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Love kai din - 18th October 2012, 09:48 PM
Aankhon se mere samandar sa baha tha kai din
Din mein bhi andhera sa raha tha kai din
Ek hee jagah pe roj ghanto intezaar karna
Dil ne kya kya ajeeb sa saha tha kai din

Tasveeron ko teri ulat palat ke dekha tha kai din
Khaton ko tere ek ek karke jalaya tha kai din
Yaad karke tere saath bitaye hue pal
Naam ko tere hatheli se mitaya tha kai din

Phoolon mein khushboo nahin thi kai din
Chaand mein chandni nahin thi kai din
Kaise bheegta is baar saawan mein
Barsaat mein bhi sookha pada tha kai din

Aankhon mein chamak nahin thi kai din
Dil mein dhadkan nahin thi kai din
Aasmaan sa dard ye kaise baantta main
Munh mein jubaan nahin thi kai din


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Aankhon se mere samandar sa baha tha kai din
Din mein bhi andhera sa raha tha kai din
Ek hee jagah pe roj ghanto intezaar karna
Dil ne kya kya ajeeb sa saha tha kai din

Tasveeron ko teri ulat palat ke dekha tha kai din
Khaton ko tere ek ek karke jalaya tha kai din
Yaad karke tere saath bitaye hue pal
Naam ko tere hatheli se mitaya tha kai din

Phoolon mein khushboo nahin thi kai din
Chaand mein chandni nahin thi kai din
Kaise bheegta is baar saawan mein
Barsaat mein bhi sookha pada tha kai din

Aankhon mein chamak nahin thi kai din
Dil mein dhadkan nahin thi kai din
Aasmaan sa dard ye kaise baantta main
Munh mein jubaan nahin thi kai din
wow bahut khoob arvind ji bahut hi khoob................................

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Khaton ko tere jalaya tha ik din
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very touching aru ji.................................
Thanx for underrtanding my feelings...
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Aankhon se mere samandar sa baha tha kai din
Din mein bhi andhera sa raha tha kai din
Ek hee jagah pe roj ghanto intezaar karna
Dil ne kya kya ajeeb sa saha tha kai din

Tasveeron ko teri ulat palat ke dekha tha kai din
Khaton ko tere ek ek karke jalaya tha kai din
Yaad karke tere saath bitaye hue pal
Naam ko tere hatheli se mitaya tha kai din

Phoolon mein khushboo nahin thi kai din
Chaand mein chandni nahin thi kai din
Kaise bheegta is baar saawan mein
Barsaat mein bhi sookha pada tha kai din

Aankhon mein chamak nahin thi kai din
Dil mein dhadkan nahin thi kai din
Aasmaan sa dard ye kaise baantta main
Munh mein jubaan nahin thi kai din
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thanx taish jee.... Aapne ise pada aur ise samjha uske liye shukriya...


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Aankhon se mere samandar sa baha tha kai din
Din mein bhi andhera sa raha tha kai din
Ek hee jagah pe roj ghanto intezaar karna
Dil ne kya kya ajeeb sa saha tha kai din

Tasveeron ko teri ulat palat ke dekha tha kai din
Khaton ko tere ek ek karke jalaya tha kai din
Yaad karke tere saath bitaye hue pal
Naam ko tere hatheli se mitaya tha kai din

Phoolon mein khushboo nahin thi kai din
Chaand mein chandni nahin thi kai din
Kaise bheegta is baar saawan mein
Barsaat mein bhi sookha pada tha kai din

Aankhon mein chamak nahin thi kai din
Dil mein dhadkan nahin thi kai din
Aasmaan sa dard ye kaise baantta main
Munh mein jubaan nahin thi kai din
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Aankhon se mere samandar sa baha tha kai din
Din mein bhi andhera sa raha tha kai din
Ek hee jagah pe roj ghanto intezaar karna
Dil ne kya kya ajeeb sa saha tha kai din

Tasveeron ko teri ulat palat ke dekha tha kai din
Khaton ko tere ek ek karke jalaya tha kai din
Yaad karke tere saath bitaye hue pal
Naam ko tere hatheli se mitaya tha kai din

Phoolon mein khushboo nahin thi kai din
Chaand mein chandni nahin thi kai din
Kaise bheegta is baar saawan mein
Barsaat mein bhi sookha pada tha kai din

Aankhon mein chamak nahin thi kai din
Dil mein dhadkan nahin thi kai din
Aasmaan sa dard ye kaise baantta main
Munh mein jubaan nahin thi kai din
aapki shayari ko waqt dena worth raha
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Aankhon se mere samandar sa baha tha kai din
Din mein bhi andhera sa raha tha kai din
Ek hee jagah pe roj ghanto intezaar karna
Dil ne kya kya ajeeb sa saha tha kai din

Tasveeron ko teri ulat palat ke dekha tha kai din
Khaton ko tere ek ek karke jalaya tha kai din
Yaad karke tere saath bitaye hue pal
Naam ko tere hatheli se mitaya tha kai din

Phoolon mein khushboo nahin thi kai din
Chaand mein chandni nahin thi kai din
Kaise bheegta is baar saawan mein
Barsaat mein bhi sookha pada tha kai din

Aankhon mein chamak nahin thi kai din
Dil mein dhadkan nahin thi kai din
Aasmaan sa dard ye kaise baantta main
Munh mein jubaan nahin thi kai din
Bhoot pyaari lines h sir aapki.. bhoot hi deep n lovely ..

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kya baat hai bhai.... waahhhh bahot khoob.............................
Thanx shoiab bhai.............................................. .......


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bahut hi umdaa ehsaas
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padh kar majja aa gaya... bahot hi achaa laga aru bhai.... ek ek sher sawa sher hai...

Phoolon mein khushboo nahin thi kai din
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ye to mujhe kuch khas hi pasand aaya...

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keep writing...
Thanx a lot jat in mood jee.......


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Aankhon se mere samandar sa baha tha kai din
Din mein bhi andhera sa raha tha kai din
Ek hee jagah pe roj ghanto intezaar karna
Dil ne kya kya ajeeb sa saha tha kai din

Tasveeron ko teri ulat palat ke dekha tha kai din
Khaton ko tere ek ek karke jalaya tha kai din
Yaad karke tere saath bitaye hue pal
Naam ko tere hatheli se mitaya tha kai din

Phoolon mein khushboo nahin thi kai din
Chaand mein chandni nahin thi kai din
Kaise bheegta is baar saawan mein
Barsaat mein bhi sookha pada tha kai din

Aankhon mein chamak nahin thi kai din
Dil mein dhadkan nahin thi kai din
Aasmaan sa dard ye kaise baantta main
Munh mein jubaan nahin thi kai din
Waah kisi ke jane k baad kya haal e dil hota hai...bahut khoob bayaan kiyaa aapne...very nice..


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Waah kisi ke jane k baad kya haal e dil hota hai...bahut khoob bayaan kiyaa aapne...very nice..
Thanx a lot madhu jee......aapne mujhe pada aur samjha uske liye shukriyaa.......


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