Nashaaa

[ghayalparwana]

Nashe me dooba huu main mujhe hai pyaar ka Nasha
Teri umeed ka nasha hai ..tere intezaar ka nasha

Koi saaki nahin paas ..hai duur har mehkashi bhi
Fir bhi behak raha huu main hai wasl e yaar ka Nasha

Mausam ye badalte rahe magar dil e saroor na utra
kabhi raha khiza ka nasha to kabhi Bahaar ka Nasha

Mere azeez ye khel raha hum dono ki munasib
tujhe hai jeet ka nasha to mujhe haar ka Nasha

Meri duniya hai gham bhari aur tujhe jannat hai haasil
Khuda ki reham ka tujhe to mujhe uski maar ka Nasha

Har aadmi juda hai,hai juda har shaunk bhi e Dost
Hum kehte rahe jisse Pyaar to samjha Bekaar ka Nasha

Fakat kuchh hi dino ka raha tu mehmaan e 'Ghayal'
Tere sang hi chala jaayega..is Dil e Bimaar ka Nasha

[Shimul]

Jaha bhi jati hu yehi pati hu. Keya hogaya hein sabko? Waise mujhe shayad aise nehi kehna chahiye tha lekin keya karu!!! Chale aapka yeh dilki kalam achhi hein. Bohot khub likhha hein aapne. Thanks. Take care. God bless you.

[musharrafhusain]

ghayal dost

kaafi din ke baad is forum per kuch tabdeeli dikhayee hai aap ne apne is kalam ke zariye.
gham o khushi ka bara khoobsoorat imtizaaj hai aap ki yeh ghazal.
aur thori change bhi,
warna yahan to bas gham hi gham nazar aa raha thaa.

bohat khoob dost,

dua go hoon aap ke liye. aur my all best wishes are with you.

musharrafhusain

[Parastaar]

ghayalparwana sahib,

Nashe me dooba huu main mujhe hai pyaar ka Nasha
Teri umeed ka nasha hai ..tere intezaar ka nasha

Koi saaki nahin paas ..hai duur har mehkashi bhi
Fir bhi behak raha huu main hai wasl e yaar ka Nasha

Waah lajawaab hai yeh kalaam aapka....

Mausam ye badalte rahe magar dil e saroor na utra
kabhi raha khiza ka nasha to kabhi Bahaar ka Nasha

Mere azeez ye khel raha hum dono ki munasib
tujhe hai jeet ka nasha to mujhe haar ka Nasha

Aur jeet-haar donon mein nasha...kya baat hai....!

Meri duniya hai gham bhari aur tujhe jannat hai haasil
Khuda ki reham ka tujhe to mujhe uski maar ka Nasha

Har aadmi juda hai,hai juda har shaunk bhi e Dost
Hum kehte rahe jisse Pyaar to samjha Bekaar ka Nasha

Fakat kuchh hi dino ka raha tu mehmaan e 'Ghayal'
Tere sang hi chala jaayega..is Dil e Bimaar ka Nasha

Bahut khoob janaab! khoobsuraat ehsaas se waakif karaya aapne...duaaon ke saath

Paras

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by ghayalparwana
Nashe me dooba huu main mujhe hai pyaar ka Nasha
Teri umeed ka nasha hai ..tere intezaar ka nasha

Koi saaki nahin paas ..hai duur har mehkashi bhi
Fir bhi behak raha huu main hai wasl e yaar ka Nasha

Mausam ye badalte rahe magar dil e saroor na utra
kabhi raha khiza ka nasha to kabhi Bahaar ka Nasha

Mere azeez ye khel raha hum dono ki munasib
tujhe hai jeet ka nasha to mujhe haar ka Nasha

Meri duniya hai gham bhari aur tujhe jannat hai haasil
Khuda ki reham ka tujhe to mujhe uski maar ka Nasha

Har aadmi juda hai,hai juda har shaunk bhi e Dost
Hum kehte rahe jisse Pyaar to samjha Bekaar ka Nasha

Fakat kuchh hi dino ka raha tu mehmaan e 'Ghayal'
Tere sang hi chala jaayega..is Dil e Bimaar ka Nasha

mere varinder,
hamesha isi tarah likhte rahna.....
tum anjaan raste par bhale chalte raho....
kadmo k nishaan bante gaye hamaare liyae

[mein_aur_tanhai]

namaste....viru bhai..

kaise hoo bhai .. kaisa chal raha hai sab. U.K.. mein yar.. hope.. u r doin fine.. over..there.. wah yar..bahut khoob likha hai .. abb.....nashe mein bahut.. rahe.. bhai..abb..nashe se bahar aa jao..sirkar.. warna..pata hai jayda. pee ne..liveer sad jata hai ..aur rahi baat pyar ke..nashe ki..yeah nasha..aisa hai ke.. agar yeah jayada. .raha na..too fir.. zindagi saad jati hai bhai..lolz..z. just kidding bhai..

wakai mein bahut khoob likha hai apne... umeed karta hun app aise hi age likte rahoge.. aur .. mehfil sajate rahoge..

bye..and take care.. n yeah ... best of luck..

[ghayalparwana]

Shimul ji..jab bhi koi nayi ghazal post karta huun to aapka reply zaroor paata huun..Aap jis tarah se dil ke zakhmo ko pehchaan jaati hai shayad woh hunr kisi aur me nahin hai..

Ghazal pasand karne ka Shukriya

[ghayalparwana]

Aadab Musharraf bhai,

Kaise ho aap?

jee theek kaha aapne..ye ghazal gam aur khushi dono ka imtizaad hai..yehi haal dil ka bhi hai..ye khud nahin jaanta ke isse khush ho9na chahiye ya fir ussi poorane gham me dooba rehna chahiye jo mera apna hai..

Khair jo bhi ho aapne is Ghazal ko samjha aur saraha..is baat ka shukrguzaar huun main..

Shukriya..

[ghayalparwana]

Paras jii..

Aapne jis dil se is ghazal ko pada usse is nacheez ke dil ko bahut sakoon mila..Jis andaaz se aapne har swheyr ko pada aur samjha aur phir saraha usse aapke shayri ke mutakhib pyaar ka khoob izhaar hota hai..

Shukriya

[ghayalparwana]

Meena ji aur Manish dost..

Miane socha ke tum dono ko alag alag response dene ka to koi faayda nahin..lol isliye ek saath hi aap dono ka shukriya karta huun is ghazal ko padne kaa aur mera saath dene kaa..Aur haa manaa bhai aapki nasiyat ko bhi khoob yaad rakhoonga..lol

Take Care
Varinder