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Red face Tadapna baaki hai - 10th May 2003, 07:11 PM

Tuje apni tarah to me samaj raha hoo lekin
ab tuje teri tarah samaj na baaki hai


meri tarah se to tu hamesha se meri hi thi,ab teri tarah
dekha to pata chala, dilko sajna-sawarana baaki hai

kaise kaise guman me main jee raha tha, ab ehsaas
ho raha hai , hakikat ko baya karna baaki hai

tumne to isare bahut kiye magar me hi na samaj paya,
ab uun naye mauke ko lapakna baaki hai

Ye zindgi jaise taise jee lee " Lachar" ne
ab kabar me pada hoo, phir bhi tadapna baaki hai


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It is better to lose your pride
with someone you love
rather than lose that someone
you love with your usless pride.

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11th May 2003, 01:47 AM

bahot hi behtareeN lafzoN ke zariye aapne yeh rachna likhii hai!

"meri tarah se to tu hamesha se meri hi thi,ab teri tarah
dekha to pata chala, dilko sajna-sawarana baaki hai
"
-- mujhe is kalaam ka sabse haseen sher yeh laggaa..

aage bhi aapse yehii ummeed hai ki isi taraH aap likhte raheN ge!

apna khayaal rakhiye,
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Thank you very much - 11th May 2003, 01:35 PM

Bahot bahut sukriya

App jaise logo ke wajah se likhne ki tamnna aur bhi jag uthi hai
nahin to me sahi mein andhere me tha aur jo kuch bhi likhata tha kisi ko nahin bolta tha is liye ke koi na samaje to haus deta tha aur muje badahi dard hota tha.

any way thanks you very very much

agar aise hi sab log likhene wale ki kadar kare to mei manta hoo
shayar aur bhi accha likh sakta hai

akhir to is me saath aur samj ne wala hi chhahiye na


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4th November 2007, 06:32 PM

meri tarah se to tu hamesha se meri hi thi,ab teri tarah
dekha to pata chala, dilko sajna-sawarana baaki hai


Ye zindgi jaise taise jee lee " Lachar" ne
ab kabar me pada hoo, phir bhi tadapna baaki hai


MUJE YEH DO SHARE AAPKI GAZAL KE BAHOT PASAND AAYE
AAP NE BHI KYA KHOOB SADGI SE SAB KI ZINDAGI KI HAKIQT BAYAN KARDI YAAR
AAP KO PADH KAR BAHOT HI AACHA LAGA
KEEP SENDING
YOUR FRIEDN NIHAR


Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai
Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai

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4th November 2007, 08:29 PM

thanks for praised


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namaste.. - 5th November 2007, 12:36 PM

Quote:
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Tuje apni tarah to me samaj raha hoo lekin
ab tuje teri tarah samaj na baaki hai


meri tarah se to tu hamesha se meri hi thi,ab teri tarah
dekha to pata chala, dilko sajna-sawarana baaki hai

kaise kaise guman me main jee raha tha, ab ehsaas
ho raha hai , hakikat ko baya karna baaki hai

tumne to isare bahut kiye magar me hi na samaj paya,
ab uun naye mauke ko lapakna baaki hai

Ye zindgi jaise taise jee lee " Lachar" ne
ab kabar me pada hoo, phir bhi tadapna baaki hai
lachar g..bhot hi behtareen rachna hai ye aapki sir..hats off 2 u..


kp smiling..tc


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5th November 2007, 10:57 PM

thanks a ton nanhi pari


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6th November 2007, 09:56 PM

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Tuje apni tarah to me samaj raha hoo lekin
ab tuje teri tarah samaj na baaki hai


meri tarah se to tu hamesha se meri hi thi,ab teri tarah
dekha to pata chala, dilko sajna-sawarana baaki hai

kaise kaise guman me main jee raha tha, ab ehsaas
ho raha hai , hakikat ko baya karna baaki hai

tumne to isare bahut kiye magar me hi na samaj paya,
ab uun naye mauke ko lapakna baaki hai

Ye zindgi jaise taise jee lee " Lachar" ne
ab kabar me pada hoo, phir bhi tadapna baaki hai


Bohat acha laga aapka likha mujhe bohat pasand aya likhte rahiye takecare


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