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mohabbat karnewale kam na honge - Ek GHazal
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mohabbat karnewale kam na honge - Ek GHazal - 29th July 2014, 12:39 PM

bazm-e-hazal ke bazm-e-adab ko Adil ka salaam...

pehli dafaa ek hazal le kar ke aa rahaa hooN... yeh hazal mai ne Hafeez saab kii ghazal, "mohabbat karnewale kam na honge" ke har ek sher ke misra-e-ula (makte ko chhoD ke) aur unke kaafiye/radeef ko barqaraar rakhke banaayee hai..

shaayad aapko pasand aaye


mohabbat karne vaale kam na ho.nge
bhalaa kyu.n wo qataar me.n ham na ho.nge

zamaane bhar ke Gham yaa ik teraa Gham
guarantee kya ki ab aur Gham na ho.nge

dilo.n kii ulajhane.n ba.Datii rahe.ngii
agar twitter pe tweets baaham* na ho.nge

(baaham = mutual)

agar tuu ittifaaqan mil bhii jaaye
comments whatsapp pe phir bhii kam na ho.nge

‘Safeer’ jitnaa hai unse bad_gumaa.N, wo
affairs se tere kyuN barham* na ho.nge

(barham = upset)



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30th July 2014, 03:16 PM

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Lol......kya hazal banai hai tumne in other words waat lagai hai chalo achcha hai serious mode se bahar to nikle....aise bich bich me shock diya karo
ha haaa haa......
sure, phir se kuch mood ban gayaa to aur kuch ghazloN kii vaat lagaane aa jaaoonga



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30th July 2014, 04:31 PM

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !!! Too funny !! Too good !!


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31st July 2014, 09:20 AM

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HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA !!! Too funny !! Too good !!
aapki zarra navaazi ke liye teh-e-dil se shukrguzaar hooN, Zarraasaab



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