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silsila -
9th December 2003, 09:27 AM
mere dosto....... ek poorani rachna fir se post kar rahi hu....
Bhale hamse naraz raho, Shikwa shikayat karo... Par kuchh to silsila banaye rakho. Maante hai, nahi hai aapko hamse pyaar, N kabhi aapne chaha hamae... Par nafarat ka daur to banaye rakho. N din k ujalo maie aap muskuraaye, N shaam ki tanhayiya door ki hamari... Par Raat k andhere maie hi aa jaao; Sapno maie to pahchaan banaye rakho. Zindgi maie bhale n sathh chale, Na raah maie kuchh der rookae.. Par Kayamat ke din to aa jaao; Kandha dene ka rishta to banaye rakho. |
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9th December 2003, 09:52 AM
Dear Meena Jee, bohot achha laga parte hue. Khubsurat.
 Chale aap bhi aise hi rahna. Haan mujhe ab kuch kehna hein, Pyaar hume Pyaar tum kitna karte ho.......!!! Ab kuch aapki khabar lelu? Keisi hein aap? Abhi tak toh 90% thikh hojani chahiye, kyu? Bataiyega zaroor lekin jo bhi kehna hein woh sahi ho toh thikh hein agar nehi toh jo bhi hein wohi bataiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you. Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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9th December 2003, 10:39 AM
meena dost
ek aur nihayet khoobsoorat rachna. her dard mand dil rakhne wale insaan ki awaaz hai aap ka yeh kalam. chahne aur chahe jaane ki khuahish her dil mein hoti hai magar yeh bhi ek haqiqat hai ke kuch ki yeh khuahish is duniya mein hi poori ho jaati hai aur kuch yeh khuahish dil mein liye is duniya se rukhsat ho jaate hain, magar mein jaanta hoon aur meri yeh khuahish aur dua her her pal rehti hai ke meri dost meena hamesha zindagi mein khush rahen , muskurati rahen, aur voh sab kuch haasil karen jis ki un ko khuahish aur chah hai. yeh sab to aise hi keh diya asal baat yeh hai ke aap ke kalam aur alfaaz mein bohat asar hai meena, khush rahen, abaad rahen. "PHOOL TO DIN BAHAR E JAAN FIZA DIKHLA GAYE" HASRAT UN GHUNCHON PE HAI JO BIN KHILE MURJHA GAEY" musharrafhusain |
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9th December 2003, 07:19 PM
Bhale hamse naraz raho,
Shikwa shikayat karo... Par kuchh to silsila banaye rakho. Maante hai, nahi hai aapko hamse pyaar, N kabhi aapne chaha hamae... Par nafarat ka daur to banaye rakho. N din k ujalo maie aap muskuraaye, N shaam ki tanhayiya door ki hamari... Par Raat k andhere maie hi aa jaao; Sapno maie to pahchaan banaye rakho. Zindgi maie bhale n sathh chale, Na raah maie kuchh der rookae.. Par Kayamat ke din to aa jaao; Kandha dene ka rishta to banaye rakho. didi kandha dene ki baat na kiya karo. aap yaisa rista rakho na hamse ki bas ye rista sada ka ho . mein jaanti hun aapka haal ki ye sab kyun likh rahi ho aap bas ye dua hai ki woh bhi samjhe jiske liye ye likha hai apne. duao ke saath apki sakhiiiiiiii शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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10th December 2003, 07:01 AM
Bhale hamse naraz raho,
Shikwa shikayat karo... Par kuchh to silsila banaye rakho. Meena ji, bus dil ko choo liya in shabdon ne... N din k ujalo maie aap muskuraaye, N shaam ki tanhayiya door ki hamari... Par Raat k andhere maie hi aa jaao; Sapno maie to pahchaan banaye rakho. kaisee tadap, kaisee bebasi... Zindgi maie bhale n sathh chale, Na raah maie kuchh der rookae.. Par Kayamat ke din to aa jaao; Kandha dene ka rishta to banaye rakho. ab aur kya reh gaya kehne ko...kuch bhi tau nahin...kitna gehra dard....kuch likh na paayi...is liey kuch mazhar imam ka likha chode jaa rahi hoon.... dil akelaa hai bahut laalaa-e-saharaa kii tarah tum ne bhii chho.D diyaa hai mujhe duniyaa kii tarah chho.D ke jaao na yuu.N ahad-e-guzishtaa kii tarah ban ke ummiid raho vaadaa-e-fardaa kii tarah tum havaa ho bikhero mujhe saahil saahil mauj-e-mai ho to bahaa do mujhe dariyaa kii tarah paas rahate ho to aataa hai judaa_ii kaa Khayaal tum mere dil me.n ho andeshaa-e-fardaa kii tarah biich me.n kuchh to rah-o-rasm-e-ta'alluq rakkho ajanabii yuu.N nahii.n milate hai.n shanaasaa kii tarah beshumaar duaaon ke saath...paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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10th December 2003, 09:52 AM
jo haath main na aaya
malaal usaka kiya kiye, jo muththi main band tha use kholkar to dekha hota. it becomes more and more universal. |
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very nice.. -
11th December 2003, 02:00 AM
Meena Didi..
yahan aayi thi kuch kehne.. par aapki yeh nazm padh ke aankhen nam ho gayin.. Zindagi isi tarah ke daur se guzar rahi hai.. kuch aisi nahi unki taraf se, to khuda ne hi aisi kar di hai.. Bahut hi naazuk shabdon ko likha hai aapne.. i can relate my present just as it is... Shukriya nahi kahoongi.. Kyunki shaayad Badi behan ko choti ka shukriya kehna ajeeb sa lage... This is just wonderful didi.. "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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REALLY NICE ONE -
15th December 2003, 12:40 AM
MEENA JI ,
Aap kuch is tarah se likh dete ho ke jaise aap saamne baith kar bayaan kar rahe ho aisa lagta hai. Kuch ajeeb si baat hoti hai aapki likhaavat mein . Ek dum saadgi si hoti hai aur bahot kuch keh jaati hai . Yehi pehchaan hoti hai ek achhe shayar ki . Aise hi hameshaa likhte rahiyega . Ab ijaazat dijiye ZINDAGI RAHI TO FIR MILENGE BYE FOR NOW & TAKE CARE iminlovein@yahoo.com APNI LAASH JALAAKAR TERE CHEHRE PAR UJAALA LE AAYENGE ****************************** PHOOL KHILTE HAIN LOG MILTE HAI PATJHAD MEIN JO PHOOL MURJHA JAATE HAIN WOH BAHARON KE AANE SE KHILTE NAHI KUCH LOG EK ROZ JO BICHHAD JAATE HAIN WOH HAZAARON KE AANE SE MILTE NAHI UMRA BHAR CHAHE KOI PUKARA KARE UNKA NAAM WOH FIR NAHI AATE WOH FIR NAHI AATE |
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15th December 2003, 09:35 AM
dear mm......
Bhale hamse naraz raho, Shikwa shikayat karo... Par kuchh to silsila banaye rakho. Maante hai, nahi hai aapko hamse pyaar, N kabhi aapne chaha hamae... Par nafarat ka daur to banaye rakho. N din k ujalo maie aap muskuraaye, N shaam ki tanhayiya door ki hamari... Par Raat k andhere maie hi aa jaao; Sapno maie to pahchaan banaye rakho. Zindgi maie bhale n sathh chale, Na raah maie kuchh der rookae.. Par Kayamat ke din to aa jaao; Kandha dene ka rishta to banaye rakho mm bahot hiiiiiiiiii achha likha hai.....itna dard........ye dekh kar lagta hai jese me aine ke samne hu........par app marne ki baat kyo karte ho...... humse rishta jodna achha nahi lagta kya?to rishta todke jane ki baat karte ho plzz........mm.....age se ee sab mat sochna..........humari khatir ........ takecare......... apki khushbu........ |
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hello -
15th December 2003, 03:51 PM
meena ji,
aapki purani rachana hai yea,lekin ese maine nahi padha tha, so yah mere liye nayi hai, aapke liye yah purani ho sakti hai.per bahut sundar rachana hai.bahut hi badhiya lagi.yah line to khashker khich hi li likhane ke liye. N din k ujalo maie aap muskuraaye, N shaam ki tanhayiya door ki hamari... Par Raat k andhere maie hi aa jaao; Sapno maie to pahchaan banaye rakho. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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15th December 2003, 05:44 PM
namaste... meena ji..
wah.. bahut khoob likha hai meena ji..abb kya.. kahu yar.. apko..ek side too..mujhe app apna.. aaina. .. keahto hoo..aur dusri ..side.. ake..le.. akeele.. jaane ki baat karte hoo yar..waise.. bhi.. mein apka.. aaina.. hun ..too app jaisi halat meri bhi .. hai..chalo..abb hum hi ek dusre ko kandha de dete hai yar...per maaf karna yar.. apko .. mujhe dena padega.. kyu ki .. mera.. apse pehle reservation hai... soo maaf karna..maa... mein iss mein apko akela chor jaunga.. .. maaf karna... maa.. waise.. pure ka... pure.. bahut accha likha hai apne.. aisa lagta hai jaise.. meine likha hai... Bhale hamse naraz raho, Shikwa shikayat karo... Par kuchh to silsila banaye rakho. Maante hai, nahi hai aapko hamse pyaar, N kabhi aapne chaha hamae... Par nafarat ka daur to banaye rakho. N din k ujalo maie aap muskuraaye, N shaam ki tanhayiya door ki hamari... Par Raat k andhere maie hi aa jaao; Sapno maie to pahchaan banaye rakho. Zindgi maie bhale n sathh chale, Na raah maie kuchh der rookae.. Par Kayamat ke din to aa jaao; Kandha dene ka rishta to banaye rakho umeed..karta hun ke..app age se.. likhne se pehle sochoge.. bye and take care.. Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai... Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah... Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai... |
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16th December 2003, 08:26 AM
shimul
Pyaar hume Pyaar tum kitna karte ho.......!!! bahot khub simul..... dost...ab 95% thhik hu. apna bhi khayal rakhna khush raho. kabhi to maherbaan ho kar bulalae....... |
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16th December 2003, 08:32 AM
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mushi dost, aap ka meri post par aana hi pahlay to mere liye sukun ho jaata hai.... oos par aapki daad is tarah aa kar milti hai k meri nayi post likhne k liye kahi n kahi yah pal bhi maujood ho jaate hai."PHOOL TO DIN BAHAR E JAAN FIZA DIKHLA GAYE" HASRAT UN GHUNCHON PE HAI JO BIN KHILE MURJHA GAEY" bahot hi lajawaab... |
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16th December 2003, 08:36 AM
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meri nadaan sakhi........ didi ko itna pyaar kartii ho.. kya kahe didi.. itna jaroor kahti hu.. jab kabhi muje yaad karo, apne paas hi paaogi tum hawa ki mahek maie ya sitaro ki chamak maie didi hamesha sathh nazar aayegi. khush raho. tumhari didi |
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16th December 2003, 08:40 AM
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itni achhi gajal se parichit karwaya...... tumhara shukriaa. aur meri rachna pasand ki...... oos ka bhi shukriaa. |
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16th December 2003, 08:42 AM
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mitr, koik warsaadi sawaare hathhedi ma pani na bind ne zilta ne sarakta .... maie pan anubhawyaa chhae. |
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Re: very nice.. |
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16th December 2003, 09:05 AM
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didi ne tumhari aankhe num ki... kaha jaaye didi yah ghum oothha ke? tum hi kaho..... har pal ek aur ghum bhi kandho par othha ke chal rahi hai tumhari didiii |
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16th December 2003, 09:20 AM
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aapne muje jo samja..... zindgi bhar nahi bhuloongi yah taarif jo sachhai maie mushkuraai hai. |
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16th December 2003, 09:25 AM
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tum bhi na....... mm kahi nahi ja rahi, rishta todna meri fitarat maie hi nahi. mar kar bhi rishta nibhaaungi... tumhare paas hi paaogi muje. ab naraz na hona .... kahi aaj hi nahi ja rahi marne... lol khush raho. tumahri mm |
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Re: hello -
16th December 2003, 09:29 AM
[QUOTE]Originally posted by akant
meena ji, aapki purani rachana hai yea,lekin ese maine nahi padha tha, so yah mere liye nayi hai, aapke liye yah purani ho sakti hai.per bahut sundar rachana hai.bahut hi badhiya lagi.yah line to khashker khich hi li likhane ke liye. N din k ujalo maie aap muskuraaye, N shaam ki tanhayiya door ki hamari... Par Raat k andhere maie hi aa jaao; Sapno maie to pahchaan banaye rakho. Akant... [/QUOTE akant dost, rachna poorani hai par ahesaas ab bhi taaze hai... tumhe pasand aayi rachna... shukriaa. |
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16th December 2003, 09:56 AM
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reply to abhi karna chahti hu... par tumne kaha hai k likhne se pahlay muje sochna chahiyae to .... khair... tumhari baat sar aankho par... soch kar likhungi. par ek kahu? tanhaai....... soch kar likhna kya likhna huaa jo jajbaat ko moad kar chalaaye oos raah ki manjil ki kya kimmat?? kya maie galat hu? soch sako to soch kar batana.... waise sochna meri fitarat maie nahi so tumhari fitart maie bhi nahi hona chahiyae. hai na mere aaine?? ab tumhari baat ka kuchh jawab deni ki koshish........ tumne likha hai........ wah.. bahut khoob likha hai meena ji..abb kya.. kahu yar.. apko..ek side too..mujhe app apna.. aaina. .. keahto hoo..aur dusri ..side.. ake..le.. akeele.. jaane ki baat karte hoo yar..waise.. bhi.. mein apka.. aaina.. hun ..too app jaisi halat meri bhi .. hai..chalo..abb hum hi ek dusre ko kandha de dete hai yar...per maaf karna yar.. apko .. mujhe dena padega.. kyu ki .. mera.. apse pehle reservation hai... soo maaf karna..maa... mein iss mein apko akela chor jaunga.. .. maaf karna... maa.. maaf karna maa... tanhaai.... maa se oos gunaah ki maafi maang rahe ho... jis gunaah ki aahat se maa mar jaaye..... mere aaine ho.. aaine hi raho. mere pratibimb ho, to wahi bane raho. mujse aage chalna, tumhari fitarat maie aa hi nahi sakta. aur yah har wakt tum jis reservation ki baat karte ho na... oos raah aur oos manjil par muje toll diye bina mera aaina aage badhh nahi sakta. samjae mere makhna. soch kar likha kya likhna huaa..... |
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17th December 2003, 04:27 PM
kitna hassen ,kitna gehra likha aapne..par ye rachna aap par achhi nahin lagti ..jo shakhs khud sabke pass hai hameshaa bhala usse koi duur kaise ho sakta hai..!!!
Bahut hi achha likha hai,,mujh jaise par ye kalaam sahi baithta hai.. chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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hiii -
17th December 2003, 07:38 PM
hi
i was eagerly waiting to come on this site spesicially 4 u. main aaj kehti hoo thoda ishaq ki baten kiya karo apne dekhne ka nazriya badla karo koi saathi mile na mile dil se isaq ki baten kiya karo |
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18th December 2003, 11:13 AM
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18th December 2003, 11:23 AM
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thanx... tumhe pasand aayi rachna. aur doosri baat yah k aakash, tumhara mail box ek to full hai aur tum di par tahomat laga rahe ko di pm nahi karti..... lol |
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18th December 2003, 11:25 AM
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so sweet of u....... manae laage chhae k mocca coffee kaik wadhhu j sweet pidhi hati te? lol hu anae isqh par? hmmm isqh hota nahi sabhi k liye...... |
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23rd December 2003, 10:50 AM
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muje to yah ahesaas thha ki maine tumhe yaha jawaab diya hai... pata nahi kaha gaya..... kahi mail to nahi kar diya maine? lol khair..... varinder... yah jaroori nahi hota har wakt ke aap jinke paas ho, woh bhi aapke paas ho... rachna pasand aayi tumhe par tum kahte ho ke muj par nahi jachti... lol tum bhi na...... aur tum par khub jachti hai waah.. khair... yahi duwaa rahegi... ke tum par kabhi bhi yah kalaam sahi na baithhae. khush raho. tumhari meena |
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Re: silsila -
27th March 2006, 07:58 PM
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is dard bari rachna per tarif to nehi kar paugi magr itna jarur kahugi ki hamesha liktey rahiye or hume nayi rah dikatey rahiyga. Kaanch |
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4th August 2007, 02:11 PM
Bhale hamse naraz raho,
Shikwa shikayat karo... Par kuchh to silsila banaye rakho. Maante hai, nahi hai aapko hamse pyaar, N kabhi aapne chaha hamae... Par nafarat ka daur to banaye rakho. Wahi to mai keh rahin hoon di....aap yaha roz aajaaya karo... N din k ujalo maie aap muskuraaye, N shaam ki tanhayiya door ki hamari... Par Raat k andhere maie hi aa jaao; Sapno maie to pahchaan banaye rakho. Zindgi maie bhale n sathh chale, Na raah maie kuchh der rookae.. Par Kayamat ke din to aa jaao; Kandha dene ka rishta to banaye rakho Wah di.....kya dil ke dard ko apne kagaz pe utara hain............... bahut accha laga padkhe......aapki.. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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(#30)
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4th August 2007, 02:22 PM
Bhale hamse naraz raho,
Shikwa shikayat karo... "yeh bhi apno se hi kiya jata hai" Par kuchh to silsila banaye rakho. Maante hai, nahi hai aapko hamse pyaar, N kabhi aapne chaha hamae... Par nafarat ka daur to banaye rakho. "dii jaha sabko aapke pyar bahut jarurat hai" N din k ujalo maie aap muskuraaye, N shaam ki tanhayiya door ki hamari... Par Raat k andhere maie hi aa jaao; Sapno maie to pahchaan banaye rakho. "hum to bahut kohsish karte haiN sapno meiN aane ki par aap humey yaad hi nahi karti" Zindgi maie bhale n sathh chale, Na raah maie kuchh der rookae.. Par Kayamat ke din to aa jaao; Kandha dene ka rishta to banaye rakho. "Dii yeh saath hamesha banaye rakhna" dii bahut accha likha hai aapne...par yeh sab ab hamarey dil ki awaz hai, jo aapne kabhi likhi thi....so aapko hamarey yeh awaz sun kar jaha roj roj anna hoga....hum aapka intjaar karNgey shukriya mausam...yeh post padne dene ka credit tumhey jata hai..tumne yeh post upper kar dii aur hum bhi esko pad paye. diii aapke aane ke intjaar meiN aapki Sunita .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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bhut khub |
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bhut khub -
4th August 2007, 03:13 PM
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ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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8th August 2007, 01:33 PM
Meri Priy Kanch
Kaisi ho? Der se aana huaa hai yaha. Shukria ise padhne k liye. apna khayal rakhna Tumhari Meenajee Quote:
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8th August 2007, 01:34 PM
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Meri Priy Mausam, Khush raho. Di |
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8th August 2007, 01:36 PM
Meri Priy Sunita,
Di tumhe ya kisi ko bhi nahi bhooli... apna khayal rakhna Di Quote:
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8th August 2007, 01:38 PM
Raj,
Aaftaab ka saamna nahi karna hota hai... Aaftaab to humare sath chalta hai aur hume ujala deta hai. hai na? Khush raho Di Quote:
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