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11th July 2014, 01:10 PM
Meri Maa ye kahti hain
Meri Maa vo kahti hain,
Har baat par bas yahi baat meri thi,
Jab main college me padti thi.
Usko na sata,Isko mat maar,
Tum kuch nahi jante mere yaar.
Meri maa ye kahti hain,
Meri maa vo kahti hain.
Maa ki har baat thi yaad mujhe,
Pyara tha maa ka sath mujhe.
College chchoota, ghar bhi chchoota,
Maa bhi phir mujhse door huyi.
Kar diya paraya ek pal me,
Milne ko bhi majboor huyi.
Bas yaad aati hain baatein maa ki ,
Pyari pyari aankhein maa ki.
Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...
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12th July 2014, 12:46 PM
Waah!!!! Bahaut hi khoobsurat ehsaasaat se saji nazm .... pyaar sneh shraddha karuna sabhi bhaav bahaut sundar hain is meiN..bahaut si daad Madhu ji
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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12th July 2014, 02:15 PM
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Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Meri Maa ye kahti hain
Meri Maa vo kahti hain,
Har baat par bas yahi baat meri thi,
Jab main college me padti thi.
Usko na sata,Isko mat maar,
Tum kuch nahi jante mere yaar.
Meri maa ye kahti hain,
Meri maa vo kahti hain.
Maa ki har baat thi yaad mujhe,
Pyara tha maa ka sath mujhe.
College chchoota, ghar bhi chchoota,
Maa bhi phir mujhse door huyi.
Kar diya paraya ek pal me,
Milne ko bhi majboor huyi.
Bas yaad aati hain baatein maa ki ,
Pyari pyari aankhein maa ki.
Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...
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Good one Madhu ji. ..........................
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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12th July 2014, 03:34 PM
maa aisi hee hoti hai madhu ji..............bahut hee sundar ehsaas hain aapke....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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13th July 2014, 11:25 AM
bahot khoob madhu saahiba... acchaa likha hai....
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14th July 2014, 12:44 PM
bahot hi khubsurat ehsaaso.n se bharii ees rachna pe dhero.n daad, Madhuji.....
ख़ुदा परेशां तेरी बला से तेरे सितम से तेरे अधम से
अगर हसीँ होते ज़ुल्म तेरे तू भी तो कुछ शर्मसार होता
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15th July 2014, 09:34 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Meri Maa ye kahti hain
Meri Maa vo kahti hain,
Har baat par bas yahi baat meri thi,
Jab main college me padti thi.
Usko na sata,Isko mat maar,
Tum kuch nahi jante mere yaar.
Meri maa ye kahti hain,
Meri maa vo kahti hain.
Maa ki har baat thi yaad mujhe,
Pyara tha maa ka sath mujhe.
College chchoota, ghar bhi chchoota,
Maa bhi phir mujhse door huyi.
Kar diya paraya ek pal me,
Milne ko bhi majboor huyi.
Bas yaad aati hain baatein maa ki ,
Pyari pyari aankhein maa ki.
Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...
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Maan ke mamatva par ek sunder nazm..........bahut bahut daad wasool paaiyega........
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15th July 2014, 01:45 PM
Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...
wahhh................ speechless..
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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16th July 2014, 10:39 PM
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Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...
wahhh................ speechless..
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Hausla afzai ka shukriya hasan ji.....
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16th July 2014, 10:54 PM
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Maan ke mamatva par ek sunder nazm..........bahut bahut daad wasool paaiyega........
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Bahut bahut shukriya harash ji ....
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16th July 2014, 10:56 PM
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True feelings always touch me deeply.....ur poem is just awesome....well done....keep it up
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Thank u naaz ji meri poem ko itni avhchi tarah samajhne ke liye....
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16th July 2014, 10:58 PM
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bahot hi khubsurat ehsaaso.n se bharii ees rachna pe dhero.n daad, Madhuji.....
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Shukriya aadeil ji................
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16th July 2014, 11:00 PM
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bahot khoob madhu saahiba... acchaa likha hai....
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Shukriya shaad sahab............
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16th July 2014, 11:01 PM
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maa aisi hee hoti hai madhu ji..............bahut hee sundar ehsaas hain aapke....
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Thank u aru ji. .......sath dete rahiyega.
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Good one Madhu ji. ..........................
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Thank u zainy ji...sath dete rahiyega...
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16th July 2014, 11:05 PM
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Waah!!!! Bahaut hi khoobsurat ehsaasaat se saji nazm .... pyaar sneh shraddha karuna sabhi bhaav bahaut sundar hain is meiN..bahaut si daad Madhu ji
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Thank you zarraa ji ,itni ghahrsi se meri poem ko padne ke liye sur samajhne ke liye shukriya
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17th July 2014, 10:29 AM
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Meri Maa ye kahti hain
Meri Maa vo kahti hain,
Har baat par bas yahi baat meri thi,
Jab main college me padti thi.
Usko na sata,Isko mat maar,
Tum kuch nahi jante mere yaar.
Meri maa ye kahti hain,
Meri maa vo kahti hain.
Maa ki har baat thi yaad mujhe,
Pyara tha maa ka sath mujhe.
College chchoota, ghar bhi chchoota,
Maa bhi phir mujhse door huyi.
Kar diya paraya ek pal me,
Milne ko bhi majboor huyi.
Bas yaad aati hain baatein maa ki ,
Pyari pyari aankhein maa ki.
Hath mujhe sahlate huye,
Kabhi sar to kabhi pair dabate huye.
Ab bhi is duniya me jeene ko,
Dard e gam peene ko ,
Maa tera sahara chahiye mujhe,
Achcha bura batane ko
Phir ek baar to dantiye mujhe...
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lazwaaaaaaaabbbbbbb ..............
har ek sabd me sachchaai hai..............
waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
bahut khubbbbbbbbb'
bahut khubbbbbbbbb
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19th July 2014, 11:02 PM
bahut achha laga padhkar shakhsiyat ka pata chalta hai aap bhi dil ki baat likhti :-)
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lazwaaaaaaaabbbbbbb ..............
har ek sabd me sachchaai hai..............
waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh
bahut khubbbbbbbbb'
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Der se aane ke liye mafi chahti hoon rajeev ji....bahut bahht dhanyawad meri rachna ko samajhne ke liye.....m
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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9th May 2015, 04:36 PM
Doston...
Mothers day par..maa par likhi ye nazm yaad aa gayi....
kitne hee bade ho jayein ham par maa ka pyaar vo apnapan kabhi nahi bhulaya ja sakta......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
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10th May 2015, 05:08 PM
Maa hindi hai maa o duniya valiyo.....
aap ki nazm per ke ek gane ki line yaad aa gayi , bahut ache ehsaas ..
Hamdam
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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happy mother's day.......................
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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