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Bewafaa niqle jamane waale -
21st February 2005, 01:10 AM
pathar ke logon me, kaanch sa dil mera
Kitna bhee bachaaun issko, tuut he jata hai Sawaal ye hai or kitne tuqde...... oooooooor kitne tuqde Bewafaa niqle jamaane waale Pyar ke maani bataane waale bewafaa niqle jamaane waale mujhe nayi duniya dikhane waale bewafaa niqle jamaane waale Dilon se dil apne milaate he nahi shayad Wo simt muhobbat ke,jaate he nahi shayad Haath se haath milaane waale bewafaa niqle jamaane waale Hai shouq ameeron ka, hai nasha gareebon ka Pyar ki shai yaaron,hai khel naseebon ka Karz na dil ke chukane waale bewafaa niqle jamaane waale Hum laut bhee aayen to,hume bhool wo jayenge Hum laut na paayen to hume yaad wo aayenge Jannat ke sapne dikhane waale Bewafaa Niqle jamaane waale Hai bade nahi phir bhee wo bade he bante hain Wo khuda ke bande khud ko khuda samjhte hain Apne pairon me jhukane waale Bewafaa niqle jamaane waale Hai Shahar Shareefon ka, ye Qahar shareefon ka ik mai he qaafir houn, ye dahar shareefon ka kal ke masiha kehlane waale bewafaa niqle jamaane waale dahar---world karan jaate thai maikhane per husn maangne Aaj laate ho husn se sharaab maang ker marr gaye tumko bachane waale bewafaa niqle jamane waale karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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21st February 2005, 08:17 AM
Yaar Karan, itna gussa
good writing, Shade in the shadow world |
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Gussa kiss baat hai |
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Gussa kiss baat hai -
21st February 2005, 07:12 PM
Gussa nahi hai mere bhai
Ek opinion hai jissko pesh kiya hai kya gussa karen.. jo jaisa hai bas waisa he hai Kissi se koi shiqayat nahi bas opnion pesh kiya hai izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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23rd February 2005, 10:19 AM
Karan ji...
no doubt app bahut hee achha likte ho...aur i think app ko kisi tareef ki zrurat bhi nahi.......paar mera maan kiya ke kuch khuun app ko.....bura maat maneyegya... punjabi chh ek shayr ne keha hai ke... inna sacch na bol ke kalla reh javein.... chhar ku bande rakkh lai modhaa deen lyee.... app ki poems paddh ke mere maan mein baar baar yeh lines ati hein...aur har baar ati hein.... chuup reha taan hnera jrega kevein??? naa boleyaa taan shmaa daan kee kehngyee??? mere geetaan di maut je aaj ho gyeee... mera jeena mere yaar kinj sehngyee???? app ki tareef karna muje achha sa nahi lagta....kiyun ke agar daad dete dete shabaad kam padd gyee toh aap ki bezeti na ho jayeee.... u write tooo gud........ buss kafi dinno baad ayeee huun....sochaa aap ko reply karuun.... kuch app ke liyeee...... bdaa mumkin hai ke tu mainnu bhuul javein.. meri buuk choon paani wanguun duul javein.. mein vi boli apni taan hee laa diti.. mtee muud tu vi na be-muul javein.. ghuund jHakee sa asaan te chaak ditaa taan ke hayuli hayuli tu vi khuul javein heer sassi sohni ehtee ruul gyeaan pyar vich na tu vee ketein ruul javein........ take care.... n keep writing.... Regards, Arpan |
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punjabi at its best |
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punjabi at its best -
23rd February 2005, 01:42 PM
soniye makkhan ki doniye...
ume vadhaa ditti meri tussi enni izzajat de key hun te chaar din faaltu jeena paina hai mainu, great shers really heart touching chaar kandheyaan da ki karanga mai? jado mainu maut aave,te son layi tere darr te aa jawanga mainu lai ke,challi kite.. jitthe sukoon di maut marr jawaa.n tu naal rayi... kyunki tainu te fikar hai na meri very heart touching aati raho mehfil sjaati raho izzajat karan.q Sach kahe na gaye to shayri ho gaye Mai or samander,do gehre khwaab khuda ke..... |
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