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Taaji kare chhe yaad ne Ek ghaav har vakhat (Gujrati Ghazal)
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Taaji kare chhe yaad ne Ek ghaav har vakhat (Gujrati Ghazal) - 7th November 2006, 11:17 PM



After a long time try to write something in gujarati hope u like it.

Taaji kare chhe yaad ne Ek ghaav har vakhat
Had thi vadhaare na mane tadpaav har vakhat

Saame ariso ej chhe laage chhe chhata farak
Sarkho rahe chhe kyaan kadi dekhav har vakhat

Dubaadase ke taarse eni mane khabar nathi
Majhdhar ma jhole chade chhe je naav har vakhat

Yaari majaa ni maari -tamaari banti rahe sadaa
maari dua ma hoy chhe te prastaav har vakhat

Vaato hriday ni koi ni saame na kholaje kadi
Saacho male chhe kyaan pratibhaav har vakhat

Matlaa ,radeef ,kaafiyaa thayi utryaa kar kadi
Maara j hriday ma aa bahane aav har vakhat

Duniyaa name chhe prem thi tamara charan ma
Saaro agar ho aap no vartaav har vakhat
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7th November 2006, 11:44 PM

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After a long time try to write something in gujarati hope u like it.

Taaji kare chhe yaad ne Ek ghaav har vakhat
Had thi vadhaare na mane tadpaav har vakhat

Saame ariso ej chhe laage chhe chhata farak
Sarkho rahe chhe kyaan kadi dekhav har vakhat

Dubaadase ke taarse eni mane khabar nathi
Majhdhar ma jhole chade chhe je naav har vakhat

Yaari majaa ni maari -tamaari banti rahe sadaa
maari dua ma hoy chhe te prastaav har vakhat

Vaato hriday ni koi ni saame na kholaje kadi
Saacho male chhe kyaan pratibhaav har vakhat

Matlaa ,radeef ,kaafiyaa thayi utryaa kar kadi
Maara j hriday ma aa bahane aav har vakhat

Duniyaa name chhe prem thi tamara charan ma
Saaro agar ho aap no vartaav har vakhat


manu ji kem chho ?majama?


aaje tamari rachna khub j vakht pachhi vanchva no avasar aapyo tame
khub j saras rite tame aa rachna ne darshavi chhe ,tamari darek rachna ma kaik alag hoy chhe khub j saru lagyu tamari aa rachna ne vanchi ne ane samjhi ne bas amaj lakhta raho ane hamesha khus raho basaaj bhavaan pase prartna karu chhu

jai shree krishna

aapno mitra
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8th November 2006, 11:57 AM

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After a long time try to write something in gujarati hope u like it.

Taaji kare chhe yaad ne Ek ghaav har vakhat
Had thi vadhaare na mane tadpaav har vakhat

Saame ariso ej chhe laage chhe chhata farak
Sarkho rahe chhe kyaan kadi dekhav har vakhat

Dubaadase ke taarse eni mane khabar nathi
Majhdhar ma jhole chade chhe je naav har vakhat

Yaari majaa ni maari -tamaari banti rahe sadaa
maari dua ma hoy chhe te prastaav har vakhat

Vaato hriday ni koi ni saame na kholaje kadi
Saacho male chhe kyaan pratibhaav har vakhat

Matlaa ,radeef ,kaafiyaa thayi utryaa kar kadi
Maara j hriday ma aa bahane aav har vakhat

Duniyaa name chhe prem thi tamara charan ma
Saaro agar ho aap no vartaav har vakhat
manu ji namaskaaR

aapki yeh gazal ke kuch kuch words samj aaye jayada nahi aaye. vaise aapki har gazal badiya hoti hai so es gazal ko bhi samjna chah rahi thi. accha nahi hota, agar aap esko gujrati ke saath saath english mai.n bhi likhtey. bura mat man-na yeh meri eesha thi so maine kah diya.
agar aap english mai.n bhi likh dengey to accha lageyga.

aapki dost


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10th November 2006, 11:49 AM

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manu ji kem chho ?majama?


aaje tamari rachna khub j vakht pachhi vanchva no avasar aapyo tame
khub j saras rite tame aa rachna ne darshavi chhe ,tamari darek rachna ma kaik alag hoy chhe khub j saru lagyu tamari aa rachna ne vanchi ne ane samjhi ne bas amaj lakhta raho ane hamesha khus raho basaaj bhavaan pase prartna karu chhu

jai shree krishna

aapno mitra
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dhaval jay shri krishna

tamaaro khoob aabhar mari aa kavita vaanchava ne pasand karvaa badal
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Hi Mannu,

how r u? remem me?
good poem , bahu saru lakhyu chhe ..keep posting

have a nice time

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