Kabhi tujhe bhi mahsoos to hua hoga ! ..Dil ko tune bhi kisi ke chhua to hoga

[jat_in_mood]

Hello dosto !
aaj socha mai bhi kuch apna likh ke dekhta hoon :-)
bas abhi baithe baithe kuch youn hi likha hai ..
Dil me kai baat thi jinko alfaaz dene ki koshish ki hai ..
kuch seedhi baatein kuch apekhsaayien ,kuch duayein ,
ek chhoti si koshish :-)
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Kabhi tujhe bhi mahsoos to hua hoga
Dil ko tune bhi kisi ke chhua to hoga

Maana jisme tees uthi wo kisi or ka tha
Dil kabhi to tera bhi kaheen dukha hoga

Harmdard ek Achhe dost ki talash hai to
Pahle apne ko ~eK Dost~ banana hoga

Gar chaho ki badh ke koi thaam le haath
Khud ko bhi to ek kadam badhana hoga

Youn teri wafa pe shaq nahi hai kisi ko
Kisi pe tumko bhi aietbaar karna hoga

Raushni ek ~deep~ ki bhi kyun chubhti hai
Kisi raat chand ne chaundhiya diya hoga?

Lamba raha hai patt-jhad ka mausam ?
Bahaaro ka mausam Bas aata hi hoga ....

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[pallavi_here]

deeep...
u presented ur feelings, ur expressons so nice;ly...... har sher me ek inspiration hai..as if we learn something from every step of our lives.....
keep it up...
take care

[candyboy]

Hi Deep Ji,

Bohot pasand aayi aapki koshish. Humari daad qabool kare aur uhi likhte rahe.

[shalini]

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Kabhi tujhe bhi mahsoos to hua hoga
Dil ko tune bhi kisi ke chhua to hoga

Maana jisme tees uthi wo kisi or ka tha
Dil kabhi to tera bhi kaheen dukha hoga

Harmdard ek Achhe dost ki talash hai to
Pahle apne ko ~eK Dost~ banana hoga

Gar chaho ki badh ke koi thaam le haath
Khud ko bhi to ek kadam badhana hoga

Youn teri wafa pe shaq nahi hai kisi ko
Kisi pe tumko bhi aietbaar karna hoga

Raushni ek ~deep~ ki bhi kyun chubhti hai
Kisi raat chand ne chaundhiya diya hoga?

Lamba raha hai patt-jhad ka mausam ?
Bahaaro ka mausam Bas aata hi hoga ....

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Subhi alfaz bahut pasand aaye......"Lamba raha hai patt-jhad ka mausam ?
Bahaaro ka mausam Bas aata hi hoga .... ".....those were fabulous n infact motivating!!!!!

[akant]

her sher aapke bahut hi achchhe aur sundar hain..
aapke lekhan mein ek gyan roopy baat chhupy hai
jo ki ek writter ke liye bahut jaroory hai...

bahut bahut badhaayi es khubsurat creation ke liye..


Akant...

[Parul]

Deep, kya baat kahi hai aapne, bahut hi accha likha hai... it's simple and great... very well written!

[friendnidhi]

Originally posted by jat_in_mood
Hello dosto !
aaj socha mai bhi kuch apna likh ke dekhta hoon :-)
bas abhi baithe baithe kuch youn hi likha hai ..
Dil me kai baat thi jinko alfaaz dene ki koshish ki hai ..
kuch seedhi baatein kuch apekhsaayien ,kuch duayein ,
ek chhoti si koshish :-)
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Kabhi tujhe bhi mahsoos to hua hoga
Dil ko tune bhi kisi ke chhua to hoga

Maana jisme tees uthi wo kisi or ka tha
Dil kabhi to tera bhi kaheen dukha hoga

Harmdard ek Achhe dost ki talash hai to
Pahle apne ko ~eK Dost~ banana hoga

Gar chaho ki badh ke koi thaam le haath
Khud ko bhi to ek kadam badhana hoga

Youn teri wafa pe shaq nahi hai kisi ko
Kisi pe tumko bhi aietbaar karna hoga

Raushni ek ~deep~ ki bhi kyun chubhti hai
Kisi raat chand ne chaundhiya diya hoga?

Lamba raha hai patt-jhad ka mausam ?
Bahaaro ka mausam Bas aata hi hoga ....

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Hello Deep ji,
Apne bahut hi saral lafzon mein bahut hi khubsurat ehsaas ko pesh kiiya hai. bahut hi acha hai yeh. Keep it up

Regards Nidhi

[jat_in_mood]

Hello everybody !
Pallavi , candyboy, shalini,akant,parul and nidhi, aap sabhi ka bahoot bahoot shukriya ... ki aapne mere likhe ko saraha .

Or der se jawaab dene ki maafi chaunga. Mai kuch dino ke liye delhi se baahar gaya hua tha to jwaab likhne me deri ho gayi.

Aap sabhi logo ko humari koshish pasand aayi. Ispe kya kahu, bas yehi ki Aap sabhi ki sangat ka asar hai ki kuch likh diya, varna humko ye shabdo ke daav-pech nahi aate ..

aur akant bhai aapne ek khas comment kiya, ki ek writer me kya hona chahiye, uske liye shukriya, ek seekh or mili. :-)

Agar kabhi kuch or dil me aaya , jisko hum shabdo me utaar sake to , ek or koshish ke saath fir se aaunga ..
aap sabhi ka bahoot bahoot shukriya ....

[nice_off_me]

hey deep veri nice post aur buhut dino baad apki post padi hai aur acha bhi laga apki post padker really buhut hi simple way se apne apni feelings ko bayaan kiya hai good post deep

keep writing buddy

unforgetable simran
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[jat_in_mood]

Thanks simran jee !
Aur bahoot dino ke baad kahaa, bas ek week hi to hua hai , actually i was out for a week . Now i m back .
Or system pe login karne par sabse pahla kaam shayri.com par reply karna tha :-)

take care ...

[garima]

Hello,
bahoot khoob .. harek sher apane aap ki kahani kahata huwa..


Thanks
Garima

[jat_in_mood]

:-) Hello garima jee !
aapko humara likha achha laga , or aapne sarahaya , iska bahoot bahoot shukriya ...
keep smiling :-)