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19th January 2005, 02:35 AM
Ek Tanha Baadal...
Ek akela tanha baadal ki tarah toumhare in khayaalon par se gouzar kar jaana hai moujhe... Andhakaar bankar tere suraj par apni parchaayi ko padne nahin diya Na hi barsaat ki boundein bankar teri khoushiyan par barsa kabhi Suraj ko apni baahon main lipatne wale Ya pyaasi dharti par barasne wale baadalon ki hi kouch ahamiyat hoti hai Baaki ….kisse pata Kal yahi kaafi hoga mere liye ki tere asmaan se gouzar kar tere deedaar ke do pal paaya meine… Tera naam mere liye hamesha ek ghazal ban kar rahegi… Amanush...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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19th January 2005, 04:29 AM
Well Done~Daad kuboul karlena*Dekhlon, Shayar tou Tum bangaye ho
**I am sure You are doing great**Puchhne ki kam tou maine chhod di hain, haan Maine kaha tou tha pehle hi**Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat chahoungi...**Take Care~God bless You. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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20th January 2005, 07:41 PM
Thanks for liking "Tanha Baadal"...aur han moujhe Shayar
ki hazrat mat diya karo... Kehte hein na... Aap kya jaane moujhko samajhte hein kya mein to kouch bhi nahin... Daad aur doua dil se kaboul kiya hai humne... God bless you and take care... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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20th January 2005, 08:59 PM
Bahut khoob Amanush.....is tanha baadal ki ye daastaan ek dard ka aabhaas to karati hai ..per agar rachna ki baat karoN to..bahut prabhavit kiya hai aapne.
Chaand Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN. - Chaand |
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21st January 2005, 09:16 AM
Ek akela tanha baadal ki tarah
toumhare in khayaalon par se gouzar kar jaana hai moujhe... Andhakaar bankar tere suraj par apni parchaayi ko padne nahin diya Na hi barsaat ki boundein bankar teri khoushiyan par barsa kabhi Wah Wah!! Suraj ko apni baahon main lipatne wale Ya pyaasi dharti par barasne wale baadalon ki hi kouch ahamiyat hoti hai Baaki ….kisse pata Kal yahi kaafi hoga mere liye ki tere asmaan se gouzar kar tere deedaar ke do pal paaya meine… Tera naam mere liye hamesha ek ghazal ban kar rahegi… Bahut Khoob!! Dear Amanush ji!! Kaise hain Janaab? Hope ur doing gr8 Bahut khoob... mujhe bahut aacche lage aapke yeh ashaar.... Really very nioce words... Andhakaar bankar tere suraj par apni parchaayi ko padne nahin diya Na hi barsaat ki boundein bankar teri khoushiyan par barsa kabhi Yeh sher mera fav. raha... Loved it... Aage bhi yun hi likhte rahiyega.... And do Take Care Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd January 2005, 03:20 AM
Chaand...
"Ek Tanha Badal"ko pasand karne ke liye bahout dhanyavaad... Aap younhi hawsla dete rahiyega aur hum jyaada likhne ki koshish kareinge... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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23rd January 2005, 03:30 AM
Hello Amanush
aje bahote dino bade tume hara likha pada maine bahote hia aacha likha hia hamesha ki tarha. nice work keep it up aise hi likhte raho hum padte rahinege. soni |
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23rd January 2005, 03:34 AM
Pulkit...
Nice to know that you have liked "Ek Tanha Baadal" !I am fine ,Thank you... Do you like this piece...? Pehle kabhi pyaar se bahout lagan thi ab kissi ko bhi chahne ki himmat nahin Meri mohabbat ahista ahista mar rahi hai aur moujhe youn marne ki chaahat nahin... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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23rd January 2005, 03:39 AM
Hi Soni...
Keissi ho ?Yahan aakar toum ne "Ek Tanha Baadal" ke saath chaar chaand laga di hai...Thanks so much for appreciating... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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23rd January 2005, 10:32 AM
hi amanush,
wow fantastic buddy. i loved reading ur post. wat depth of words .keep the spirits high buddy. aise hi likhte rahiye.kuch yaad aaya so writing here......... MOHAABAT KE BHI KUCH ANDAZ HOTE HAI, JAAGTI AANKHON MEIN BHI KUCH KHAWB HOTE HAI..... JARURI NAHI HAI KI GUM MEIN HI AANSOO NIKLE......... MUSKURATI AANKHON MEIN BHI SAILAB HOTE HAI...... |
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23rd January 2005, 12:41 PM
Hi Amanush,
Lovely words and feelings...Beautiully conveyed But meri taraf se ek gustakhi Tu 'Tanha' mein 'Akela' To aaza mehfil mein jara Lekar jaam ka hum aasra Tu mujhe aur mein tujhe Sunayein apna hal-e-dil mere yaara Thanks Rohin |
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23rd January 2005, 11:59 PM
Hi Jasleen...
Thanks for appreciating "Ek Tanha Baadal" Hope you'll like this one too... Pata nahin kioun... Pata nahin kioun ye sitaare mujhse ankhein chouraate hein… Pata nahin kioun kouch lafz Meri shayri se daaman bachaate hein… Pata nahin kioun har muskaan Boujha boujha sa lagta hai… Pata nahin kioun pyaar Banjar zameen sa dikhta hai… Aakhir... pata nahin kioun Har waqt in ashkon ki Hi jeet hoti hai… Shaayad mujhko jeena aata nahin… Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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24th January 2005, 12:10 AM
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Thanks for praising "Ek Tanha Baadal"...Kya aap ke gustakhi ke saath ek gustakhi karne ki ijaazat hai...? Yaara ne jaam lekar hamare naam ko pukaara Maajhi! le chalo naiye ko kinaare par dobaara Gum ke saagar main na jane kitne arse bitaye ab ji chahe ki hum karein maikhaane ka nazaara Wahan par toute houe dilon ke taraane bhi honge Chalkegi ankhein to deinge dhouan ko dosh saara Na hoga yaara ‘Akela’ na rahounga mein ‘Tanha’ Sunte sunate hal e dil jaam ke or kareinge ishaara... Hope you like it... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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24th January 2005, 01:56 AM
Hi Amanush,
Kya gustakhi ki hai apne wah wah wah wah, Bhai aise gustakhi karne ke baad to jisse gustakhi ki hai woh bhi bolgega Wah kya gustakhi ki hai Ummed karte hain yeh gustakhiyon ka silsila yunhi chalta rahe... Sahil aur nadi ka paani hain dono "akele" aur "tanha" Milte hain yeh do jab Tab hoti hai lehron mein khushiyan Thanks Rohin |
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24th January 2005, 09:32 AM
Pehle kabhi pyaar se bahout lagan thi
ab kissi ko bhi chahne ki himmat nahin Meri mohabbat ahista ahista mar rahi hai aur moujhe youn marne ki chaahat nahin... Wah Wah! Amanush ji!! This one is soooo goood... Loved it... and the perfect length too (to fit as SMS on my mobile  )... Bahut khoob....aage bhi aise hi likhte rahiyega Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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28th January 2005, 04:20 AM
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Sorry for replying in delay...Itne wah wah ke liye bahout shukriya... Gustakhiyon ka silsila ko badate houe kouch lafz youn hein... Safar ko nikla har raahi ke naseeb main manzil nahin hota Aasman se gira har boondh ko naseeb e saahil nahin hota Baadalon se bichra koyi qatra angaaron par tapak jaata hai Iss ko khoushi kya, ek pal ke jeewan bhi haasil nahin hota Eissa boondh bhi hai jo sip main padkar moti ban jaata hai Anmol jauhar banta aur kankaron main shaamil nahin hota Yaara!”Amanush”khoud ko ek andhe ke ansoo kehlaata hai Jo boujhe houe ankhon main bhi rehne ke kaabil nahin hota Hope you like... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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28th January 2005, 04:39 AM
bhai Amanush sahab,
bahut gehre vichar hain aapke padh kar bahut hi acha laga dil ko... Har lavz ki ek kahani hoti hai... Kahan shuru kahan khatam hoti hai.. Kabhi khushi banke hoti hai.. Kabhi pani banke hoti hai.. Kabhi dil ki dhadkan mein hoti hai.. kabhi hoton ke geet mein hoti hai Kabhi shor mein hoti hai.. Kabhi khamoshi mein hoti hai.. Ek khayal ke shuruat hoti hai.. Ek khayal ka ant hoti hai.. "Amanush" ke saath hoti hai.. "Rohin" Ke pehli gazal mein hoti hai.. Yeh sach kahoon to my first attempt at gazal writing hai... Kya isse hi gazal kehte hain? Let me know as i am new to this Do tell me about your thoughts Thanks Rohin |
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28th January 2005, 05:04 AM
Rohin Sahab...
Aap ko " Ansoo aur Moti" pasand aaya...Hum bahout khush houe! Aap ke first attempt to write ghazal is wonderful...Lekin hum iss field main bilkul anaari hein... Just noticed a nice coincidence...Aap ke group "Akela Rahi" hai aur hamara "Tanha Rahi..."Strange,Isn't it...? Do keep sharing your thoughts.You write pretty well... Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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28th January 2005, 05:08 AM
Hi Amanush,
Well that coincidence i saw long time back that is why i posted you this:.... Tu 'Tanha' mein 'Akela' To aaza mehfil mein jara Lekar jaam ka hum aasra Tu mujhe aur mein tujhe Sunayein apna hal-e-dil mere yaara Well i really think you write well. I am just a novice I am glad you liked it Thanks rohin |
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28th January 2005, 05:11 AM
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Thanks for appreciating...aap issi tarah daad deinge to hum younhi zindagi bhar likheinge... A little thought for you... Love may be blind And sometimes it may even Seem deaf, But it never has to be dumb… Amanush... Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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28th January 2005, 10:40 AM
Love may be blind
And sometimes it may even Seem deaf, But it never has to be dumb… Very well said Amanush ji! I also feel.. that U have to be a good listener to be a good lover... and why a lover only? to be a good friend too, u have to be a good listener A quote that i remember.... Never Frown even if u r sad, beocz u never know who is falling in love with ur Smile Keep Smiling Apna khayal rakhiye.... Likhte rahiyega...Aapke chhote bahi ki daad humesha aapke saath hi hai Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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17th January 2014, 01:01 PM
waaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaah bahot hi khub......................
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17th January 2014, 02:42 PM
kya baaaaaaaaat haiiiiiiiiiiiiii bahut khooooooobbbbbbb.
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19th January 2014, 05:03 PM
.bahut hee khoob.,................ Waah
waah..kya baat hai एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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