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Mere zehn mein jab bhi tumhara naam aata hai
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Kya baat kya baat...kya kuch kah diya in do line me..

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Karoo.Nga kya mei.N us khaali jagah ka yeh bata jana

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24th July 2016, 12:05 AM

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Aap sabhi mohtaram khvateen aur hazraat ka shukriya

Zehan se wabasta ashaar pesh karne ke liye

Chaliye iss hafte ka naya lafz pesh-e-khudmat hai

Aap sab kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge aisi umeed karta hu

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Ye fiza-e-baagh mujh ko raas na aayi kabhi
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Shukriya...........madhu.

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Aap sabhi mohtaram khvateen aur hazraat ka shukriya

Zehan se wabasta ashaar pesh karne ke liye

Chaliye iss hafte ka naya lafz pesh-e-khudmat hai

Aap sab kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge aisi umeed karta hu

Word: Sitam

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Zindagi asloob ye kaisa sitam bhi karney ka (MUJAHID)

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Bahut khoob......
Ek purani koshish pesh karti hun......

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Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN.....

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Bahut khoob......
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Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN.....

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Haan ji.........sachchi baat hai.....dil ka haal khoob samajh liya tumne...



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Jeene ko itna veham kam nahi
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Tera her sitam mai.N ne jhela hai, Tu yeh na samajh woh akela hai
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27th July 2016, 09:42 AM

Fakhri sahab.....kamaal ke sher pesh kiye hain aapne....
Bahut lutf aaya......bahut khoob....

Ek aur koshish meri taraf se...

Vo sitam kare ye hai aarzoo kisi baat ka main gila karun
Koi rabt unse bana rahe koi kaam ho ki mila karun......

Madhu....



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Shukria Mujahidbhai aur Madhubehen. Madhubehen aap ka sher lajawab hai aur jitno tareef ki jaey utni kum hai. Aap dono ki himmat afzai ka bohot shukria.
   
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Shukria Mujahidbhai aur Madhubehen. Madhubehen aap ka sher lajawab hai aur jitno tareef ki jaey utni kum hai. Aap dono ki himmat afzai ka bohot shukria.
Hausla afzai ka behad shukriya fakhri ji...

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Bahut lutf aaya......bahut khoob....

Ek aur koshish meri taraf se...

Vo sitam kare ye hai aarzoo kisi baat ka main gila karun
Koi rabt unse bana rahe koi kaam ho ki mila karun......

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Sitam ulfat ka hum pe abhi jaari hai
log kehte hai saal hum pe bhaari hai

nabz dekhi hai jin bhi haakimon ne
kehne lage gehri bahut bimaari hai

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haule haule ye daur guzar jaayega
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29th July 2016, 09:54 AM

Mast sahab Kya kehne

Wallah har ek sher ne dil ko romaanvi kar diya

Itna pur-asar kalaam uff mast sahab
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Yaqeen maniye alfaaz nahi mere paas

3rd sher ne maano dil ko cheer diya

Mubarak aisi umda kalaam ko takhleeq karne ke liye
Shukriyaa janaab kabhi yun hota hai ki kuch nahi banta aur kabhi ghazal pal bhar mein muqammal ho jaati hai aaj kuch aise hi hua...sach kahiye to to 3rd mera bhi pasandida sher hai...saath ka shukriyaa



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Sitam ulfat ka hum pe abhi jaari hai
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nabz dekhi hai jin bhi haakimon ne
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teri zeenat mein aisi bhi koi baat nahi
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haule haule ye daur guzar jaayega
chaayi dil pe abhi ishq ki khumaari hai

mehfuus hoon baahon mein hi rehne dena
is lamhe ke liye zindagi guzaari hai

Anu....aapke roomani andaaz ke ham hamesha se fan hain...aur aaj to vo jadu sar chad kar bol raha hai...ek ek sher bas dil me utar gaya...ye sitam yun hee jari rahe yahi dua hai......

Ghazal me jaam ka nasha, kya ghazab khumari hai
Inayatein yun karte rahna iltza hamari hai...

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Anu....aapke roomani andaaz ke ham hamesha se fan hain...aur aaj to vo jadu sar chad kar bol raha hai...ek ek sher bas dil me utar gaya...ye sitam yun hee jari rahe yahi dua hai......

Ghazal me jaam ka nasha, kya ghazab khumari hai
Inayatein yun karte rahna iltza hamari hai...

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Dosto pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz

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Tum mere kirdaar ka kya poochte ho sheikh ji
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kahani me kaii kirdaar ho.nge
Sabhi ko dekh lu.n parda hate to.........

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Meri ek koshish...

har kirdaar hai zariya tere nazdeek aane ka
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Bohat la-jawaab sher pesh kiya aapne

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Bahut khoob fakhri sahab......waah!!



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Kya baat haii...............waah!!!!



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Bohat la-jawaab sher pesh kiya aapne

Dil garden garden hogaya
behad shukriya mere bhai inaayat ka...



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