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Jitna mumkin ho tere paas jiyun - 7th April 2012, 12:48 PM

Main samandar jiyun ya pyaas jiyun ;
jitna mumkin ho tere paas jiyun .

jikr mera jubaan pe rakhna tum ;
taaki duniya me ban ke khaas jiyun .

hamsafar aaj mere ban jaao ;
chaahe fir umr bhar banvaas jiyun .

ho sake , mera bharam mat todo ;
kuchh nateeja nahin to aas jiyun .

kam se kam khvaab pe karam karna ;
neend tak me tera ahsaas jiyun .

itne jakhmon se navaajo mujhko ;
gazalgo ban ke teri baas jiyun .

gar karo tarke mohabbat , fir bhi ;
tere zehan ke aas paas jiyun .

Author ~~~ Dr. Rakesh Srivastava
Vinay Khand - 2 , Gomti nagar , Lucknow .
( Meaning -- Baas = Smell , Tarke Mohabbat = Prem Ki Samaapti )
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जितना मुमकिन हो तेरे पास जियूँ
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मैं समन्दर जियूँ या प्यास जियूँ ;
जितना मुमकिन हो तेरे पास जियूँ .

ज़िक्र मेरा जुबाँ पे रखना तुम ;
ताकि दुनिया में बन के ख़ास जियूँ .

हमसफ़र आज मेरे बन जाओ ;
चाहे फिर उम्र भर बनवास जियूँ .

हो सके , मेरा भरम मत तोड़ो ;
कुछ नतीजा नहीं तो आस जियूँ .

कम से कम ख़्वाब पे करम करना ;
नींद तक में तेरा एहसास जियूँ .

इतने ज़ख्मों से नवाजो मुझको ;
ग़ज़लगो बन के तेरी बास जियूँ .

ग़र करो तर्के मोहब्बत , फिर भी ;
तेरे ज़ेहन के आस पास जियूँ .

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( शब्दार्थ -- बास = smell , तर्के मोहब्बत = प्रेम की समाप्ति )
   
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8th April 2012, 10:58 PM

most welcome to sdc rakesh sahab. maine aapkee teno ghazal padee.bahut -2 acchhaa likhte hai aap. mera ye suggestion hai aapko ki aap apne qalaam shaayri e dard wale section men post kiya kare. isse aapko sdc men exposure milega .............likhte rahiye,khush rahiye......................tc
   
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Main samandar jiyun ya pyaas jiyun ;
jitna mumkin ho tere paas jiyun .

jikr mera jubaan pe rakhna tum ;
taaki duniya me ban ke khaas jiyun .

hamsafar aaj mere ban jaao ;
chaahe fir umr bhar banvaas jiyun .

ho sake , mera bharam mat todo ;
kuchh nateeja nahin to aas jiyun .

kam se kam khvaab pe karam karna ;
neend tak me tera ahsaas jiyun .

itne jakhmon se navaajo mujhko ;
gazalgo ban ke teri baas jiyun .

gar karo tarke mohabbat , fir bhi ;
tere zehan ke aas paas jiyun .

Author ~~~ Dr. Rakesh Srivastava
Vinay Khand - 2 , Gomti nagar , Lucknow .
( Meaning -- Baas = Smell , Tarke Mohabbat = Prem Ki Samaapti )
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जितना मुमकिन हो तेरे पास जियूँ
-----------------------------

मैं समन्दर जियूँ या प्यास जियूँ ;
जितना मुमकिन हो तेरे पास जियूँ .

ज़िक्र मेरा जुबाँ पे रखना तुम ;
ताकि दुनिया में बन के ख़ास जियूँ .

हमसफ़र आज मेरे बन जाओ ;
चाहे फिर उम्र भर बनवास जियूँ .

हो सके , मेरा भरम मत तोड़ो ;
कुछ नतीजा नहीं तो आस जियूँ .

कम से कम ख़्वाब पे करम करना ;
नींद तक में तेरा एहसास जियूँ .

इतने ज़ख्मों से नवाजो मुझको ;
ग़ज़लगो बन के तेरी बास जियूँ .

ग़र करो तर्के मोहब्बत , फिर भी ;
तेरे ज़ेहन के आस पास जियूँ .

रचयिता ~~~ डॉ . राकेश श्रीवास्तव
विनय खण्ड - 2 , गोमती नगर , लखनऊ .
( शब्दार्थ -- बास = smell , तर्के मोहब्बत = प्रेम की समाप्ति )
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6th August 2012, 02:27 PM

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जितना मुमकिन हो तेरे पास जियूँ
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मैं समन्दर जियूँ या प्यास जियूँ ;
जितना मुमकिन हो तेरे पास जियूँ .

ज़िक्र मेरा जुबाँ पे रखना तुम ;
ताकि दुनिया में बन के ख़ास जियूँ .

हमसफ़र आज मेरे बन जाओ ;
चाहे फिर उम्र भर बनवास जियूँ .

हो सके , मेरा भरम मत तोड़ो ;
कुछ नतीजा नहीं तो आस जियूँ .

कम से कम ख़्वाब पे करम करना ;
नींद तक में तेरा एहसास जियूँ .

इतने ज़ख्मों से नवाजो मुझको ;
ग़ज़लगो बन के तेरी बास जियूँ .

ग़र करो तर्के मोहब्बत , फिर भी ;
तेरे ज़ेहन के आस पास जियूँ .

रचयिता ~~~ डॉ . राकेश श्रीवास्तव
विनय खण्ड - 2 , गोमती नगर , लखनऊ .
( शब्दार्थ -- बास = smell , तर्के मोहब्बत = प्रेम की समाप्ति )
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6th August 2012, 10:22 PM

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Main samandar jiyun ya pyaas jiyun ;
jitna mumkin ho tere paas jiyun .

jikr mera jubaan pe rakhna tum ;
taaki duniya me ban ke khaas jiyun .

hamsafar aaj mere ban jaao ;
chaahe fir umr bhar banvaas jiyun .

ho sake , mera bharam mat todo ;
kuchh nateeja nahin to aas jiyun .

kam se kam khvaab pe karam karna ;
neend tak me tera ahsaas jiyun .

itne jakhmon se navaajo mujhko ;
gazalgo ban ke teri baas jiyun .

gar karo tarke mohabbat , fir bhi ;
tere zehan ke aas paas jiyun .

Author ~~~ Dr. Rakesh Srivastava
Vinay Khand - 2 , Gomti nagar , Lucknow .
( Meaning -- Baas = Smell , Tarke Mohabbat = Prem Ki Samaapti )
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जितना मुमकिन हो तेरे पास जियूँ
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मैं समन्दर जियूँ या प्यास जियूँ ;
जितना मुमकिन हो तेरे पास जियूँ .

ज़िक्र मेरा जुबाँ पे रखना तुम ;
ताकि दुनिया में बन के ख़ास जियूँ .

हमसफ़र आज मेरे बन जाओ ;
चाहे फिर उम्र भर बनवास जियूँ .

हो सके , मेरा भरम मत तोड़ो ;
कुछ नतीजा नहीं तो आस जियूँ .

कम से कम ख़्वाब पे करम करना ;
नींद तक में तेरा एहसास जियूँ .

इतने ज़ख्मों से नवाजो मुझको ;
ग़ज़लगो बन के तेरी बास जियूँ .

ग़र करो तर्के मोहब्बत , फिर भी ;
तेरे ज़ेहन के आस पास जियूँ .

रचयिता ~~~ डॉ . राकेश श्रीवास्तव
विनय खण्ड - 2 , गोमती नगर , लखनऊ .
( शब्दार्थ -- बास = smell , तर्के मोहब्बत = प्रेम की समाप्ति )
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