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aghaz nahee dard ka anjam dekhiye -
19th August 2006, 07:47 AM
aghaz nahee dard ka anjam dekhiye
meri har ghazal main unaka nam dekhiye ankhon ka dukh dekh kyon dardmand hain is rooh ko jo mil gaya aram dekhiye kahate ho pyar main kya mil gaya mujhe ghazal parhiye meree mera kam dekhiye pursokoon sare ye din bhool jayenge kisee sham bheegee meree sham dekhiye badal nahee saknge ap jo mera hal hai main khush hoon ap apana kam dekhiye ashiq kee pooja bhee hai kuch alag-alag samjhenge ap gar mera salam dekhiye sar jhuka ke usee par ye jal charhaeeye jis patthar pe likha unka nam dekhiye apnee ibadat ko ap ye rang deejiye saree duniya sa alag ye kam dekhiye har patti main radha talash keejiye drakht main chipa huya shyam dekhiye kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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19th August 2006, 09:04 AM
badal nahee saknge ap jo mera hal hai
main khush hoon ap apana kam dekhiye Bahut khuub! Anil jee... isme jo nonchallant attitude jhalak raha hai...bahut hi pasand aaya mujhe...ek laaparwaah see chunauti! apnee ibadat ko ap ye rang deejiye saree duniya sa alag ye kam dekhiye har patti main radha talash keejiye drakht main chipa huya shyam dekhiye aur yeh paragraph bhi ek pyaara sa ehsaas de gaya...radha aur shyam ka prakriti mein niwaas...bahut hi khuubsurat sa manzar lagta hai...meri or se ek achhi rachna pe daad kabuul kijiey... gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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19th August 2006, 10:13 AM
abhi abhi paigam aya hain
unhone hume milne ke liye bulaya hain himmat nahi padti ki unke samne jaya jaye unhe apne hale dil ka bayan sunaya jaye Atul (i dont how its, but its good for me) :cool: |
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19th August 2006, 10:55 AM
aghaz nahee dard ka anjam dekhiye
meri har ghazal main unaka nam dekhiye ankhon ka dukh dekh kyon dardmand hain is rooh ko jo mil gaya aram dekhiye Waaaaaaaaahhh.... bahut hi khoobsurat aaghaz hai... kahate ho pyar main kya mil gaya mujhe ghazal parhiye meree mera kam dekhiye pursokoon sare ye din bhool jayenge kisee sham bheegee meree sham dekhiye kya baaat hai... badal nahee saknge ap jo mera hal hai main khush hoon ap apana kam dekhiye ashiq kee pooja bhee hai kuch alag-alag samjhenge ap gar mera salam dekhiye bahut khoob... sar jhuka ke usee par ye jal charhaeeye jis patthar pe likha unka nam dekhiye apnee ibadat ko ap ye rang deejiye saree duniya sa alag ye kam dekhiye har patti main radha talash keejiye drakht main chipa huya shyam dekhiye Waaaaaaaaaah... welll said anil... Dear Anil, Kaafi dino baad aapko padha aur yakeen maaniye dil khush ho gaya isko padhkar... bhaut hi khoobsurat bayaani hai... mujhe bahut pasand aaye aapkke yeh aashaar.... aise hi likhte raha kijiye...apna khayal rakhiye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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19th August 2006, 03:19 PM
hello anil
bahut umda likha hai appne, sabhi ko radha krishan ke pyar ki samarpan bavana battana, bahut hi pyara ahsaas hai, accha lagga padkar aur yeh ashiaar dil ko pyar se bhar gaya. apnee ibadat ko ap ye rang deejiye saree duniya sa alag ye kam dekhiye har patti main radha talash keejiye drakht main chipa huya shyam dekhiye  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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shukriya paras jee -
20th August 2006, 09:48 AM
bahut udas thee m,eree shayree yoon laga door door tak sab apne sabhee parhne wale kho gaye hain. aise main aap ne mujhe parha to laga meree shayree meree kalam dobara sans lene lagee bahut bahut shukriya aap ko khud bhee pata nahee hoga aaj aap ne mere kalam pe aa ke kya kamal kar diya nahee to main ja hee raha tha shayed thak ke har ke
paras jee aap ka ana bahut achha lagata hai Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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shukriya atul -
20th August 2006, 09:50 AM
bahut bahut shukriya atul
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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pulkit -
20th August 2006, 09:52 AM
tum jaise log jab bahut masroof ho jate hain masoomshayer aur us kee masoomshayree ko bahut nuksan hota hai. kabhee kabhee lgata hai kya likhen jab parhne wala koyee bhee nahee tum ne aa ke bahut achha kiya aur bahut dil se parhee ye baat aur achee lagee
shukriya Pulkit Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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20th August 2006, 09:53 AM
ek bar phir aap ne meree tanaha see shayree ko sahara diya sunita jee achha laga yoon hee atee rahana shukriya
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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20th August 2006, 07:14 PM
[color=royal blue]Anil Bhaaii,
Bohat khuubsuurat nazam kahii hai aap ne.. mere taraf se dili mubaarak baad qubool kareN... apnee ibadat ko ap ye rang deejiye saree duniya sa alag ye kam dekhiye har patti main radha talash keejiye drakht main chipa huya shyam dekhiye waah waah! bohat khoob.... YuuN he likhte raheN..... Mayank[/color] |
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21st August 2006, 09:59 PM
anil ji,
hamesha ki tarah phir se ek haseen paishkash aapki.bahut achi lagi aapki yeh nazm.bahut badhiya.likhte rahiye. gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi?? --akelijaan-- |
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shukriya -
22nd September 2006, 02:50 PM
bahut bahut shukriya mayank aise hee aa jaya karo kalam par
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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shukriya -
22nd September 2006, 02:52 PM
bahut bahut shukriya akelijan yoon he emeree shayree ka khayal rakhana
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Re: aghaz nahee dard ka anjam dekhiye -
22nd September 2006, 10:43 PM
aghaz nahee dard ka anjam dekhiye
meri har ghazal main unaka nam dekhiye ankhon ka dukh dekh kyon dardmand hain is rooh ko jo mil gaya aram dekhiye kahate ho pyar main kya mil gaya mujhe ghazal parhiye meree mera kam dekhiye pursokoon sare ye din bhool jayenge kisee sham bheegee meree sham dekhiye badal nahee saknge ap jo mera hal hai main khush hoon ap apana kam dekhiye ashiq kee pooja bhee hai kuch alag-alag samjhenge ap gar mera salam dekhiye sar jhuka ke usee par ye jal charhaeeye jis patthar pe likha unka nam dekhiye apnee ibadat ko ap ye rang deejiye saree duniya sa alag ye kam dekhiye har patti main radha talash keejiye drakht main chipa huya shyam dekhiye Anil Ji, Jab aapne yeh rachna phone par sunayee thi..tabhi bahut pasand aaye thi...bahut gehrayee ke saath aapne kitni aasaani sesab kuch bayaan kar diya....sach..! Yun hi apne jazbaat sajate rahiye... ... jab se kisi ne karli hai suraj ki chori aao chal ke suraj dhoondhein aur na mile toh kiran kiran phir jama karein hum aur ik suraj naya banyein -NM |
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26th September 2006, 01:06 PM
Hi anil ji
kya bat he pur asar ashar aghaz nahee dard ka anjam dekhiye meri har ghazal main unaka nam dekhiye ankhon ka dukh dekh kyon dardmand hain is rooh ko jo mil gaya aram dekhiye apke kam ki hi kashish he jo hame is mehfil main ane pr majboor karti he apne pyar kya achha kya agar na karte to shayad hame isqadar khushnuma rachnaoN se mehroom rehna padta(apko kuch na mila ho per hame apke pyar se na bhoolne wali annmol rachnayeN mili hain thanx for giving us nice creation) kahate ho pyar main kya mil gaya mujhe ghazal parhiye meree mera kam dekhiye ye sher mujhe is rachna ka sabse achhhhhhhhhaaaaaa sher laga badal nahee saknge ap jo mera hal hai main khush hoon ap apana kam dekhiye keep writing take care bye Zindagi ko tumne mohbbat bana diya |
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Re: aghaz nahee dard ka anjam dekhiye -
26th September 2006, 07:12 PM
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2nd October 2006, 11:41 AM
bahut bahut shukriya shalini bahut achha laga is kalam par tumhara ana aur ummeed hai tum en dil se samjha aur parha hoga ise
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2nd October 2006, 11:42 AM
rubeena bahut gahar dil se paha bahut pyar se tum en saraha mujhe .iase he meree shayree ke hamrah rahana achha lagata hai
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2nd October 2006, 11:44 AM
bahut bahut shukriya sakhi tum bahut dino baad ayeen yahan aur mujhe bahut achha laga
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Atul ji aapka SDC par ek baar phir se dil se suwagat hai...... .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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