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Najane log kiu itna satate hain.
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Najane log kiu itna satate hain. - 19th November 2002, 08:46 PM

Najane log kiu hame itna satate hain,har naye mor pe kuch naya sunate hain,ham is dard ko ab sahe kese,is duniya se kahin door rahe kese,nahi Khuda se shikayat ki nahi kisi se gila,ab ham kisi ko apna banaye kese.


Ham kehte to hai jine apna dost,najane kiu ehsaas hota hai woh ek din ghairo mein se hojayenge,itna wishwash tha duniya par ina bharosa tha apno par,najane kiu ehsas hota hai hamari lash par ye rotee reh jayenge.

Hi everyone mene ye shair likhte likhte socha hai kesa laga?Hehewell....bora tha na?


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Love Bahoot khoob - 20th November 2002, 03:34 AM

Bahoot hi accha likha hai appne.............lekin agar line alag alag hongi to padne or samjhane mein asani hogi.............other than that.........they are really good
keep writing..........


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