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10th March 2005, 09:47 AM
Sabhi ko mera adaab...
Apne azeez Rohin ke kehne par zara dard se hatkar likhne kee koshish kee hai......tau Rohin shayad tumhein Paras di ki yeh koshish pasand aaye...
aap sab ki raaye ka bhi intezzar rahega...
Narm palkon ke saaye mein chupaa lein tumko
Jee karta hai iss jahaan se churaa lein tumko
Kya dard, kya ghum tumhein roke hai Janaan
Wo dard-o-ghum le, apna banaa lein tumko
Jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya, un khayaalon se,
Dil mein utaar khud mein samaa lein tumko
Hai khauff ki reh na jaayein tanhaa saansein
Bachi saanson ki khushboo mein basaa lein tumko
Teri yaadon se bata kab tak behlaayein dil ko
Apne naaz-o-andaaz se aa, ab manaa lein tumko
Teri nazar, teri awaaz, tere didaar ki hasrat
Kaho *aagosh-e-tassavvur mein bulaa lein tumko
[color=dark blue] *imagination[/color]
Na daalo humpar yeh *nigaah-e-makhmoor jaanaa
Khumaar-o-bekhudi mein apna na bana lein tumko
[color=dark blue]Intoxicated gaze[/color]
*Tajadiid-e-vafaa nahin mumkin, phir bhi...
Thirakte hothon pe *zeenat sa na sajaa lein tumko
[color=dark blue]Renewal of love
Decoration, ornamnent[/color]
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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Re: Tajadiid-e-vafaa nahin mumkin, phir bhi... -
10th March 2005, 10:04 AM
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Originally posted by Parastaar
Sabhi ko mera adaab...
Apne azeez Rohin ke kehne par zara dard se hatkar likhne kee koshish kee hai......tau Rohin shayad tumhein Paras di ki yeh koshish pasand aaye...
aap sab ki raaye ka bhi intezzar rahega...
Narm palkon ke saaye mein chupaa lein tumko
Jee karta hai iss jahaan se churaa lein tumko
Kya dard, kya ghum tumhein roke hai Janaan
Wo dard-o-ghum le, apna banaa lein tumko
Jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya, un khayaalon se,
Dil mein utaar khud mein samaa lein tumko
Hai khauff ki reh na jaayein tanhaa saansein
Bachi saanson ki khushboo mein basaa lein tumko
Teri yaadon se bata kab tak behlaayein dil ko
Apne naaz-o-andaaz se aa, ab manaa lein tumko
Teri nazar, teri awaaz, tere didaar ki hasrat
Kaho *aagosh-e-tassavvur mein bulaa lein tumko
[color=dark blue] *imagination[/color]
Na daalo humpar yeh *nigaah-e-makhmoor jaanaa
Khumaar-o-bekhudi mein apna na bana lein tumko
[color=dark blue]Intoxicated gaze[/color]
*Tajadiid-e-vafaa nahin mumkin, phir bhi...
Thirakte hothon pe *zeenat sa na sajaa lein tumko
[color=dark blue]Renewal of love
Decoration, ornamnent[/color]
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meri paras,
khubsurat subah hui, tumhare ahesaas ka jadoo thha
lo mushkurahat bhi khil gayi honto par sabhi apno ke
aaj fir kisi lohe ne sparsh paaya hoga meri paras ka
meena
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10th March 2005, 10:10 AM
Hi Paras Ji,
Absolutely amazing. Am at a total loss of words on how to express my feelings on reading such a beautiful piece of work. Just having a warm glow in my heart thats totally inexpressible. Thanks for a good beginning 2 the day n such a luvly piece of work.
Luvs,
Salim
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10th March 2005, 10:20 AM
Narm palkon ke saaye mein chupaa lein tumko
Jee karta hai iss jahaan se churaa lein tumko
Kya dard, kya ghum tumhein roke hai Janaan
Wo dard-o-ghum le, apna banaa lein tumko
Waaaaaaaaaah.. Beautifulll....
Jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya, un khayaalon se,
Dil mein utaar khud mein samaa lein tumko
Hai khauff ki reh na jaayein tanhaa saansein
Bachi saanson ki khushboo mein basaa lein tumko
Kya baat hai ji...!!
Teri yaadon se bata kab tak behlaayein dil ko
Apne naaz-o-andaaz se aa, ab manaa lein tumko
Teri nazar, teri awaaz, tere didaar ki hasrat
Kaho *aagosh-e-tassavvur mein bulaa lein tumko
Wahhhhhh Waahh! Classsyy...
Na daalo humpar yeh *nigaah-e-makhmoor jaanaa
Khumaar-o-bekhudi mein apna na bana lein tumko
*Tajadiid-e-vafaa nahin mumkin, phir bhi...
Thirakte hothon pe *zeenat sa na sajaa lein tumko
Hmmm.....Thirakte honton ki zeenat,... kya baat hai?
Paras!
Ab kya kahoon.. I shud be thankful to rohin, he propelled u to write on something hatke....I loved this one 2....
Dictionary to aapne use kee hai, but thhodi inaayat karke, so I cud understand almost evrything without opening ne other dictionary.....Isse ek fayda aur hai na..."Easy Langauage, Easy for my firends to understand"
My Sms r ready... Have a Look
Narm palkon ke saaye mein chupaa lein tumko
Jee karta hai iss jahaan se churaa lein tumko
Hai khauff ki reh na jaayein tanhaa saansein
Bachi saanson ki khushboo mein basaa lein tumko
2nd one... I've destroyed ur sequencing.. but what say.. I am Loving It...
Teri nazar, teri awaaz, tere didaar ki hasrat
Kaho *aagosh-e-tassavvur mein bulaa lein tumko
Jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya, un khayaalon se,
Dil mein utaar khud mein samaa lein tumko
Perfecttttt.....
Meri khoob saari daad le lo on writing this wonderful owrk and specially on writing samotheing HATKE....Doooo Keep Writing.. Pranam and Bye.. Guruji
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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10th March 2005, 10:22 AM
rohin,
tumhara bhi shukria.......
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10th March 2005, 10:24 AM
khubsurat subah hui, tumhare ahesaas ka jadoo thha
lo mushkurahat bhi khil gayi honto par sabhi apno ke
aaj fir kisi lohe ne sparsh paaya hoga meri paras ka
Kya baat hai Di.. Bahut Khooobbb!!
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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Re: Tajadiid-e-vafaa nahin mumkin, phir bhi... -
10th March 2005, 10:55 AM
Narm palkon ke saaye mein chupaa lein tumko
Jee karta hai iss jahaan se churaa lein tumko
Too Good shuruat to bahut achi hai
Kya dard, kya ghum tumhein roke hai Janaan
Wo dard-o-ghum le, apna banaa lein tumko
Khushi ke libas mein gum ko pukaar
Jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya, un khayaalon se,
Dil mein utaar khud mein samaa lein tumko
Nice one ...pyaar ko duniya se chupa kar rakhna chahti hain hmmm
Hai khauff ki reh na jaayein tanhaa saansein
Bachi saanson ki khushboo mein basaa lein tumko
wah wah too good ...khushnaseb hai aapka pyaar
Teri yaadon se bata kab tak behlaayein dil ko
Apne naaz-o-andaaz se aa, ab manaa lein tumko
kya baat hain...Ladkiyon ki adda ke jadu se ab tak kaun bacha hai...
Teri nazar, teri awaaz, tere didaar ki hasrat
Kaho *aagosh-e-tassavvur mein bulaa lein tumko
wah wah wah wah
Na daalo humpar yeh *nigaah-e-makhmoor jaanaa
Khumaar-o-bekhudi mein apna na bana lein tumko
briliant
*Tajadiid-e-vafaa nahin mumkin, phir bhi...
Thirakte hothon pe *zeenat sa na sajaa lein tumko
Wah bahut khoob really nice
Paras di,
Aapne meri guzarish par likha kuch hat ke....is izzat ke liye bahut bahut shukriya...
Gum ko khushi mein lapet liya aapne...
Shayri-e-dard mein post kar diya aapne
Hoton pe muskuraht dikha kar halki halki
Ankhon mein chupe paani se dard dikha diya aapne
Lavzon ki saugat mein phool ke guldaste mein
Kaanton ki zeenat ka ehsaas kara diya aapne
Once again thanks a lot for the wonderful work and I hope with the response for this aap yunhi kuch hat kar likhti rahenge
Shiyahi kabhi khatam nahi hogi aapki
Khatam ho jaaye to pesh-e-khidmat hai kalam meri
Thanks didi
Rohin
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10th March 2005, 11:02 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by meena chheda
rohin,
tumhara bhi shukria.......
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Meena di,
Mera shukriya kisliye...???
Paras di ke dil mein to yeh tha hi...
Meine to bus kaha ki likh ke dekhiye...
Gum ho jiske dil o dimag par basa woh khushi ka mol samjhta hai
Thanks
Rohin
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Re: Tajadiid-e-vafaa nahin mumkin, phir bhi... -
10th March 2005, 12:09 PM
*Tajadiid-e-vafaa nahin mumkin, phir bhi...
Thirakte hothon pe *zeenat sa na sajaa lein tumko
Paras ji nayi hoon yahan.... par jitna bhi padha hai aapko .....bahut achha lagaa..... aaj ki rachna ke liye to yahi kahoongi........[color=dark blue] this wht original shayri is!!! [/color]
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Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye,
Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon,
Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color]
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10th March 2005, 12:19 PM
bahut khoob
Kya dard, kya ghum tumhein roke hai Janaan
Wo dard-o-ghum le, apna banaa lein tumko
Jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya, un khayaalon se,
Dil mein utaar khud mein samaa lein tumko
wah
agar ye koshish aapne pehli baar ki hai to bahut hi kaabile taarif hai
kuch kahunga
Kaya Dard Kaya Gum hamara kuch karenge sanam ,
teri ye aankhein kaya kam sitam karti hai....
kuch koshish ki hai shayad pasand aaye
bye tanha
jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya un khayalon se hi sahi,
teri nigah mujhpar padi ye kaya kam hai...
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10th March 2005, 01:52 PM
Namaskar Paras Ji
Bahut pyar se likha pyara sa qalam hay yeh.......bahut kushi hui itna pyara qalam dekh hamare daad kabul kijega.
Teri yaadon se bata kab tak behlaayein dil ko
Apne naaz-o-andaaz se aa, ab manaa lein tumko
Teri nazar, teri awaaz, tere didaar ki hasrat
Kaho *aagosh-e-tassavvur mein bulaa lein tumko
All words so innocent and touching.........har alfaz dil ko chuu gaya.
Sada kush rahiye
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10th March 2005, 01:59 PM
Meri behna.....
kya kehne.....bahut aache....lekin aakiri do ashaaron mein dard shaamil hai....aakhir dard section hai to ye laazmi tha.....
kabhi shokh hansi mein dekha hai......
kabhi shuskh aankhon mein dekha hai....
zindagi jaane aur kya dikhayagi ^AMAN^....
har mausam mein befawa sanam dekha hai....
tumhara bhai......
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
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10th March 2005, 06:51 PM
khubsurat subah hui, tumhare ahesaas ka jadoo thha
lo mushkurahat bhi khil gayi honto par sabhi apno ke
aaj fir kisi lohe ne sparsh paaya hoga meri paras ka
Wow....
main so kar kya uthi...ki aisa asar is kalaam ka
yeh kuch aur nahin tere pyar ka jaadu thha...lol...
meena jee...
mujhe aapki muskurahat dekh kar jitni khushi huyi hai...use bayan karna mushkil hai...arre hamare ishq kee maykashi se yeh asar hota hai...tau iss lehje mein aur likhna chahuungi...
younhi muskurahat bikherti rahiye...yeh bazm jhoom uthegi...
paras
meri subah tau ab shuru huyi...
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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10th March 2005, 06:55 PM
Just having a warm glow in my heart thats totally inexpressible. Thanks for a good beginning 2 the day n such a luvly piece of work.
Hi Salim Sahib...
To see you say that...warms up my heart too...well my day starts now and what a beautiful day...it promises to be...take care...and keep on reading this word snatcher from dictionaries...lol...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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11th March 2005, 01:16 AM
namaste...parastarji...
kaise hoo yar..app..remember..me..??
anywaz..bahut.. khoob..likha hai ..first of.. rohin..bhai..apko...thanx. keahna chahunga.. coz..agar..app..nahin keahte.. too shayad... parasji... aisa haatke.. nahin likhte.. aur .. humein ...itni..acchi kalam nai milti....
wah..paras..ji.. kya..kakhun..abb.. iske..liye sach..kahu..dil ko chuu..gaya..yeah kalam apka..bahut khoob...likha hai..apne... bahut.. specially these lines..-->
Kya dard, kya ghum tumhein roke hai Janaan
Wo dard-o-ghum le, apna banaa lein tumko
Jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya, un khayaalon se,
Dil mein utaar khud mein samaa lein tumko
Hai khauff ki reh na jaayein tanhaa saansein
Bachi saanson ki khushboo mein basaa lein tumko
-------wah..bahut khoob..aise hi likhte rahiyega.. aur..mehfil.. ko ..sajate...rahiyega....
bye n... take care..
Lamha Lamha...saSein Khatam hoo rai hai...
Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai...
Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah...
Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai...
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11th March 2005, 04:20 AM
Pulkit aur Rohin...
Tum dono ka jawaab padh kar tau aisa mehsoos ho raha thaa jaise tum dono mere saamne baithe keh rahe ho....'irshaad'...'muqarrar'...'kya baat hai'....lol...tum dono ka andaaz itna dil fareyb hai ki jee chahta hai ki issi ke muqaable ki shayri karoon...aur tum dono yoon hi mujhe haunsla dete raho...
shukriya nahin karoongi...bus yeh ki dil gadgad ho gaya...iska matlab tau pata hai na?...
paras
Gum ho jiske dil o dimag par basa woh khushi ka mol samjhta hai
that's a nice thing to say Rohin
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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11th March 2005, 04:25 AM
Paras ji nayi hoon yahan.... par jitna bhi padha hai aapko .....bahut achha lagaa..... aaj ki rachna ke liye to yahi kahoongi........ this wht original shayri is
Shalini...
aap nayi hain...tau hum sab aapka is bazm mein swagat karte hain...hopefully you will find what you are looking for in this forum...aapki daad sar aankhon pe...shukriya bahot bahot ki aap mujh nacheez ko samay nikaal kar padh leti hain...
duaaon ke saath
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
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11th March 2005, 04:30 AM
Kaya Dard Kaya Gum hamara kuch karenge sanam ,
teri ye aankhein kaya kam sitam karti hai....
jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya un khayalon se hi sahi,
teri nigah mujhpar padi ye kaya kam hai...
Kya jawaabi shayri kee aapne...bahut khuub!
Tanha sahab...
bahut hee khubsurat...bus ummiid tau yahi hai ki jo aapne bayaan kiya wo khayaal unke bhi hon...tau jee ko kuch sukoon mile...
shukriya hamein padhne ka...sarahne kaa...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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11th March 2005, 04:33 AM
All words so innocent and touching.........har alfaz dil ko chuu gaya.
Sukanya...
thanks a lot for appreciating my effort in such a sweet manner...apki har daad dil ko doguna kar deti hai...apna khayaal rakhna...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
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11th March 2005, 04:36 AM
Mere Bhai...
kabhi shokh hansi mein dekha hai......
kabhi shuskh aankhon mein dekha hai....
zindagi jaane aur kya dikhayagi ^AMAN^....
har mausam mein befawa sanam dekha hai....
kya khuub jawaab dete ho...mere jazzbaat tumne sahi pehchaane...dard se duur jaaongi tau mar jaaongi...aise lagta hai...kyunki dard mere hone ka hissa hai...ab...shukriya...
paras, tumhari behna
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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11th March 2005, 10:23 AM
Quote:
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Mere Bhai...
kabhi shokh hansi mein dekha hai......
kabhi shuskh aankhon mein dekha hai....
zindagi jaane aur kya dikhayagi ^AMAN^....
har mausam mein befawa sanam dekha hai....
kya khuub jawaab dete ho...mere jazzbaat tumne sahi pehchaane...dard se duur jaaongi tau mar jaaongi...aise lagta hai...kyunki dard mere hone ka hissa hai...ab...shukriya...
paras, tumhari behna
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Meri hi bye behna.....
apni behna ke jazzbaton ko pehchaanta hoon.....aur ye dard hi to hai jo jeene ka ehsaas dilate hain.....
tumhara bhai.......
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
AMAN RAHI
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11th March 2005, 12:49 PM
Narm palkon ke saaye mein chupaa lein tumko
Jee karta hai iss jahaan se churaa lein tumko
Kya dard, kya ghum tumhein roke hai Janaan
Wo dard-o-ghum le, apna banaa lein tumko
Jinko na dekh sake yeh duniya, un khayaalon se,
Dil mein utaar khud mein samaa lein tumko
Hai khauff ki reh na jaayein tanhaa saansein
Bachi saanson ki khushboo mein basaa lein tumko
Teri yaadon se bata kab tak behlaayein dil ko
Apne naaz-o-andaaz se aa, ab manaa lein tumko
Teri nazar, teri awaaz, tere didaar ki hasrat
Kaho *aagosh-e-tassavvur mein bulaa lein tumko
Na daalo humpar yeh *nigaah-e-makhmoor jaanaa
Khumaar-o-bekhudi mein apna na bana lein tumko
*Tajadiid-e-vafaa nahin mumkin, phir bhi...
Thirakte hothon pe *zeenat sa na sajaa lein tumko
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parastaar
waahhhhhhhhhh............! ...............are Paras maar hi daada aapki is nayi ghazal ne to......kamaal....yooN laga kisi ne hamaare hi alfaaz likh daale hoN...bahut khoob poori ki poori rachna..
Chaand
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
- Chaand
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15th March 2005, 05:59 AM
Jee manna jee...
i do remember you...aapne phone pe hum sabse guftaguu kee thee na...humne wo tape kar lee thee...aur kaise hain janaab...mujhe padhne ka shukriya...hopefully aapko bhi koyi inspiration mile...kuch dard ke alaawa likhne kee...
take care...
Chaand Sahib...
Aapki daad mere liye bahut qeemti hoti hai hamesha...bahut achha laga ki aapne mere puure kalaam ko yoon repeat kiya...aise laga aap mazze le le kar recite kar rahe hain...lol...
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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