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rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai - 10th July 2006, 10:29 AM

rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai

befiqri ka lutf lene do safar mein mujhe shaadi se pehle
jindagi ke is mod se aage ki raah jara mushkil hai

kisi haseena ke teer-e-nazar se dil ghayal na ho jaye
shehar ki sadkon par khule_aam ghoomte yeh qaatil hai

jism numaaish karnewalon husn-e-sharaab na khatam ho jaye
pee rahi hai aankhein kai aur aap gaafil hai

jal jaye parwane beshaq shamma roshan rehni chaiye
ham diljalon ke nagmon se "kureel" aabaad mehfil hai.

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Re: rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai - 10th July 2006, 10:55 AM

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rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai

befiqri ka lutf lene do safar mein mujhe shaadi se pehle
jindagi ke is mod se aage ki raah jara mushkil hai

kisi haseena ke teer-e-nazar se dil ghayal na ho jaye
shehar ki sadkon par khule_aam ghoomte yeh qaatil hai

jism numaaish karnewalon husn-e-sharaab na khatam ho jaye
pee rahi hai aankhein kai aur aap gaafil hai

jal jaye parwane beshaq shamma roshan rehni chaiye
ham diljalon ke nagmon se "kureel" aabaad mehfil hai.

-MANOJ KUREEL
Manoj Bhai,
shabdon ka gareeb mehsoos kar raha hoon aapki is behtareen peshkash ke aage. Bahaut lambe arsey baad aaj kuch aisa parha jisse mann tow saath lekar chal raha tha magar kabhi shabd saath nahin de paaye. Aapne apne shabdon se isse saakaar kiya hai....... aapka bahaut bahaut dhanyavaad isse prakaashit karne ke liye.
"Rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai / mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai"

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Re: rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai - 10th July 2006, 11:54 AM

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rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai

befiqri ka lutf lene do safar mein mujhe shaadi se pehle
jindagi ke is mod se aage ki raah jara mushkil hai

kisi haseena ke teer-e-nazar se dil ghayal na ho jaye
shehar ki sadkon par khule_aam ghoomte yeh qaatil hai

jism numaaish karnewalon husn-e-sharaab na khatam ho jaye
pee rahi hai aankhein kai aur aap gaafil hai

jal jaye parwane beshaq shamma roshan rehni chaiye
ham diljalon ke nagmon se "kureel" aabaad mehfil hai.

-MANOJ KUREEL
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10th July 2006, 01:19 PM

rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai

waah waah waah...saari duniya jaise is aik sher main bas gayi ho
ghazab likha hai yeh aapne...


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Re: rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai - 10th July 2006, 01:55 PM

rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai

befiqri ka lutf lene do safar mein mujhe shaadi se pehle
jindagi ke is mod se aage ki raah jara mushkil hai


Wah.......bohat umda

kisi haseena ke teer-e-nazar se dil ghayal na ho jaye
shehar ki sadkon par khule_aam ghoomte yeh qaatil hai

jal jaye parwane beshaq shamma roshan rehni chaiye
ham diljalon ke nagmon se "kureel" aabaad mehfil hai.



Very Very Nice.........




Dear Manoj bhai

bohat khoobsurat haiN ye Qalaam..sabhi sher itne ache haiN ki kisi ek ko chhun.na mushkil haiN...Sabse jayada aapke Qalaam ja maqtaa pasand aaya mujhe..


tah e dil se daad kabool kijiye bhai

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10th July 2006, 03:21 PM

helo manoj ji...kaise hai...hope u will fine & enjoying monsoon without a lover (according to ur kalaam)

rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai

- DIL HI TO HAI JO AAPKO YAHA LATA HAI..
HASINAO SE NA SAHI SHAYRI SE TO MOHOBAT HAI..
TO U KAHE KI KISI TO MOHABAT KI SADAK PE CHALTE HAI..
JISM MANZIL NA SAHI..SHAYRI.COM PE TO AAHE BHARTE HAI..


befiqri ka lutf lene do safar mein mujhe shaadi se pehle
jindagi ke is mod se aage ki raah jara mushkil hai

- LE LO LUTF HAWAO KA KISI HASEENA KE BAGAIR..
SAB RANG FEEKE LAGENGE US HASEENA KE BAGAIR..
YE BAAT JAANOGE MERI JAB USKI BAAHO ME AAOGE..
YAKIN NA HO TO...DEKHNA TAB HAMAR BAAT SAMAJH PAOGE


kisi haseena ke teer-e-nazar se dil ghayal na ho jaye
shehar ki sadkon par khule_aam ghoomte yeh qaatil hai

- GAR HAI KHUD PER YAKI TO TERE-E-NAZER SE KYA DARNA..
SHEHER KO CHHODO APNE DIL KI GALIYO KA KHAYAAL RAKHNA..

jism numaaish karnewalon husn-e-sharaab na khatam ho jaye
pee rahi hai aankhein kai aur aap gaafil hai

- AANKHE TUMARI KYU DEKHTI HAI JISMO KI NUMAAISH KO..
KYU NAHI DEKH PAATI ...AANKHO SE NIKALTI DIL KI SACCHAI KO..

jal jaye parwane beshaq shamma roshan rehni chaiye
ham diljalon ke nagmon se "kureel" aabaad mehfil hai.

- HAM NA JALENGE SACCHAI SE PARDA UTHHA DENGE..
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10th July 2006, 09:45 PM

Bahut hi khoobsoorat nazm pesh ki hai aapne Manoj bhai...

aise hi likhte rahiye..

take care..

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11th July 2006, 08:23 PM

rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai



Behad khoobsuurat aur andaaz e bayaaN la -jawaab.. daad haazir hai..

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Re: Re: rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai - 12th July 2006, 03:13 PM

vipin bhai
kaise hai aap??? behad khushi hui aapko yahan dekh kar,,,aur aapka reply padh kar sukoon bhi bahoot mila,,ki aapki vichaardhaara bhi mujh jaisi hi hai....yeh aapka baddapann hai ki aap aisa sochte hai,,,
aap jaisa kavi kabhi shabdon ka gareeb ho nahin sakta,,kyunki aapke paas vichaaron ki daulat aur kalam roopi talvaar jo hai..dua hai aap hamesha is daulat se labrez rahe...aapki hauslaafzai ke liye mein tahe dil se aapka shukrguzar hoon..
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Re: Re: rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai - 12th July 2006, 03:18 PM

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aapki hauslaafzai ke liye dil ki gehraiyon se aapka shukrguzar hoon...apna khayal rkahiye
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bhut pyari gazal hai - 12th July 2006, 04:03 PM

manoj ji appkay qalaam ka humay bhut besabri say intzaar rehta hai.....is daffa to app chha gay ho......punjabi main kahae to.....tusee chha gaye o bhapa ji.......yeh share bhut acha lagga.....


rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai......

appka dost raj.......


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bhai jaan,aapko padh kar lagta hai ki likhna kitna sahaj bana dete hain aap,samaaj ko chetawni dena aur aise muddon ko uthana ghazal ke madhyam se bahut hi kathin mana jata hai.par aapne ise itni aasani se kar diya hai ki bas alfaaz nahi hain tareef ke liye,bas guzarish yahi hai ki aap aage v yunhi likhte rahiye.



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12th July 2006, 05:41 PM

rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai......


Namaskaar Manoj bhai,

kaise hain aap?? aaj bahut dino baad site per aane ka mauka mila to aapki likhi creation ko sabse pahale padha. aapne es ek line mein bahut kuchh kah diya hai. ek diljale ke liye esline mein vah her baat hai jo vah ummid kerta hai.. likhate rahiye..

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Re: Re: rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai - 24th July 2006, 06:25 PM

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4th August 2006, 09:03 PM

Manoj ji,

Aap ka yeh kalam mujhe bahut pasand aaya, iss me aaj ke sach ko bahut khoob pesh kiya hain aapne, daad kubul kijiyega aur likhte rahiyega.

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Re: rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai - 4th August 2006, 09:41 PM

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rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai

befiqri ka lutf lene do safar mein mujhe shaadi se pehle
jindagi ke is mod se aage ki raah jara mushkil hai

kisi haseena ke teer-e-nazar se dil ghayal na ho jaye
shehar ki sadkon par khule_aam ghoomte yeh qaatil hai

jism numaaish karnewalon husn-e-sharaab na khatam ho jaye
pee rahi hai aankhein kai aur aap gaafil hai

jal jaye parwane beshaq shamma roshan rehni chaiye
ham diljalon ke nagmon se "kureel" aabaad mehfil hai.

-MANOJ KUREEL
namsaakr manoj ji

aapko bhaut dino ke baad padha

aur fir se aapki kalam khyaalon ka jaadu dil par asar kar gaya hai

khyaal mai comments bhi dekhe aur sach ami dekha hai
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Re: rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai - 5th August 2006, 12:06 PM

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rehna hoshiyaar unse haathon mein jinke dil hai
mohabbat hai sadak inki jism manzil hai

befiqri ka lutf lene do safar mein mujhe shaadi se pehle
jindagi ke is mod se aage ki raah jara mushkil hai

kisi haseena ke teer-e-nazar se dil ghayal na ho jaye
shehar ki sadkon par khule_aam ghoomte yeh qaatil hai

jism numaaish karnewalon husn-e-sharaab na khatam ho jaye
pee rahi hai aankhein kai aur aap gaafil hai

jal jaye parwane beshaq shamma roshan rehni chaiye
ham diljalon ke nagmon se "kureel" aabaad mehfil hai.

-MANOJ KUREEL

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bohat din bad tumhre lafzon ko parhne ka moka mila
khub likha hay yar....lagta hay apne hi kisi safar ka hal
likha hay....
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manoj jiii.............................ek baar phir aapki yeh gazal padkar labo.n par muskaan tair gaye...........mubarkbaad kabool kijiye es khoobsurat poetry par


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sunita sahiba
guzre waqt ki meri gazlon ko aaj main page par aap kuch yun le kar aayi hai jaise koi "guldasta"aap ne mujhe dia ho..beshaq "gul" purane hai,,magar unse jazbaaton ki kuch mehak ab bhi mehsoos kar sakta hoon... ...
ek baar ko laga jaise kisi ne qabr se taaboot ko nikaal kar taza hawa mein rakh dia ho...waqt ki dhool aur jazbaaton ke jaalein hata kar jab dubaara inhein dekha to utar gaya us daur mein jab inhe likha tha,,kuch ne muskurane par majboor kiya to kuch ne sanjeeda bana dia.jo bhi ho...aapne aaj mujhe hairaan kar dia..aap ki meharbani ke liye shukriya..khushi is baat ki hui ki aapne hamein yaad rakha...aapki izzatafzai ka shukarguzar hoon...apna khayal rakhiye
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ManoJ Bhai........ Aadab.

Itni damdar shayari bahut kaam padhne milti hai.... really I am thanking to Sunita Dii ke unhone aapki yeh kalam front page per laker... Hum jaise naye padhne walon ko Aapse mukhatib karwaya.

Bhai Wah yeh dilfareb Gazal ne to ek jadoo ker diya mujh per, itne kathin jazbaton ko aapne itni saralta se pesh kiya hai ke kya kahun...ek ek sher sidhe dil per asar ker gaya hai aapka.

Kafi umda likhte hai aap...

Aapko aage bhi padhne milenga yehi ummid karta hun..

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