji bahut khoob likha hai "ki mot ke haato honi sabki ik din mat hai" yeh line bahut badi sachchai hai....... jo honi hai....so enjoy ur each and every moment of life.......................... keep writing mujhe intezaar rahega, apke agle kalaam ka ,aur jawab ka...... apka dost Akshay jain ~~~~~~Aur meri talaash abhi jari hai........................... |
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hi -
2nd September 2006, 12:50 PM
hi dillip j h r u bhaut bhaut sukriya aapka jo aapko humara likha pasnd aaya or mera saat dene ke liye aapjase dost mile to shayd hum log kuch likhna sikh jayege to aapna saat ase hi rhakna
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16th June 2008, 10:32 AM
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bahut acha likha hai apne AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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17th June 2008, 05:19 PM
hi dinesh ji tnx ki aapko ye kalm pasnd aaya
jab koi baat bigd jaye jab koi muskil pad jaye tum dena saat mera o!humnawab |
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17th June 2008, 05:49 PM
bahut khoob
khuda baagi kahi hai,kahi baagi khuda hai. |
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19th June 2008, 12:38 PM
sukariya baagi ji
jab koi baat bigd jaye jab koi muskil pad jaye tum dena saat mera o!humnawab |
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19th June 2008, 01:22 PM
na koi hai na koi tha jindagi me thumhare shiva o hamnawab
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1st July 2008, 07:48 PM
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bohat khub achah hai bohat hi pyaara kalam pesh kiya bhai yahan aakar tou dil khush hogaya bohat hi pyaare ghazlein ashaar dekhne mein aarahein shukrya... khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya, Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai, Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!! |
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hi -
2nd July 2008, 03:26 PM
hi h r u sukriya aapka ki aap yha aaye or ish kalm ko pada or aapko pasnd aaya vase aapki shayri bhi bhut achi hai muje bhut pasnd aayi aap bhi humari tarf se daad kabul karke ok bye
jab koi baat bigd jaye jab koi muskil pad jaye tum dena saat mera o!humnawab |
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pls rep me muje aap ke rep ka intejar rahenga ek sher pesh kar raha sayad aap ko jarur pasand aayenga /////////////////////// Mohabbat /////////////////////////////////// Kuch din pehle mohabbat ko sapna samjha hum ne Muhabbat hue mohabbat ko apna samjha hum ne Mohabbat main iskadar madhosh ho Gaye Is ki bewafai ko wafa samjha hum ne? Zakham iskadar mohabbat ne diye Hum ne in zakhmo ko phool samjha Mohabbat ki chik o pukaar iskadar thi Ke ass pass ke logo ki roone ko asna samjha hum ne Mohabbat ki shidat main aankhen iskadar chandiya Gaye Har chamakti chiz ko sona samjha hum ne Dewaana iskadar mohabbat ne bannaya humko Ke apno ko begana samjha hum ne Mohabbat ki yaadein dil par kuch you naksh kar Gaye Ke on ko bhulane ki khoshish main Khod ko bhula diya hum ne............. mai aap ke rep ka intejar karunga ho sake to muje is add par rep dena rijaan007@yahoo.com rijaan007@rediffmail.com Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
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8th August 2008, 11:32 AM
hi aapne hume apni dosti ke kabil samja ye humare liye bhut achi baat hai rhi best frind ki baat to vo to waqt ke saat saat dosti ghari hoti hai na to chlo abi dosti ki sarwat karte hai i hope best friend bhi ban jaye or muje aapki ye poem bhi achi lagi
jab koi baat bigd jaye jab koi muskil pad jaye tum dena saat mera o!humnawab |
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9th August 2008, 04:38 PM
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Chandni jee: aap ki yeh koshish achchhi lagii... par aap ne jis tarah ek mashuur muhaawara 'char din ki chandni fir anderi raat hai' ka ek sher me.n ek behtar andaaz me.n istemaal kiya hai woh bohat khuub hai.. ek achchhi koshish ke liye meri aur se daad haazir hai... Mayank Reps + |
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9th August 2008, 04:51 PM
behtar likhi haia apen ghazal lafzo ak istemaal aur zazbato ko asar dena
jaanti hai aap keep it |
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15th August 2008, 09:28 PM
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KOSHISH KIJIYE HAME YAAD KARNE KI LAMHE TO APNE AAP HI MIL JAYENGE TAMANNA KIJIYE HAME MILNE KI BAHANE TO APNE AAP HI MIL JAYENGE Usko chaha bhi to iqraar karna na aaya,
Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya, Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai, Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!! |
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