 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
Paaras Dil ka Rishta hai... |
 |
|
 |
|
(#1)
|
|
Registered User
 
Offline
Posts: 2,814
Join Date: Nov 2003
Rep Power: 27
|
Paaras Dil ka Rishta hai... -
17th February 2007, 01:59 PM
Dosto:
Namaskaar! Ek arse baad yahan ka rukh kiya tau apne puraane doston ko dekh bahut khushi huyi, sabki posts dekhin...achha laga...yeh naya interface zara anjaana sa lagta hai...aur mujhe apna saada sa forum behad pyaara thaa...lekin changes tau aayeinge hi...haan dil tau wahi raheinge...aur dil se niklee awaaz bhi...kuchh doston kee guzarish poori kar rahi hoon...haan der tau kar dee...aap sab ki nazar ek naya kalaam...inaayat farmayiegaa... Ab kaunse mausam se koyi aas lagaaye Barsaat mein bhi yaad na jab unko hum aaye --Parveen Shakir Duur falak ka chaand salona meet puraana lagta hai Meethi subah kii aas liye wo saari raat jagta hai Main teri jaanib na paltoon zidd is paagal birhan ki Par dum todhuun teri baahon mein bebas dil yeh kehta hai Saanson mein mehak barkhaa ki, aur adharon pe shikwa Aanchal mein behaki sabaa, ab sapnon jaisa lagta hai Shaam dhale yaadon ke baadal kar dein nam jo palakon ko Rok sake aankhon ka daryaa, kya aisa shaanaa milta hai? Badan ki raanaayian kya laashon ke bhi hoti hain? Baarahaa bus yeh sawaal, aainaa mujhse karta hai Poocho na dil-e-muztar apna, baaz kahaan yeh aata hai Kabhi doobta, kabhi bigadta, aur kabhi sambhalta hai Zahar se bhi bujhe na pyaas hud hai tamanaa-e-yaar Taashna lab, tarsee aankhein, nigodha dil ka rishta hai gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
|
|
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#2)
|
|
Registered User
 
Offline
Posts: 875
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: udaipur
Rep Power: 35
|
17th February 2007, 03:35 PM
Saanson mein mehak barkhaa ki, aur adharon pe shikwa
Aanchal mein behaki sabaa, ab sapnon jaisa lagta hai Shaam dhale yaadon ke baadal kar dein nam jo palakon ko Rok sake aankhon ka daryaa, kya aisa shaanaa milta hai? Badan ki raanaayian kya laashon ke bhi hoti hain? Baarahaa bus yeh sawaal, aainaa mujhse karta hai Namsate .. kaise hai aap!!! aapke ye 3 sher mujhe bahut pasand aaye!!! ek umdaa cor-relation nazar aataa hai,aapke kalaam aur kudrat ke beech!! Daad kabool farmaayiyega!! |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#3)
|
|
Humanity
Offline
Posts: 6,227
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: Delhi
Rep Power: 42
|
17th February 2007, 04:06 PM
Duur falak ka chaand salona meet puraana lagta hai Meethi subah kii aas liye wo saari raat jagta hai Main teri jaanib na paltoon zidd is paagal birhan ki Par dum todhuun teri baahon mein bebas dil yeh kehta hai Ufff... kyaa baat kahi hai huzoor... Saanson mein mehak barkhaa ki, aur adharon pe shikwa Aanchal mein behaki sabaa, ab sapnon jaisa lagta hai Shaam dhale yaadon ke baadal kar dein nam jo palakon ko Rok sake aankhon ka daryaa, kya aisa shaanaa milta hai? Bahut khoob guruji  Badan ki raanaayian kya laashon ke bhi hoti hain? Baarahaa bus yeh sawaal, aainaa mujhse karta hai Poocho na dil-e-muztar apna, baaz kahaan yeh aata hai Kabhi doobta, kabhi bigadta, aur kabhi sambhalta hai Aaah... loved this sher... beautifull expression... Zahar se bhi bujhe na pyaas hud hai tamanaa-e-yaar Taashna lab, tarsee aankhein, nigodha dil ka rishta hai Kya baat hai... Dearest Paras, Kaisi ho? hope you are doing abs. fine This one is simply amazing... bahut hi pyaari ghazal hai... Har sher ghazab ka expressive aur khoobsurat hai... mazaa aa gaya padhkar... Bass ab aise hi kucch kuch likhti rehna... humaari naak oonchi karaati rehna.. hehe... do keep coming regularly and take care Aur haan... pata lag raha hai ke tumhaari post karne ki practice chhoot gayi hai... meanings kahan hain? Purane interface ki baat hi alag thi yaar... I have posted something on this.. do chck... khayal rakhna apna... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#4)
|
|
Shayri.com Moderator
Offline
Posts: 10,551
Join Date: Aug 2006
Location: INDIA
Rep Power: 59
|
17th February 2007, 05:19 PM
namskaar Paras ji,
kaisi haiN aap? aapko yahaaN dekh ke mujhe baRii hi khusi ho rahi hai site ke poorane sadasyoN ko jab bhi maiN yahaaN dekhTa huN to baRa achha lagta hai lagta hai ki jaise ab parivaar poora hai hamara , aur aapke likhne ka andaz to pehle se hi bahot behtrin sa raha hai is bar bhi aapne un ehsaasoN ko ziNda rakha hai yeH baat mujhe bahot pasaNd aayi aapki is tehreer meiN. aapki yeH kosisH mujhe bahot pasaNd aayii is lajawab ghazal ke liye dil se nikli daad ko kubul kijiyenGaa apna khayal rakheN aur khus raheN, duaoN ke sath ijaazaT. aapka dost dhaval |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#5)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 3,305
Join Date: Jun 2004
Location: Florida,USA
Rep Power: 26
|
18th February 2007, 10:39 AM
Duur falak ka chaand salona meet puraana lagta hai
Meethi subah kii aas liye wo saari raat jagta hai Main teri jaanib na paltoon zidd is paagal birhan ki Par dum todhuun teri baahon mein bebas dil yeh kehta hai yeh sher's... Too good. hii Paras didi, Kitne mahine baad parha aap ko... bahot badhiya likha hai medam and it is so nice to read you as always. keep writing. take care! |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#6)
|
|
raj
Offline
Posts: 2,332
Join Date: Aug 2003
Location: dil mein khud ke..aisa nahi kisi ko mera pata nahi hai mujhe dhundhne ki had tak koi dhundhta nahi hai..un
Rep Power: 34
|
19th February 2007, 01:05 AM
aapa
swagat hai phir s eyahan aapka. are kaphi arsa hua na pade huye apko... chalo apko yaad to aai is jagah ki.. phir s ebahut khub likha hai Shaam dhale yaadon ke baadal kar dein nam jo palakon ko Rok sake aankhon ka daryaa, kya aisa shaanaa milta hai? dil el gya hai ji hamara. meri dil se nikli daad kubul karna. sakhi with mitthiya शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#7)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,008
Join Date: Feb 2006
Location: India (Surat)
Rep Power: 21
|
19th February 2007, 01:26 PM
wah paras ji kya baat kahi hai aapne apni is rachna mein
aapko hamara sadar pranam paras ji aapki ye jo rachna hai uski har line ko gehrai mein socha jaye esi baat kahi hai aapne is rachna mein, aapki ye rachna hamein behad pasand aayi hai iske liye hum aapka sukhriya adaa karte hai aapki ye rachna padh ke hamein aaj koi sher bhi yaad nahi aa raha hai ki aapko wo javab ke taur pe bhej sake ese hi likhte rahi yega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#8)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,473
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Sharjah, U.A.E.
Rep Power: 21
|
19th February 2007, 01:55 PM
My 4everluvly Guru Ji,
Words so precious n very dear to my heart. Dunno if my words alone can describe the beautiful emotions expressed by you. As always, just mesmerising!!! Yeah n as Pulkit bhai rightly pointed out, Where's the dictionary???  U know how nalayk we r!!!!U're Nalayak Shagird Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#9)
|
|
|
to feel & to be felt...
Offline
Posts: 1,311
Join Date: Feb 2005
Location: On minds
Rep Power: 22
|
20th February 2007, 10:53 AM
Quote:
vo ek hota hai na... dheere dheere asar sa dikhana aur aakhir me qatl sa kar jana... paras di.. ye aakhiri 2 sher... kya kahu... main khud bhi bahut din baad aayi hu aur lagta hai ki aapka ka bhi kaafi time baad hua hai is taraf... baaki baate main jara personal ho ke kahungi  hehehehe... ummeed karti hu ki jab bhi yahaan aaungi.. apne khaas dosto ko jarur paungi jaldi hi milti hu fir se .. Pallo ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#10)
|
|
ek shoonya
Offline
Posts: 1,748
Join Date: Jul 2002
Location: दिल्ली व देहरादून
Rep Power: 30
|
20th February 2007, 01:02 PM
Namaskaar Paaras Ji
Kaisi hain aap?....dua hai hamesha hamesha khush rahein. Bahaut samay baad aapne dastak di hai aur woh bhi itni behtareen. Aapko parhna hamesha se hee bahaut pasand hai. aapke shabdon ko parhna, unhe gaur se samajhna accha lagta hai. Urdu samajhna mere liye katthin tow hai magar koshish kar liya karta hoon jab aap jaisi writer usse likhti hain tow. Aaj ke ek shabd se jara sa asamanjas hoon "dil-e-muztar " . Ummeed hai jald hee iska matlab jaan-ne ko milega. dhanyavaad aabhaar vipin 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#11)
|
|
|
shayri is my life
Offline
Posts: 1,938
Join Date: Jun 2006
Location: Punjab(Phagwara)Now:(California) USA
Rep Power: 33
|
20th February 2007, 05:10 PM
Quote:
Saanson mein mehak barkhaa ki, aur adharon pe shikwa Aanchal mein behaki sabaa, ab sapnon jaisa lagta hai Shaam dhale yaadon ke baadal kar dein nam jo palakon ko Rok sake aankhon ka daryaa, kya aisa shaanaa milta hai? yun hi likhti rehna or jaldi jaldi apne kalaam se ru b ru hone ka moka dena.......raj......... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#12)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 2,814
Join Date: Nov 2003
Rep Power: 27
|
20th February 2007, 10:34 PM
Ab kaunse mausam se koyi aas lagaaye
Barsaat mein bhi yaad na jab unko hum aaye --Parveen Shakir Duur falak ka chaand salona meet puraana lagta hai Meethi subah kii aas liye wo saari raat jagta hai Main teri jaanib na paltoon zidd is paagal birhan ki Par dum todhuun teri baahon mein bebas dil yeh kehta hai Saanson mein mehak barkhaa ki, aur adharon pe shikwa Aanchal mein behaki sabaa, ab sapnon jaisa lagta hai Shaam dhale yaadon ke baadal kar dein nam jo palakon ko Rok sake aankhon ka daryaa, kya aisa shaanaa milta hai? Badan ki raanaayian kya laashon ke bhi hoti hain? Baarahaa bus yeh sawaal, aainaa mujhse karta hai Poocho na dil-e-muztar apna, baaz kahaan yeh aata hai Kabhi doobta, kabhi bigadta, aur kabhi sambhalta hai Zahar se bhi bujhe na pyaas hud hai tamanaa-e-yaar Taashna lab, tarsee aankhein, nigodha dil ka rishta hai Philhaal tau aap sabki shikaayat duur karne aayee hoon aur kuch lafzon ke matlab likh rahi hoon fursat mein aap sabse milti hoon... falak = aasmaan, sky jaanib = toward, in the direction of Adharon = lips Sabaa = breeze Shaanaa = shoulder Ranaayiaan = beauty Baarahaa = time and again, baar baar Dil-e-muztar = impatient heart Tamanaa-e-yaar = yearning for beloved Taashna lab = thirsty lips ab tau theek hai na? gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#13)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 3,732
Join Date: Jul 2002
Rep Power: 33
|
21st February 2007, 08:15 PM
Paras Di...
Aap jab bhi aati hain bas chaa hi jaati hain.. Aur is baar bhi ek behad khoobsoorat rachna le kar aap hum sab ke beech ek baar phir se aayin!! Meri daad kubool keejiye... Har ek sher jaise dil ko choo gaya... bahut hi khoobsoorat... bahut hi umda.. Take Care Di.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#14)
|
|
trail of thoughts
Offline
Posts: 387
Join Date: Sep 2006
Location: in the hopes of my family
Rep Power: 22
|
22nd February 2007, 02:46 AM
"Parastaar" jee
bahut hi pyari lagi aapki yeh rachna. Regards aarya inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii regards aarya |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#15)
|
|
"Taish meN hai Taish"
Offline
Posts: 5,535
Join Date: Jan 2005
Location: Lost In The Cobwebs Of Mah Mind...!!
Rep Power: 48
|
22nd February 2007, 10:17 AM
paai laagu dd,,
muddatoN ke baad dekha aapko mehfil sajaate hue, aur yakeeN maaniye behad khushi hui, apne guru ko padh ke, badi suni lag rahi thi mehfileN aapke bina...! bas aapke wahi andaaz-e-bayaan, wo khoobsurat andaaz, dil ko choo gaya, aur is akhiri sher ne to maaniye, Zahar se bhi bujhe na pyaas hud hai tamanaa-e-yaar Taashna lab, tarsee aankhein, nigodha dil ka rishta hai samaaN sa hi baandh diya...! bas darkhwast aapse yahi rahegi dd, ki aap yuNhi likhti raheN...! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#16)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 4,715
Join Date: Jan 2004
Location: Khariar, Odisha
Rep Power: 0
|
22nd February 2007, 03:40 PM
paaras jee:
Namaskaar! kaisi haiN aap? aur kahaaN gaayab haiN? yaa phir gham-e-roz-gaar-e-zindagii meiN masruuf haiN? gaahe-gaahe bazm meiN aati raha kareN huzuur...taa'kee ham naa-daaN aap ko paRh sakeN aur kuch ilm haasil kar sakeN Quote:
Mayank |
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#17)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,239
Join Date: Jul 2004
Location: India
Rep Power: 0
|
24th February 2007, 01:41 PM
Shaam dhale yaadon ke baadal kar dein nam jo palakon ko
Rok sake aankhon ka daryaa, kya aisa shaanaa milta hai? Namaskar Paras ji Ek arsa hua aapka likha kuch parhey huay....aap aati hain to lagta hay site mein ronak aa gayi.....ek khoobsurat Ghazal ke liye meri mubarak baad kabul kijeyega......Aapka yeh sher dil ki gehraiyon tak pahuncha.....bahut khoobsurat sher hay......aapkey iss sher ko parh kar ek geet yaad aa gaya....shaam se aank mein nami si hay....aaj phir aap ki kami si hay.....yuunhi aati raha kijeye.... Apna khyal rakhiyega |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#18)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,473
Join Date: Aug 2004
Location: Sharjah, U.A.E.
Rep Power: 21
|
25th February 2007, 12:33 PM
Thank U!!!!! Salim If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you. We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
wonderful |
|
|
|
|
|
(#19)
|
|
|
Zakhm-e-Rooh
Offline
Posts: 2,220
Join Date: Nov 2004
Location: ahmedabad
Rep Power: 33
|
wonderful -
26th February 2007, 12:33 AM
Quote:
Didi aap ki bahut mahine baad padhaa par ye anubhav sach mai kaabil-e-taarif raha, aise hi likhte rahiyega. aur nichhe aap ke liye ek surprize hai, aap ka ek puraana nageena jise mai dhhondh ke laaya hu mujhe pata nahi kaun se haalat mai aap ne ye khoobsurat nazm likhi hai. it was a wonderful experience to read such poetry from u didi. Keep it up. Respected paras didi aaj mai yahaa 1 mahine baad aaya hu, kaafi mahino se likhna jaise bandha sa ho gaya tha kyun ki mai b'har sheekh raha thaa e.bazm par, vaha ghalti se puraane discussion forum mai ghus gaya aur vahaa hadd-e-nigaah mai aap ki ek khoobsurat nazm aa gayi , jab use padh to dil baug baug ho gaya mujhe pata nahi yahaa ke logo ne use padha hai ki nahi to sochha yahaa paish kar rahaa hu aur didi aap ki is nazm ko mai salaam karta hu Posted on Friday, August 26, 2005 - 08:03 pm: Adaab Dosto... Chaliye ek aur nazm aapki nazar karte hain...ummiid hai pasand aayegi...aap doston ki nawaazish chahiye... Taa umr hamein mausam-e-gul ka intezzaar raha Aanchal mein bujha dil, ankhon mein pyaar raha Duur tak tanhaayi mein guruub-e-sham ka alam Maazi ki yadein, beeti ruton ka lutf-o-karam Kudrat ke faisley, apne gunaahon ka shumaar Taaron se huyi dosti, chandaa gham gusaar raha Jaise khamoshi se takraa ke laut aati hai pukaar Mere paas laut aayi meri hasraton ki *aah-o-zaar Mere khwabhon ka daman raha yunhi chaak chaak Bekas dil ko magar, ahad-e-wafa pe aitbaar raha Jo tumhein na chaahe use chahte rehne ki aadat Shiddat-e-gam ke rehte, muskuraate rehne ki aadat *Qata-e-taalluq pe bhi na rukne ka kiya *israar Par apna *ahad-e-tarab pe yaqin bar qaraar raha Ab yeh umr bhar ka riyaaz khatm bhi kar do Yeh daastan-e-ishq ka saaz dafn bhi kar do Kyun yeh *ranjoor-e-wafa chup si gungunati ho Ki tera ruuh-e-nagma sun na use dushwaar raha Itni na keen khataayein, jitni saza mili thee Zindagi na jaane kabse khamosh ho chuki thee Par saanson ki *fitrat ‘paras,’ fitrat buri thee Teri ik ik haar pe hansta, *kafan-bardaar raha aah-o-zaar = wail, cry qata-e-taalluq = abandoning, leaving israar = obstinacy (rukne ki zid) ahad-e-tarab = promise of good times ranjoor = sad, aggrieved fitrat = nature kafan bardaar = shroud bearer ----------------------------Parastaar---------------------------- regards manu |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#20)
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 15,199
Join Date: May 2006
Location: Chandigarh (Mohali)
Rep Power: 63
|
27th April 2007, 02:57 PM
Quote:
regards .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#21)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 5,436
Join Date: Dec 2002
Location: mumbai
Rep Power: 35
|
12th August 2007, 11:38 AM
Shaam dhale yaadon ke baadal kar dein nam jo palakon ko
Rok sake aankhon ka daryaa, kya aisa shaanaa milta hai? Meri Paras khush raho Tumhari Meenajee |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#22)
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
15th January 2016, 03:55 PM
paras ji....
Aapke janm din par aaj aapko aur kareeb se jaanne ka dil kiya to aapki kuvh purani post padhne chali aayi.... Bahut apne se bahut pyare ehsaas lage..tareef k liye bahut chhoti hun main kya kahun.... Bas itna hee ki aaya kariye kabhi kabhi hame bhi aapka sath chahiye..aur sdc ko bhi... Apna khayaal rakhiyega.. Regards Madhu. अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
Linear Mode
|
|
|
Similar Threads
|
||||
| Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| Yaadoon se rishta kal bhi thaa yaadoon se rishta aaj bhi hai | silent-tears | Shayri-e-Dard | 4 | 30th January 2008 02:39 PM |
| *mujh se mera kya rishta hai har ik rishta bhool gaya.."Mumtaz Rashid jee"* | Diggaj_Dave | Ghazal Section | 1 | 10th September 2006 05:37 PM |
| Dil Ka Rishta | Rubina Shaikh | Shayri-e-Ishq | 1 | 7th September 2006 12:17 PM |
| Rishta | Irfan Hakeem | Shayri-e-Ishq | 0 | 22nd December 2003 05:15 PM |
| yeh rishta bhi koi rishta hai!! | farhana | Shayri-e-Dard | 11 | 10th November 2003 02:11 PM |
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
