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main achhi ni lgti na.! - 16th June 2015, 01:41 AM
tum laye mujhe sahar..
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bech aaye mujhe sahar..
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de aaye jise sehar..
kyuki use bhi main acchi ni lagti na.!

zalim darinda bedrd sehar..
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ye mujhpe trsta sehar..
bhaho me rkh utar deta achhi ni lgti na.!

us muhale se is sehar..
uf chhor jata seth main acchi ni lagti na.!

bhediya naam ka sahar..
nochta chakhta thukrata achhi ni lgti na.!

dekh rhi hu ye sahar..
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smjh rhi ye sahar..
bde chhote sb rulate hai acche ni lagti na.!

chhor aau kya sahar..
mgr tumhhe bhi to main acchi ni lagti na.!

kyu janu tumhe sehar..
akhir kon ho tum jb tumhe acchi ni lgti na.!

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bech aaye mujhe sahar..
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kyu janu tumhe sehar..
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16th June 2015, 10:51 AM
Ashok ji aap apne vichar sabke samne rakhne me bahut had tak safal huye hain..poem me base huye tadap aur dard ko main mahsoos kar pa rahi hoon...ek achchi koshish ek khyaal ko lekar....bahut sari daad is rachna ke liye.....

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acchii peshkash hai Asohk jee... par agar buraa na maane to ek baat kahna chahungaa ke fonts thode chote istemaal kiyaa kijiye..... sabko padhne me sahuliyat hogee.....


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16th June 2015, 02:23 PM
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tum laye mujhe sahar..
kyuki main tumhe achchi ni lgti na.!

bech aaye mujhe sahar..
kyuki main tumhe achhi ni lgti na.!

de aaye jise sehar..
kyuki use bhi main acchi ni lagti na.!

zalim darinda bedrd sehar..
ghurta napta chhorta acchi ni lgti na.!

ye mujhpe trsta sehar..
bhaho me rkh utar deta achhi ni lgti na.!

us muhale se is sehar..
uf chhor jata seth main acchi ni lagti na.!

bhediya naam ka sahar..
nochta chakhta thukrata achhi ni lgti na.!

dekh rhi hu ye sahar..
ghumata raat ko din me acchi ni lagti na.!

smjh rhi ye sahar..
bde chhote sb rulate hai acche ni lagti na.!

chhor aau kya sahar..
mgr tumhhe bhi to main acchi ni lagti na.!

kyu janu tumhe sehar..
akhir kon ho tum jb tumhe acchi ni lgti na.!

jeeu jhut liye sehar..
kyu na main ap hi ap tk ko acchi ni lagti na.!

bech aaye mujhe sahar..
kyuki main tumhe achhi ni lgti na.!

kyu janu tumhe sehar..
kon ho tum jb tumhe acchi ni lgti na.!

tum laye mujhe sahar..
kyuki main tumhe achchi ni lgti na.!

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Ashok ji...aapke ehsaas hame acche lge, acchi koshish hai aapki...aapse aik request hai ki font size thoda kam rakha kijiye, padte padte aise lagta hai jaise lafz PC screen se bahar aa jaayeNge

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16th November 2015, 11:50 AM
[QUOTE=Madhu 14;479652]Ashok ji aap apne vichar sabke samne rakhne me bahut had tak safal huye hain..poem me base huye tadap aur dard ko main mahsoos kar pa rahi hoon...ek achchi koshish ek khyaal ko lekar....bahut sari daad is rachna ke liye.....

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16th November 2015, 11:51 AM
acchii peshkash hai Asohk jee... par agar buraa na maane to ek baat kahna chahungaa ke fonts thode chote istemaal kiyaa kijiye..... sabko padhne me sahuliyat hogee.....


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16th November 2015, 11:52 AM
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Ashok ji...aapke ehsaas hame acche lge, acchi koshish hai aapki...aapse aik request hai ki font size thoda kam rakha kijiye, padte padte aise lagta hai jaise lafz PC screen se bahar aa jaayeNge

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