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Chale aaye hum... - 6th December 2010, 12:35 AM

VaTan ki miTTi se door chale aaye hum..
Un kadvi khaTTi yaadon se door chale aaye hum..
Sapno ka aashiyaan basaane ki CHAAHAT leke hum...
Apno ke daaman ko chhodd aaye hum...

Khush hain abhi, ki ik aashiyaan To milla..
Khushiyon ko idhar ka paTa To milla..
Gamon ki sargoshi se door aaye hum..
Nayi zindagi ki raah pe chale aaye hum...

ReT ki Tarah jo fisal sa gaya..
Kadmon ke nishaan woh bana hi gaya..
Usi ki chaah me, phir chale aaye hum..
Use paane ki raah pe chale aaye hum..

Hoga khushiyon se bhara mera bhi daaman..
Isi khawab ko chupa ke chale aaye hum..
Apno ko hoga hum pe kal To garv..
Honslo ko buland kar chale aaye hum..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Nice work Priya jee...............


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25th December 2010, 08:35 AM

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so beautiful wordings
Bahut bahut shukriya aapka!!!

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Priya Ji ... Aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko chhuu gaye ... bahut umdaa khayaaloN ke saath likhaa hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi aati rahen aur likhti rahen ... aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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25th December 2010, 12:24 PM

Priya didi:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap?

bahot dino.n ke baad aapki koShiSh ko paRhaa bazm mei.n... dil ko Chhu gayii aapki kahi hu'ii har baat..! hameShaa KhuSh rahe.n yahee duaa hay dil se

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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Nice work Priya jee...............
Bahut bahut shukriya sajid ji!!

Take Care..

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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26th December 2010, 06:23 AM

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VaTan ki miTTi se door chale aaye hum..
Un kadvi khaTTi yaadon se door chale aaye hum..
Sapno ka aashiyaan basaane ki CHAAHAT leke hum...
Apno ke daaman ko chhodd aaye hum...

Khush hain abhi, ki ik aashiyaan To milla..
Khushiyon ko idhar ka paTa To milla..
Gamon ki sargoshi se door aaye hum..
Nayi zindagi ki raah pe chale aaye hum...

ReT ki Tarah jo fisal sa gaya..
Kadmon ke nishaan woh bana hi gaya..
Usi ki chaah me, phir chale aaye hum..
Use paane ki raah pe chale aaye hum..

Hoga khushiyon se bhara mera bhi daaman..
Isi khawab ko chupa ke chale aaye hum..
Apno ko hoga hum pe kal To garv..
Honslo ko buland kar chale aaye hum..

~Priya

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aaj pahlee baar aap ki kisee rachnaa se roobaroo huye hain
achha lagaa ....... saadaa shabd saadah dil ka pata dete hain ..
ghazal kahtee hai ki aap apne dil me kuchh bhi chupaa ke rakhnaa nahi chaahite jo hai wo saamne hai .. aap be laag kahte hain .. aor yahee aap ke kalaam ko chaashnee detaa hai
do baaten khaas nazar aayeen
no1 aap apnee zindagee se khush bhi hain jo moqaam milaa hai us pe oopar waale ka shukr adaa karte hain
no 2 is ko haasil karne ke liye jo khonaa pada hai us kaa gham bhi sataa raha hai
aor yahee do dhaaree talwaar aap ki rachnaa ko dil se qareeb kar detee hai
main dil ki gahraayi se aap ki is saaf bayaani pe mobaarak baad detaa hun aor hazaaron salaam us kholoos ko jo aap ki dharkan me basaa hai
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VaTan ki miTTi se door chale aaye hum..
Un kadvi khaTTi yaadon se door chale aaye hum..
Sapno ka aashiyaan basaane ki CHAAHAT leke hum...
Apno ke daaman ko chhodd aaye hum...

Khush hain abhi, ki ik aashiyaan To milla..
Khushiyon ko idhar ka paTa To milla..
Gamon ki sargoshi se door aaye hum..
Nayi zindagi ki raah pe chale aaye hum...

ReT ki Tarah jo fisal sa gaya..
Kadmon ke nishaan woh bana hi gaya..
Usi ki chaah me, phir chale aaye hum..
Use paane ki raah pe chale aaye hum..

Hoga khushiyon se bhara mera bhi daaman..
Isi khawab ko chupa ke chale aaye hum..
Apno ko hoga hum pe kal To garv..
Honslo ko buland kar chale aaye hum..

~Priya
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27th December 2010, 11:43 AM

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accha laga tuje phir se apne paas dekhkar

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Priya Ji ... Aapki tehreer ke ehsaas dil ko chhuu gaye ... bahut umdaa khayaaloN ke saath likhaa hai aapne ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi aati rahen aur likhti rahen ... aage bhi ... khush rahen ...

duaaon ke saath ... !
Bahut Bahut Shukriya Naresh ji, aapki daad aur duaaon dono ke liye!

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ReT ki Tarah jo fisal sa gaya..
Kadmon ke nishaan woh bana hi gaya..
Usi ki chaah me, phir chale aaye hum..
Use paane ki raah pe chale aaye hum..


~Priya


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Priya didi:

namaste!

kaise hai.n aap?

bahot dino.n ke baad aapki koShiSh ko paRhaa bazm mei.n... dil ko Chhu gayii aapki kahi hu'ii har baat..! hameShaa KhuSh rahe.n yahee duaa hay dil se

KhuSh rahe.n... apnaa Khayaal raKhe.n

duaao.n ke saath ijaazat

aapka

~Dhaval


Thanx Dear!!! It's always a pleasure to c u around, my lil brother!

Take CAre..

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aaj pahlee baar aap ki kisee rachnaa se roobaroo huye hain
achha lagaa ....... saadaa shabd saadah dil ka pata dete hain ..
ghazal kahtee hai ki aap apne dil me kuchh bhi chupaa ke rakhnaa nahi chaahite jo hai wo saamne hai .. aap be laag kahte hain .. aor yahee aap ke kalaam ko chaashnee detaa hai
do baaten khaas nazar aayeen
no1 aap apnee zindagee se khush bhi hain jo moqaam milaa hai us pe oopar waale ka shukr adaa karte hain
no 2 is ko haasil karne ke liye jo khonaa pada hai us kaa gham bhi sataa raha hai
aor yahee do dhaaree talwaar aap ki rachnaa ko dil se qareeb kar detee hai
main dil ki gahraayi se aap ki is saaf bayaani pe mobaarak baad detaa hun aor hazaaron salaam us kholoos ko jo aap ki dharkan me basaa hai
aap ka dost
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Bahut bahut shukriya Masood ji, jo aapne is kadar meri rachna ko pasand kiya, aur use ache se samjha bhi...

Aapki daad aur duaaoon, dono ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya ada karti hun!

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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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