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Mera Aaina - 22nd December 2006, 08:46 PM
Aaj muskuraaye bahuT main aur mera aaina..
Samjh nahi aaya kaun kispe hass raha Tha..
Main uspe, ya mujhpe mera aaina..

Dikha raha Tha unki Tasveer pal do pal ke liye..
SharaaraT kar raha Tha mera aaina..

Hassa raha Tha mujhe..
BahuT khush nazar aa raha Tha mera aaina..

Phir na jaane kya hua use..
Naraaz ho gaya mujhse mera aaina..

Dikhaane laga mere gam ko khud mein..
Rone lag gaya mera aaina..

De ke aansoo phir meri aankhon me..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

Na jaane kyun diya dard usne "ChaahaT" ko..
DeTa raha behisaab mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

~Priya


"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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23rd December 2006, 10:01 AM
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Aaj muskuraaye bahuT main aur mera aaina..
Samjh nahi aaya kaun kispe hass raha Tha..
Main uspe, ya mujhpe mera aaina..

Dikha raha Tha unki Tasveer pal do pal ke liye..
SharaaraT kar raha Tha mera aaina..

Hassa raha Tha mujhe..
BahuT khush nazar aa raha Tha mera aaina..

Phir na jaane kya hua use..
Naraaz ho gaya mujhse mera aaina..

Dikhaane laga mere gam ko khud mein..
Rone lag gaya mera aaina..

De ke aansoo phir meri aankhon me..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

Na jaane kyun diya dard usne "ChaahaT" ko..
DeTa raha behisaab mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

~Priya


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23rd December 2006, 01:32 PM
Aaj muskuraaye bahuT main aur mera aaina..
Samjh nahi aaya kaun kispe hass raha Tha..
Main uspe, ya mujhpe mera aaina..

Dikha raha Tha unki Tasveer pal do pal ke liye..
SharaaraT kar raha Tha mera aaina..

Hassa raha Tha mujhe..
BahuT khush nazar aa raha Tha mera aaina..

Phir na jaane kya hua use..
Naraaz ho gaya mujhse mera aaina..

Dikhaane laga mere gam ko khud mein..
Rone lag gaya mera aaina..

De ke aansoo phir meri aankhon me..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

Na jaane kyun diya dard usne "ChaahaT" ko..
DeTa raha behisaab mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

....................

Dear Priya,

U left me speech;ess this time... bahut khoobsurati se apni baat keh jaati ho tum... bahut pyaara likha hai... Every line was so beautifull... Bahut hi khoobsuart aashaar hain... meri daad kubool karna...

Jaanta nahin ke tum kyun udaas ho... but i do wish that u stay happy always... pana khayal rakhna... keep smiling...

Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
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23rd December 2006, 02:58 PM
priya ji namskaar

dil ko chhune wala likha priya ji apane aap k jeevan ke bare me mein jayda to nahi janta bas main to prarthna kar sakta hun k aap ke jeevan me dard kam aur khusi bhara lamhe jayda aaye aur kuch nahi kaha jayenga

aaNkho ko nam kiye aaiNa aaj tut raha haiN,
aapko padhke aisa laga k ziNdagii se koi ruth raha haiN

khus rahiye hamesa, apna khayal rakhiye

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25th December 2006, 09:34 AM
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Aaj muskuraaye bahuT main aur mera aaina..
Samjh nahi aaya kaun kispe hass raha Tha..
Main uspe, ya mujhpe mera aaina..

Dikha raha Tha unki Tasveer pal do pal ke liye..
SharaaraT kar raha Tha mera aaina..

Hassa raha Tha mujhe..
BahuT khush nazar aa raha Tha mera aaina..

Phir na jaane kya hua use..
Naraaz ho gaya mujhse mera aaina..

Dikhaane laga mere gam ko khud mein..
Rone lag gaya mera aaina..

De ke aansoo phir meri aankhon me..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

Na jaane kyun diya dard usne "ChaahaT" ko..
DeTa raha behisaab mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

~Priya
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bakai main ehsas bade khoob surat hain.
priya ji waise bhi aaina wahi batata hai jo uske samne hota hai.aapne ise sacchai ke sath bayaa.n kiya iske liye badhaii
ese hi likhti rahe.n aap hamesha
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Thumbs up mera aaina - 25th December 2006, 02:00 PM
priya ji bahut accha likhti hai aap
aaj mere sath bhi kuch aise hi howa
mera aaina aaj mujh par bahut hass rah tha
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Luv ya Di..

Take Care..

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Aaj muskuraaye bahuT main aur mera aaina..
Samjh nahi aaya kaun kispe hass raha Tha..
Main uspe, ya mujhpe mera aaina..

Dikha raha Tha unki Tasveer pal do pal ke liye..
SharaaraT kar raha Tha mera aaina..

Hassa raha Tha mujhe..
BahuT khush nazar aa raha Tha mera aaina..

Phir na jaane kya hua use..
Naraaz ho gaya mujhse mera aaina..

Dikhaane laga mere gam ko khud mein..
Rone lag gaya mera aaina..

De ke aansoo phir meri aankhon me..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

Na jaane kyun diya dard usne "ChaahaT" ko..
DeTa raha behisaab mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

....................

Dear Priya,

U left me speech;ess this time... bahut khoobsurati se apni baat keh jaati ho tum... bahut pyaara likha hai... Every line was so beautifull... Bahut hi khoobsuart aashaar hain... meri daad kubool karna...

Jaanta nahin ke tum kyun udaas ho... but i do wish that u stay happy always... pana khayal rakhna... keep smiling...

Pulkin Bhai..

Aapne humesha hi mera hounsla badhaaya hai... Uske liye main tahe dil se shurguzaar hun.

Aapko meri rachna pasand aayi jaanke behad khushi hui..

Aap bhi apna khayal rakhiye..

Take Care..

~Priya


"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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priya ji namskaar

dil ko chhune wala likha priya ji apane aap k jeevan ke bare me mein jayda to nahi janta bas main to prarthna kar sakta hun k aap ke jeevan me dard kam aur khusi bhara lamhe jayda aaye aur kuch nahi kaha jayenga

aaNkho ko nam kiye aaiNa aaj tut raha haiN,
aapko padhke aisa laga k ziNdagii se koi ruth raha haiN

khus rahiye hamesa, apna khayal rakhiye

aapka dost
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Dhaval ji...

Bahut sach kaha aapne ki zindagi se koi rooth raha hai..

Zindagi se rooth ke jaaungi kahan..
unse bichhad ke jii paaungi kahan....

Aapke itne apne pan ke liye behad shurkiya... aapne humesha mera saath diya hai.. uske liye aise koi bhi shabd nahi soojh raha jo aapka shukriya kar sake..

Thankyou!

~Priya


"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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26th December 2006, 11:57 PM
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Aaj muskuraaye bahuT main aur mera aaina..
Samjh nahi aaya kaun kispe hass raha Tha..
Main uspe, ya mujhpe mera aaina..

Dikha raha Tha unki Tasveer pal do pal ke liye..
SharaaraT kar raha Tha mera aaina..

Hassa raha Tha mujhe..
BahuT khush nazar aa raha Tha mera aaina..

Phir na jaane kya hua use..
Naraaz ho gaya mujhse mera aaina..

Dikhaane laga mere gam ko khud mein..
Rone lag gaya mera aaina..

De ke aansoo phir meri aankhon me..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

Na jaane kyun diya dard usne "ChaahaT" ko..
DeTa raha behisaab mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

~Priya
Ek Main aur
Ek mera aks
Dono kitne ek
Dono kitne alag
Ek bhram hai
Doosra sacch
Sawal karta woh
La jawab hota mein
Jo dikhta nahi mujhe
Dikhata hai woh
Mein kaun hoon
Woh kaun hai
mera sacch woh hai
aur uska aks mein

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bhut khub - 27th December 2006, 11:12 AM
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Aaj muskuraaye bahuT main aur mera aaina..
Samjh nahi aaya kaun kispe hass raha Tha..
Main uspe, ya mujhpe mera aaina..

Dikha raha Tha unki Tasveer pal do pal ke liye..
SharaaraT kar raha Tha mera aaina..

Hassa raha Tha mujhe..
BahuT khush nazar aa raha Tha mera aaina..

Phir na jaane kya hua use..
Naraaz ho gaya mujhse mera aaina..

Dikhaane laga mere gam ko khud mein..
Rone lag gaya mera aaina..

De ke aansoo phir meri aankhon me..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

Na jaane kyun diya dard usne "ChaahaT" ko..
DeTa raha behisaab mera aaina..
Hassa bahuT mujhpe mera aaina..

~Priya
priya ji kaya baat hai bhut pyari nazam pesh ki hai.....kehna bhut kush chhahta hoon.....magar aapke khyaal ne muh see diya hai.....daad hazir hai.......take care......raj......

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priya ji
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ek alag hi rang main rangi huyii aapki ye rachna padi
bakai main ehsas bade khoob surat hain.
priya ji waise bhi aaina wahi batata hai jo uske samne hota hai.aapne ise sacchai ke sath bayaa.n kiya iske liye badhaii
ese hi likhti rahe.n aap hamesha
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Aapko mere ehsaas pasand aaye mujhe bahut khushi hui...

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka.. yahan aake meri housla afzaai karne ke liye..

Take Care..

~Priya


"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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mera aaina aaj mujh par bahut hass rah tha
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god bless you
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Aapka bahut bahut shukriya jo aapko meri rachna pasand aayi...

Lagta hai sabhi ke aaine' kaafi alag hi mood me hain...

Take Care..

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Dono kitne alag
Ek bhram hai
Doosra sacch
Sawal karta woh
La jawab hota mein
Jo dikhta nahi mujhe
Dikhata hai woh
Mein kaun hoon
Woh kaun hai
mera sacch woh hai
aur uska aks mein

-- Rohin Bhargava

Aapki kavita padh kar kuch apne purane khayal yaad aa gaye.... so share kiye... I hope you didn't mind... ur words were beautifully woven with ur heart beats...

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Bahut hi pyare ehsaas share karne ke liye bahut bahut shukriya..

Aapne mere rachna ko bhi pasand kiya jaan ke behad khushi hui..

Take Care..

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hi priya ji
kese ho
aapko hamara namaskar.
bada bura laga hamein aapke samne aukat ki baatein karke. kher chhodo us baat ko.
aaapne is rachna mein to kamal hi kar diya hai aapne ismein apne aur apne gar ke aaine ki baat ki hai .

Taras gaye wo aapko dekhne ke liye,
Fir bhi uska dil aapke liye dua karta hai,
unse achchha to aapke gar ka aaina hai,
Jo roz aapko dekh to pata hai.

aapka dost merul
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Raj ji..

Aapka bahut bahut shukriya meri rachna ko pasand karne ke liye..

Take Care..

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hi priya ji
kese ho
aapko hamara namaskar.
bada bura laga hamein aapke samne aukat ki baatein karke. kher chhodo us baat ko.
aaapne is rachna mein to kamal hi kar diya hai aapne ismein apne aur apne gar ke aaine ki baat ki hai .

Taras gaye wo aapko dekhne ke liye,
Fir bhi uska dil aapke liye dua karta hai,
unse achchha to aapke gar ka aaina hai,
Jo roz aapko dekh to pata hai.

aapka dost merul
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love is not a heart of life.
It is just a part of life.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~~~>
Merul ji..

Mujhe kuch samjh nahi aaya aap kis baat ki baat kar rahe hain...

Aapko meri rachna pasand aayi jaan ke bahut khushi hui...

Aapne bahut hi sundar sher likha hai...

Take Care..

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confused mat hoiyega
ab aap hi bhul gaye us baat ko to jane do

aapki agli rachna ka intezaar rahega'
aapka dost merul
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It is just a part of life.
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confused mat hoiyega
ab aap hi bhul gaye us baat ko to jane do

aapki agli rachna ka intezaar rahega'
aapka dost merul
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Love is not a heart of life.
It is just a part of life.
Merul~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~>
hm...



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