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5th May 2010, 12:40 PM
SDC ki mahfil ko mera namskaar.......
21/11/2008 ko Daink Jagran (India ka ek mashhoor akhbaar) meiN chapi meri ye rachna aaj aap sab ke saamne rakh raha huN. Sub. = ped (TREE) aap sab balibhaati jaante hai ki hamaare jeevan meiN pedoN ka kitna mahtv hai aasha karta huN ki aap sab bhi meri is rachna ke jariye logoN ko apne swaarth ke liye pedon ko kaatne se rokegen. Please save tree aap sab ki raay ki intzaar rahega. Aapka dost........Raj पेड़ों के दर्द को क्यों नही समझते हम पेड़ों के दर्द को कम क्यों नही करते हम एक पेड़ तुम भी लगाओ एक पेड़ हम भी लगाएं जिस बंजर भूमि पर है मायूसी हर उस कोने में हरियाली लाएं कस्में तो खा लेते है हम सब पर उन कस्मों पर क्यों नही चलते हम पेड़ों के दर्द को क्यों नही समझते हम............... पेड़ लगाएंगे तो फल भी खाएंगे लकड़ियाँ तो मिलेंगी ही, छाया भी पाएंगे जब-जब ये बारिश आएगी पेड़ों के गीत सुनाएगी पेड़ों में भी तो जीवन है फिर पेड़ काटते वक़्त क्यों नही डरते हम पेड़ों के दर्द को क्यों नही समझते हम............... हरा-भरा रहेगा आँगन अपना पेड़ों संग ही जुड़ा है जीवन अपना पेड़ों को काटने वालो कुछ तो शर्म करो अपने पत्थर दिल को थोडा सा नर्म करो सब को पता है पेड़ ही तो जीवन है फिर मोम की तरह क्यों नही पिघलते हम पेड़ों के दर्द को क्यों नही समझते हम............... पेड़ों के दर्द को कम क्यों नही करते हम !! zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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5th May 2010, 12:45 PM
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Rajeev ji, bahut badhiya kaha hai aapne....... hum sabko pta hai ki van hi jeevan hai fir bhi hum me se koi bhi iske liye kuch nahi karta..... kehne ko to har koi kehta save trees.... but hum me se kitne log hai jinohe is kaam ko anjaam bhi diya hoga..... aapki ye peshkash bahut achi hai..... ...... dil se daad aaapko....... aur dhanyawad jagrukta laane ki liye..... keep it up Raj ji............... Regards, Kavita Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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5th May 2010, 09:01 PM
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Kavita Negi ji ko mera pyaar bhara namskaar........ aapka bahut bahut dhanyvaad ki aap yahaN aaye aur aapne meri koshish ko pada. aapki daad dil se qabool hai.sukriya umeed karta huN ki aap aage bhi yuN hi apna sath barkaar rakheNge apna khayaal rakheN. zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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8th May 2010, 07:46 AM
Please save tree
Please save tree Please save tree Please save tree zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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8th May 2010, 12:36 PM
waah ji waah Raj ji....
Aapki ye rachna behadd achhi lagi... Maine moneyplant lagaya hai apne ghar me...  aur mai apna typing color bhi green rakhta hu...  Waise hamare paas ek aam ka baagh hua karta tha... usme bahut saare paed they... Par ab nahi raha  Khair... Ab mera mann karta hai paed lagane ko.. Par jagah nahi milti... Isiliye moneyplant laga liya Jaanta hu k us se kuch nahi hoga, na to phal milenge na ladki... Par kuch to hariyali rahegi he... Aapni rachana ko share karne k liye thanks |
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9th May 2010, 12:14 PM
Please save tree
Please save tree Please save tree Please save tree Please save tree Please save tree Please save tree zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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9th May 2010, 02:32 PM
hamse hai ped behtar jo sabke kaam aate
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Zidd ji namskaar............ bahut bahut sawaagat hai aapka is thread mein pedoN ke liye aapne jo line likhi hai, bahut pasaNd aayi ye sath yuN hi barkaar rakheN zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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11th May 2010, 01:38 PM
hamse hai ped behtar jo sabke kaam aate
dete hai saaya,phal bhi, ehsaa nahi jataate ae kash kuch sabak ham pedo se seekh paate Iske aage kuch mai jod deta hu Ae kash kuch sabak ham paedo se seekh paate... peekarr co* ka zehar... Oygen ka amrit bahaate... Co = carbon dye (die) oxyde Socho k agar ye paed na hote... Socho k agar unke phal na hote... Socho k agar unki chaya na hoti... Socho k agar unki kaya# na hoti... Kaya = lakdi Kaise wo bahaare aati... Kaise wo mausam badalte... Kaise wo chidiyo ka chehchahana.. Kaise wo hiran p'lte... Hamse hain paed behtar.. Jo sabke kaam aate... Dete hain saya phal bhi,ehsaa nahi jatate... nasamajh hai insaa kitna... Kitna namak haraam... Zinda rakhe hai jo usko..karta usi ko tamaam... Par paed chup he rehte... Kuch bhi na bol paate... Dete hain saya phal bhi... Ehsaa nahi jatate...  Don't know kaisa likha... Pehli baar is tarah ka kuch likha hai... waiting for bad and good comments |
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11th May 2010, 01:47 PM
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bhai good ye hai ki khayaal accha aur saaf hai bahut..... aur bad ye hai ki uske laay me nahi hai..... but on the whole very nicely said.......cheers for trees with khus sharbat |
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11th May 2010, 02:57 PM
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Ab Zidd sahab ne likha hai tou zarur koi khane ya peene ki cheez hi hogi.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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11th May 2010, 03:05 PM
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 kya aap zidd sahab ko indirectly petuu bol ri ho ??? ya shayad directly he bolri ho |
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11th May 2010, 03:11 PM
Indirectly bolne ki kya zarurat hai, woh meri baat ka bura thodi na manenge,.... mai tou directly hi bol rahi huuN.....
..Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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11th May 2010, 10:17 PM
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Buland ji namskaar....... aapne jo bhi pedoN ke liye likha kafi achha likha hai..... khas karke ye line to bahut hi achhi lagi mujhe, aur ye ek kadwa sach bhi hai nasamajh hai insaa kitna... Kitna namak haraam... Zinda rakhe hai jo usko..karta usi ko tamaam... zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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13th May 2010, 10:17 PM
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bahut badhiya likha hai aapne..... kaash log i's baat ko samjh payeN...lekin ek baat zaroor hai ki aapki koshish jo bhi padhega to ek baar zaroor sochne pe majboor hoga.... bahut hi nayab tohfa hai ye i's mehfil ko....bahut bahut shukriya.... aage bhi aisi koshisheN saamne laate raheN.... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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13th May 2010, 10:28 PM
rajiv ji aap ki yeh rachna bahut prerna dai hai.aap ki soch ko slaam hai.chalo ek shayer meri tarf se bhi...
Aao hum sab yeh muhim chalaiN apne jiwan meiN ek ped lagaiN rajinderseep......... |
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Vikram bhai namste.......... sukriya vikram ji....... meri bhi yahi koshish hai ki jo bhi ye koshish padhe to wo zarur pedoN ki taraf dhayaan de........ Please Save Tree aap sab apna saath yuN hi barkaar rakheN aur bhi achhi koshishen saamne laane ki koshish karuNga. ek baar phir sab se paraathna/vinti hai ki apne aas paas pedoN ke kataav ko rokne ki koshish kareN. Please save tree zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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Har koi lagaye ek peid -
14th May 2010, 09:31 PM
Rajeev ji, bahut pate ki baat kahi hai aapne, muje aapki soch bahut acchi lagi, agar aap bura na maane to aapki yeh poem meri bitiya apne school mein suna.na chahti hai, agar aap haan kaheNge to mai usko copy karne dooNgi yeh, so pls reply soon.
reps +++ god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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Sunta ji namskaar.......... sabse pahle aapka bahut bahut sukriya.....hosla afjaai karne ka mere liye es se badi aur khushi ki kya baat hogi ki meri koshish school tak pahuchegi aur aane waali peedhi bhi pedoN ke mahatv ko samjheNgi. main sirf likne ke liye pedoN ko matav nahi de raha huN balki main dil se bhi yahi chaahta huN ki insaan apne sawaath ke liye pedoN ko kaatna band kare. isme to puchne waali koi baat hi nahi thi. meri ye koshish hai hi samaaj ke liye hi........ zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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................................................ ...................................Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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Rajinder ji namskaar...... meri koshish aapko achhi lagi mere liye ye kisi inaam se kam nahi hai..... bahut achha laga aapka ye shayer sabse vinti hai es muhim ko aage badhayeN... Rajinder ji ka ye shayer aap sab ke liye... Aao hum sab yeh muhim chalaiN apne jiwan meiN ek ped lagaiN zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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Please save tree zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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