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kaun pagal masoomshayer kee ghazal parhta hai -
28th April 2006, 10:06 PM
mere kareeb baith ke woh tere khat parhta hai
tujhe bhoolne kee koshish main khalal parata hai mere pyar se un ko koyee parhez nahee lekin shikayat tab jab zindgee main dakahl barhta hai mujh par kaheen teree tasweer lagayee jayegee dil ko fikr ye ki ab keel kahan garata hai ye sharab ka asar nahee ye ishq ka khumar hai rafta rafta utarega rafta rafta charhta hai sare nuksan zamane ko nafarat se huyee hain koyee bataye mujhe pyar se koyee bigarta hai? kaza se milna hai ikdin ye jantee hai lekin tujh se mil ke is zindgee ka hosla barhta hai aaj tujh se poochata hoon chipana nahee mujhse main kya likhata hoon aur too kya parhta hai aaj bhee dil kee baten muhabbat ke geet bas? kaun pagal masoomshayer kee ghazal parhta hai kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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28th April 2006, 10:15 PM
Anil ji,
yeh acha hai... padhne ko kaha aur pagal ka khitab bhi de dala... vaise ab kaise kahoon kaise lagi... agar keh diya kaise lagai to aap kahoge meine padhi isliye mein pagal hoon... aur nahi bataya kaise lagi.. to kahoge bataya nahi kaise lagi... aapne pareshani mein daal diya hai... sochna padega kya kahoon... Tc Rohin |
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priya rohin -
28th April 2006, 10:18 PM
tum pagalk nahee samjhdar ho aur bas is waqt tum nazar aye online aur tumhree ray imp hai aur janata hoon bah ke tareef nahee karte achhee to achee buree to buree is liye hee kaha tha ke parh lena. aur haan ye duniya ham jaise pagalon ke sahare chal rahee hai. are pagal ye pagalpan doosre ksim ka hai woh wala nahee hai
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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29th April 2006, 08:10 AM
mere kareeb baith ke woh tere khat parhta hai
tujhe bhoolne kee koshish main khalal parata hai wah! ye sharab ka asar nahee ye ishq ka khumar hai rafta rafta utarega rafta rafta charhta hai its so beautiful...................  kaza se milna hai ikdin ye jantee hai lekin tujh se mil ke is zindgee ka hosla barhta hai bahut khub............ aaj bhee dil kee baten muhabbat ke geet bas? kaun pagal masoomshayer kee ghazal parhta hai hmmm Anil ji aap itna khubsurat likhte hain ki isko pade bina koi rah hi nahi sakata.........aap bas yun hi likhte rahe....... with best wishes ranju |
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29th April 2006, 10:10 AM
aur agar ye padh kar koi mujhe pagal ka khitaab de de to mai taiyaar hu paagal kahlaane ke liye
kyun ki shayri khud mai hi ek pagalpan hai nasha hai jo kabhi theek nahi hota, utarta nahi ek bar jo chadh jaaye. bahut achha likha hai anilbhaiya aap ne bas aise hi likhte rahiye take care manu |
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ranjana -
29th April 2006, 02:17 PM
shukriya poore dil poore apane pan se meree kavita ko parhe ke meree ghazal kee vayakhya ke liye shukriya bahut sara
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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bemisal -
29th April 2006, 02:18 PM
hayari ke liye tumhara pyar bemisal hai aur ummed karata hoon mere liye aur shauyree ke liye aisee hee jagah dil main banaye rakhoge
ANil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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hi -
29th April 2006, 03:07 PM
hi h r u bhaut hi acha likha hai aapne sorry main shayri par kam hi aapati hu lekin iska ye matlb nahi ki muje aapki shayri achi nahi lagti balki ye such hai ki aap bhaut acha likhe hai sache dil se humari daad kabul kare or ase hi likhte rhaye
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shukriya chandni -
29th April 2006, 07:15 PM
shukriya aap ko meree shayri achee lagee achha parhne wale agar aap kee shayri parhe himmat barhtee hai thanks for giving value to my shayree
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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30th April 2006, 10:47 AM
mere kareeb baith ke woh tere khat parhta hai
tujhe bhoolne kee koshish main khalal parata hai mere pyar se un ko koyee parhez nahee lekin shikayat tab jab zindgee main dakahl barhta hai Waaaahh... bahut khoob kaha hai... mujh par kaheen teree tasweer lagayee jayegee dil ko fikr ye ki ab keel kahan garata hai ye sharab ka asar nahee ye ishq ka khumar hai rafta rafta utarega rafta rafta charhta hai Bahut khooob... sare nuksan zamane ko nafarat se huyee hain koyee bataye mujhe pyar se koyee bigarta hai? kaza se milna hai ikdin ye jantee hai lekin tujh se mil ke is zindgee ka hosla barhta hai waaaaaaaaaahhh.... thse lines were really good Anil... aaj tujh se poochata hoon chipana nahee mujhse main kya likhata hoon aur too kya parhta hai aaj bhee dil kee baten muhabbat ke geet bas? kaun pagal masoomshayer kee ghazal parhta hai waaaahhhh.... Hi Anil, Kabhi kabhi aap aisa kucch likh jaate hain ke dil se waah ke alwaa kucch nikalta hi nahi... bahuy\ut hi khoobsurat lagai aapki yeh bayaani... likhte rahiye yun hi.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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30th April 2006, 11:07 AM
koi sharabi jab mehkhane ka rookh karta hai
nasha karne ko uss aur badhta hai laut_ta hai jab wahanse toh badla sa lagta hai aur log kehte hain…PAGAL hai koi Anil ji…. theek issi tarah…hum bhi aapki shayri ka nasha karne yahan chale aate hain….aur humein sab kehte hain…..PAGAL hai koi…. aur aapki shayri…toh main toh aapki shayri ki kayal hoon…jabse aapko padhne lagi hoon…. ….. aapki kalam se nikli ye ghazal kitni kashmakash mein hai…..kitna mushkil hai usse bhulana jo roz aapse rubaroo hota ho….namumkin hi hai…..dard ke kitne hi roop hain, unme se ye bhi ek hai….bilkul alag anokha… “mujh par kaheen teree tasweer lagayee jayegee dil ko fikr ye ki ab keel kahan garata hai”…….wah!....wah aapki kala par jo humein kaagaz par utri nazar aati hai…..jisse padhne ke baad bas yahi ek lafz niklta hai muh se… “ye sharab ka asar nahee ye ishq ka khumar hai rafta rafta utarega rafta rafta charhta hai”……….aur ye sher toh jaise sab byan kar gaya…..har dard ka nichod iss sher mein hai……bahut khoob….dil se nikli daad kabool kijiyega…. Apna khayal rakhyiega |
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30th April 2006, 11:21 AM
aaj tujh se poochata hoon chipana nahee mujhse main kya likhata hoon aur too kya parhta hai aaj bhee dil kee baten muhabbat ke geet bas? kaun pagal masoomshayer kee ghazal parhta hai Anil .. Aisa bhi hota hai.. AB pehle ki taraF nahi chal rahi hawa... Bayein taraf k gulshan ki jagah.. Dayein taraf ka nala mehkata hai.. AB hansega nahi woh meri shayari par.. kyunki ismein ishq nahi , dard jhalakata hai.. Na de payega woh apni muskan na do aansu... Ab mere liye nahi woh... unki bhi keemat samajhta hai.. Bas ek khali khada bach hi gaya hai "SAHIL" Hawa chalti hai toh BAjta hai.. Badal aate hai toh pyas ko tarasta hai.. aaj bhee dil kee baten muhabbat ke geet bas? kaun pagal masoomshayer kee ghazal parhta hai  "Trust is the base of relations, but LOVE is Unspoken promise of Trust" <<<<<SaHiL and His Violin>>>>>>>> |
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30th April 2006, 11:22 AM
ek mistake ** thi
(Khada= Ghada) aaj tujh se poochata hoon chipana nahee mujhse main kya likhata hoon aur too kya parhta hai aaj bhee dil kee baten muhabbat ke geet bas? kaun pagal masoomshayer kee ghazal parhta hai Anil .. Aisa bhi hota hai.. AB pehle ki taraF nahi chal rahi hawa... Bayein taraf k gulshan ki jagah.. Dayein taraf ka nala mehkata hai.. AB hansega nahi woh meri shayari par.. kyunki ismein ishq nahi , dard jhalakata hai.. Na de payega woh apni muskan na do aansu... Ab mere liye nahi woh... unki bhi keemat samajhta hai.. Bas ek khali *Ghada* bach hi gaya hai "SAHIL" Hawa chalti hai toh BAjta hai.. Badal aate hai toh pyas ko tarasta hai.. aaj bhee dil kee baten muhabbat ke geet bas? kaun pagal masoomshayer kee ghazal parhta hai "Trust is the base of relations, but LOVE is Unspoken promise of Trust" <<<<<SaHiL and His Violin>>>>>>>> |
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shukriya ke sath -
30th April 2006, 02:14 PM
pulkit bahut bahut dhanyawad. bar bar kahata hooon jsi kavita par tum ate ho woh mere liye baree ho jatee hai. aur main jan jata hoon ye bakee kavitayon se kuch baree hai achee hai aise hee ate rahana jab bhee masroof zindgee waqt de tumhe
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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shukriya ke sath -
30th April 2006, 02:16 PM
wafa bahut bahut shukriya bahut gahare vichar diye tum ne. aur tumharee mere liye tareef naya naya likhne kee prerana detee rahtee hai apana khjayal rakhana aur meree shayree parhtee rahana
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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sahil -
30th April 2006, 02:19 PM
sahil shukriya hawa ka rukh batane ke liye. aur tumahree jo shayree meree ghazal kee vyakhya kar rahe ehi woh bhee bahut achee lagee. par hamre buzurgon e jaren deen hame isee liye na hawa ka rukh koyee ho ham khud ko sambhale rahen wahee koshish hotee hai ek sher hai mera
main khwabon kee raah par tha zindgee haqeeqat ke raste par chalee na main mila zindgee ko kabhee na mujeh kabhee ye zindgee milee Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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