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Love Dil Ki Halat - 21st June 2008, 01:27 PM

Jab sham sunehari hoti hai
jab tanahi mujpe roti hai
jab tri yadden hoti hain
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
mera sajan mujse rotha hai
bindhya,kanghan sub chota hai
bin barse naina roti hain
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
khawab,ishq,muhabbat sub dhookha hai
aik thandi hawa ka jhonka hai
jab barbad dil ki basti hoti hai
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
muhabbat main kya pana
sub tau khona hai
dil tau bus aik khlona hai
jab humsafar ruswai hoti hai
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
   
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21st June 2008, 01:30 PM

mana k teri deed k qabil nai hain hum
haan itna jante hain tje chahte hain hum
   
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21st June 2008, 01:36 PM

tere naam ki thi jo roshni usse khud hi tune bujhdya
na jala saki dhoop usse chandni ne jala dya
main hoon gardishon main ghira huwa muje aap apni khabar nai
jo shaqs tha mera rehnuma usse rasrtoon main ganwa dya
jo shaks mera raqeeb tha wohi mera naseeb tha
mere hath ki woh lakeer tha usse hath se mita dya
yeh uddasion ka jamal hai k hamara looh-e-0kamal hai
kabhi zat bhar se chupalya kabhi sher bhar ko batadya
   
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Love 21st June 2008, 02:07 PM

kisi ne haal na puchha mere shikasta dil ka
koi kharid kar tuta hua pyala bhi kya karta

rahila bohot umda likha hai n (tere naam ki thi jo roshni usse khud hi tune bujha diya..... ) khayal achhe hain or alfaz bhi agar ye tumhari apni likhi hai to ek salah dena chahunga or wo ye ke isme (makhta) use kartin to or zyada achhi lagti well aage khayal rakhna ok ............!!!
   
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Smile 23rd June 2008, 03:10 PM

Quote:
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Jab sham sunehari hoti hai
jab tanahi mujpe roti hai
jab tri yadden hoti hain
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
mera sajan mujse rotha hai
bindhya,kanghan sub chota hai
bin barse naina roti hain
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
khawab,ishq,muhabbat sub dhookha hai
aik thandi hawa ka jhonka hai
jab barbad dil ki basti hoti hai
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
muhabbat main kya pana
sub tau khona hai
dil tau bus aik khlona hai
jab humsafar ruswai hoti hai
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
nice wordings really


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25th June 2008, 02:54 PM

waah waah kya baat hai .
subhanallah ,apki jitni tarif ki jaaye kum hai .
isse ek baat to jahir ho gayi ki aapne apna ek fan bana liya hai.
jo aapki kai shayriyan padh chuka hai. jo aapse kehna chahta hai ki apne hathon ko kabhi na rukne dena .

apka didar mil jaye to kya hoga
chand ankho me bas jaye to kya hoga
aapko kabhi dekha to nahi maine
aap ek baar mil jaye to kya hoga
i want to be your freind. if you are intersted in my friendship plz reply me.
yours
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buhat acha likha hai apne!
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Thumbs up buhat acha likha hai apne! - 26th June 2008, 06:25 PM

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Jab sham sunehari hoti hai
jab tanahi mujpe roti hai
jab tri yadden hoti hain
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
mera sajan mujse rotha hai
bindhya,kanghan sub chota hai
bin barse naina roti hain
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
khawab,ishq,muhabbat sub dhookha hai
aik thandi hawa ka jhonka hai
jab barbad dil ki basti hoti hai
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
muhabbat main kya pana
sub tau khona hai
dil tau bus aik khlona hai
jab humsafar ruswai hoti hai
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
mera sajan mujh se rotha hai
bindya kangan sab chota hai
ye jo sher hai ye ziada likha hai apne buhat acha laga parh ke ahsasat ka aik sangam hai buhat buhat achai lagi apki kavita


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29th June 2008, 10:40 PM

Quote:
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Jab sham sunehari hoti hai
jab tanahi mujpe roti hai
jab tri yadden hoti hain
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
mera sajan mujse rotha hai
bindhya,kanghan sub chota hai
bin barse naina roti hain
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
khawab,ishq,muhabbat sub dhookha hai
aik thandi hawa ka jhonka hai
jab barbad dil ki basti hoti hai
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
muhabbat main kya pana
sub tau khona hai
dil tau bus aik khlona hai
jab humsafar ruswai hoti hai
mat pooch dil ki halat kaisi hoti hai
wery nice

aheshas bahot ache hai well wery good ham bi kuch isi tarah ke hai

Kuch uljhe hue swalon se darta hai dil,
Na jane kyun tanhai mein bikhrta hai dil
Usko pane ka khyal koi badi baati nahi,
Bas usko kho dene ke khyal se darta hai dil
pls rep me id rijaan007@rediffmail.com / rijaan007@yahoomail.com 9322128751
   
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30th June 2008, 02:47 PM

nice good but sir do line justified c nai ho rahee
agar dil socha nafaa nuksaan ishq mein
to woh ishq nai vypaar hai



2nd thing me think
shayd pyaar dhoka nai
ehsaas hai jo do roohain de darmiyan hota hai
mean eh jismaini nai
sorry sir kuch interfere kiya
outstanding likha hai aapne
   
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