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Talking first timer - 25th September 2004, 04:17 PM

i have tried writin somethin....i know that there may be mistakes in poetry as i m not a seasoned writer..please ignore the mistakes and catch the feelin

Pyaar mujhse koi itna karega kyoon
Naam le le kar mere koi jiyega kyoon

Dam tod bhi dein gar teri tammannaein
Unn ki khatir koi yahan royega kyoon

Har mod pe milte hain zarurat ke phool
Mohabbat ke kante koi chunega kyoon

Tu kisi ki chahat ki tehrir to nahi
Tere khwabon ko koi sajae ga kyoon

Har mod per Jism ki tijarat hoti ho jahan
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hi - 26th September 2004, 07:58 PM

hello trust is bliss


hi u write good dear ... well done keep it up..


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26th September 2004, 09:19 PM

Pyaar mujhse koi itna karega kyoon
Naam le le kar mere koi jiyega kyoon

Dam tod bhi dein gar teri tammannaein
Unn ki khatir koi yahan royega kyoon

Har mod pe milte hain zarurat ke phool
Mohabbat ke kante koi chunega kyoon

Tu kisi ki chahat ki tehrir to nahi
Tere khwabon ko koi sajae ga kyoon

Har mod per Jism ki tijarat hoti ho jahan
Wahan rooh ka sudai koi banega kyoon


bhai sahab aapne bohat accha likha hai ..... daad kabool kare .... yun hi likhte rahiyega


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Thanks - 28th September 2004, 06:47 PM

Aap dono..yani sachha pyaar and m p love....ka shukriya...i m glad that yu liked my poetry....thank you very much appreciating it...and encouraging me.....


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30th September 2004, 04:41 PM

hey guys, there is something more i have written....looking forward for ur comments....

Rahe daaman tera bedaagh hameshan
Le maine apni maut halat ke naam kardi hai

Tu ruswa na ho jaye kahin iss khayal se
Zindagi maine muskurate hue thukrai hai.

Tere naam ke kafan ki chahat to thi lekin
Mere hisse judai ki ye bosida chadar hi ayi hai

Na mile makhamali bichhone to koi baat nahi
Maine mitti ki gaud mein dard se nijad payi hai

Aaj khushiyan meri mohataj nahi tere dar ki
Aur har taraf meri chaht ki pazirai hai

Har gham se azad ho gayi zindagi
Jism ke kafas se rooh nikal ayi hai


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